RiKara OS - Unforsaken #3 of Unforgiven series

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Aww...i loved it totally...you described their emotions beautifully dear..and their convo..it was superb👏superb dialogues..you made me cry😭

Two broken souls trying to find solace in each others...lovely

And plz we want happy ending plz

Thanks for the pm

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Shrishti.

@Shrishti.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Loved it dear. Brilliantly written again.

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Dear Sakura,

Wow just now read this series "Unforgiven"," Unforgotten ","Unforsaken". Well expressed each one of the feeling starting from Om regretting his words which he had told Ri. Redeeming himself by giving himself punishment. Then Ri still unable to forget Om and still living in her own world with Om in it. But in dream also he doesn't want to stay with her. But the final series can't be described as both still dont know wat to do. Om scared of rejection again anf Ri doesn't know wat Om wants. But both know that only they can give solace to each other. Finally have been in each others arms. Dont know wat destines waits for them. But being with each other they have some hope within themselves.

The CV's have rushed their story and moving fast. They make us disappointed. But one thing is sure Ri is not ready to give up her self respect though she worships n adores Om.

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Sakura 🤗... how pretty is this... just how delicately pretty... issues stay even the past lingers cause snapping of fingers done make relations work thankfully... in fact they demand a lot of time n efforts... but at least not all loves lost...i love that we have unspoken emotions ruling large asGauri realises Omkaras presence even without seeing him n he knowing just about how to convince her about attending shivika wedding even as he keeps away... sometimes just letting your loved one be is seriously required.. n thats what i love here... Omkara doesnt try bulldozing Gauri into accepting him rather respects her decisions n his fate. But then when the moment arises of them coming back together he also doesn't act passive. Thank you for such subtleties... speak volumes about the fact that though the strings of fate have withered .. they've not snapped off entirely...i see hope n light .. n i love that... Thanks for such a matured take on RiKara.. you n the other writers on the forum make me realise that I've not invested on the wrong couple...thanks once more

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Kripa Shankar

@silver_dustXX

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Dear Sakura,

Read all the three OS and I think this was much needed. Yes, Omkara needed to have suffered for what he had done with gauri, and that was only rightful. His pain, Oh to the sadist in me was filled with pleasure due to. I am glad he wanted to punish him.

Well, he treated her like shit. But then, she went back to him. There was no turning back, Gauri Kumari Sharma loved omkara with all her heart but the last line broke me a little, he is yours both in dream and reality Gauri. has always been.

Thanks to Gauri's Mom, God bless her he came back. He wanted Gauri to visit Anika on her wedding, so Om made sure she did. Never came in front of her, but he always remained her courage, he never failed to become her support, he is remorseful. Gauri, does not leave Om to complete his sentence at all😆 The last paragraph was beyond beautiful! Thank you so much for this gem!

love,

Kripa

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