First Time - Rikara drabble 10/8

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

i no longer wish to have this story posted in here.

thank you.

Edited by smileyallora - 8 years ago

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NESRIA

@NESRIA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

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lovely plz update soon

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Smiley 🤗

Thanku so much for this khidkitod os

This is a beautiful and apt way to clear om's misunderstanding.. And without any help or pressure Gauri take interest to continue her education.

Why.. Why cv's can't show like this way.. I want to email this story to cv's.. They needs to know there is other ways to clear mu. They needs to learn from you..

This is too perfect smiley. Please write more and more rikara stories 😊

Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago

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aichaab

@aichaab

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

nice piece, hope you will continue

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Jesal

@LordLuminous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

What people probably wanted for Om when he would learn the truth. Thanks Smiley! Lovely fic.

Update your other fic soon please, eagerly waiting.

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully written... If only our writer sahiba could write a fraction of what you've written I would have been happy... Why did they get Gauri's mom in the mansion if not for truth... Beats me... This is exactly how Om should have reacted but alas...

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sindukrishna

@sindukrishna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Superb. Why cvs won't give this kind of scenes between omkara n gouri.

Loved it

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Brilliant. Loved it smileyyy di.

Pls update sooon.

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

how beautifully u have linked the presence of gauri's mom and the situation where om described about gauri's positives to his mom.. kaash cv's had such thinking and cleared the misunderstanding in this simple way rather than the stupid way they used..

beautiful piece of writing.. loved it.. keep writing more..