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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Z.A.A
Love it, Faye! It's absolutely brilliant.
Can't wait to read the next part.

Thanks Z! I hope to complete it soon.

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shabana0786
Lovely & emotional on Omkaras view..
Part 2 is a "must read" now..

Hi Shabana! Hearing from you for the first time. It's lovely!

I'm glad you liked this.

Will post the next part soon.

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Faye, You are back. This is brilliant. I actually hoped that CV could have also show something like this... Please update the 2nd part soon.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Awesome

Looking forward to reqd next part

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Faye🤗you are back...i am so happy

This is brilliant.. awesome dear..

Loved it.. i wish we get this type of situation on show..but anyways..we get it not on tv but here😆

Thank you for this..update next part asap

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Faye .. deep this is.. I somehow don't mind Omkara literally wallowing in pain.. I know I won't get such a realisation in the show but I loved this one .. n you nearly made me feel bad for him too .. just gonna take this as one phase of RiKaras love story.. n there's a lot more waiting in the next part .. :).. thanks for such an exploration of Omkaras guilt n pain..

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

so compact and crisp! your piece is a beauty!

i never knew the sadistic side of me until i desperately wanted a guiltykara for all the hurt inflicted on poor gauri! omkara has to fight for redemption and earn it! sadly the cvs butchered all my hopes and dreams.. hence i come to seek comfort in IF !😭😛

please please please do continue!

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Anathema

@SRKisLove

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Wow! Another amazing piece!!! 👏

I so wanted to see something similar in the serial. Khair, jo tv pe nahi, woh sapne Faye is fulfilling here.

Thank you so much for this!

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Mehnaz

@DeewaniMastaani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Loved the way you have beautifully expessed Om's realization of his mistakes and melancholy. And specially Shivaay and Rudra's anger towards him was perfect. Really. Keenly waiting for the next part's update. 😊