Three Shot-O Jhalliya-O Foolish One! (Shivika --Upd: August 13th-Pg 8)

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Larae

@Larae

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

So erm, I was reading along calmly until the third paragraph when he jumps off the 3rd floor!!😲 The crazy f**ker! omg believe it or not I can actually picture him doing this in the show😆

Would love a part 2

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Supriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Heyyy you're back I always love reading your stories and this one was no different.. I have been waiting for you to post a story or an analysis, anything for So long now.. I'm so happy to see you writing on this forum again and I lobed this story.. Absolutely loved it.. It was so heartbreakingly beautiful.. Would love to read a second part of this if you decide to post it

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Supriya

@maaneet_4ever95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Onyx.
So erm, I was reading along calmly until the third paragraph when he jumps off the 3rd floor!!😲 The crazy f**ker! omg believe it or not I can actually picture him doing this in the show😆
Would love a part 2

Same!! My heart literally jumped out of my chest when he jumped honestly I can see him doing this kind of stunt in the show too that's just his kind of crazy

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Mummyoftwo2012

@Mummyoftwo2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Wow. Wonderful os and brilliant writing.
Thank u for this work.
Amazing.
I hope there will be one more part to this

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travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

My girl is back and I love it :)

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swaram

@swaram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Oh this was amazing. The way you described you so beautifully described Shivaay's inner turmoil manifesting itself as the raging storm outside. Wonderful.👏👏👏

Of course I need a Part2!!!