Three Shot-O Jhalliya-O Foolish One! (Shivika --Upd: August 13th-Pg 8)

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Nirmala

@nim_var

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Navin, another brilliant update on the 2 babus or should I say the underdogs of the Oberoi family. The bond, the pain, the silent support, the unshed tears between them could be felt. The preparations for the wedding where one was heading to the altar like it was her funeral pyre, both burning in the fires of their own private hell... the tie that held them would be broken by this marriage.

Now waiting for the next part. 😃

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Aparna

@Apu_915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Amazing Piece of Work!!!

The way you portrayed the two girls & their pain~ Beautifully Written👏

Waiting for the nxt😊

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Ikr...so happy to read everything on this make believe world of shivika ...sometimes at d expense of my very real life ...lol...n u just do it so beautifully i hv no regrets at all:-)))...so painfuly beautiful...

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Piya

@Piya1199

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

I really felt like crying while reading this

U have depicted each and every scene do beautifully

Pls update soon😭

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Divya_18

@Divya_18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Loved this chapter. Liked the bonding between anni nd gauri. Waiting for the final part and can see shivika Milan.

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DisneyDreamer

@DisneyDreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Loved your description. Just squeezed my heart out.

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

OH MY GOD UPDATE UPDATE THIS IS TOO PAINFUL

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

YOU weave magic with your words. Seriously. I wish I was half as good so I could word how haunting and yet beautiful your work is. There is so much depth and emotions that I feel myself experiencing them.

I have read as many of your work I could get my hands on, not being able to comment on each one of them as I should have. But every piece you've written has left me in awe of your talent to create such masterpieces. So please know that even if you don't see me commenting as often, and I apologize for that, you'll always always have a very awestruck reader in me. Not only do you have the flair of creating beautiful stories with so much profoundness but your insight into certain aspects of the show is equally amazing.

Love reading everything you write. (On a side note: Do you do PMs?)

So I wonder if we can leave mindless comments to get to page 16 ASAP. Hmm... maybe.

-Nikki