Three Shot-O Jhalliya-O Foolish One! (Shivika --Upd: August 13th-Pg 8) - Page 4

uff i had a mini heart attack when i read that Shivay jumped from the window.
u have written an awesome depiction of Bullay shas poetry

Beautiful just beautiful! Wish IF had a "love" button!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Absolutely Brillant..The One-Shot Gave Me Goosebumps Literally..👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Wow. Just wow. Main kya bolu. I'm speechless. So brilliantly written.

And I'd love a part 2.

There are two types of effects that any piece of art can have on you. One sends you into a frenzy of words may be appreciative may be critical. The other one leaves you dumb founded.You wrote so well that you made me forget the show. Your Shivay and Om took a life of their own.

This is juxtaposition at its best!!! Just beautiful!!
Please continue... as only you can do justice to these two stubborn mules!!

OMG..You just created Superman Singh Oberoi.

Jhalliya ve Jhalliya ve Jhalliya ve Jhalliya ve-

Oh my I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU HAVE WRITTEN ON THIS SONG 😆 I have been listening to it all day and I played it at work and have literally been mumbling the song that it has irritated more than a few people

So when I saw your title- I sang it instead of reading it 😆 I had no idea that you had actually constructed this beautiful fiction on the song itself and my my was I ecstatic to know that you had!

A beautiful beautiful story- really well written, you could feel the angst and I don't know how you manage to create a sense of urgency and tension within your writing but it honestly makes my heart pace faster!

Words are so meagre when describing my love for this- You really were hell bent on setting Shivaays heart aflame, I can't help smile a sad smile.

My favourite part of the song is

"ratiyaan jagaaye ishq
kamli banaaye ishq
sooli charhaaye ishq more piya

sab kucch lutaaye ishq
kuch na bachaaye ishq
apni manaaye ishq more piya"

I had waited to see if you had written upon them lines so maybe that is a good basis to request a part 2?

YOU ARE FABULOUS! Pulled at my heartstrings and made me fall in love with this piece! Absolutely completely and utterly amazing!

Love Sam 😳

Absolutely raw, seething, stormy, passionate OS... the rain... and the swirling storm... with the stillness of Shivaay said it all. he was waiting for a sign... a hint.. and then he was off like a shot uncaring off the fall from the window...