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Roaiba

@roaiba

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Fayeee! Thanks so much for the pm 😊 This is awesome even though it seriously hurts my heart 😔 Sure do post the next part, will be eagerly waiting for it 😳

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I love love it..!! Redemption has to be something like this.. even if writers can't manage a piece as perfect as what you have penned down, half of this would be worth watching.. sigh..!! they grow logic on mars..!!

Oh wow.. the things which go missing when Gauri goes missing, her tinkling sound, vibrant colours, her glucose chai, constant chatter.. He now knows what held him through that miserable depressive phase of him while he was almost drowing in his mother's problems. He had to realized this and he had to realize it hard.. I have always loved the idea of protective shivaay on Gauri siding her more than his brothers.. ShivRi are brother-sis goals and i love it.. !!

Faye.. three cheers for this amazing piece.!!🤗

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Brilliant update dear
thanks alot for pm...

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MarriedLove
Really good

Hiya! Would love to know your name!

Thank you for liking this. The second part is just a little incomplete. Stay tuned!

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar...
loved it totally

I'm glad you loved this, Ayushi! Even though this doesn't have a happy ending.

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par0ma

@par0ma

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Stunning Faye, this was very moving. I loved the Shivri scene in today's episode and your Shivaay fits right into that narrative. I've been so down on Rikara after the shameful and shoddy treatment of their central MU that I've given up on the show as far as the couple is concerned. I'm going to have to find my Rikara fix in Genie and your stories. Thanks for continuing to mine your angst in this story.

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Its so nice faye...really amazing one...waiting for the next part...

Thank you, babe. I'll post the next part soon. Hopefully tomorrow.

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
Simply brilliant portrayal Faye... giving u a hug for writing this one...I would have missed it coz u didn't pm me, please do pm me when u can bae...

*hugs you back*

thank you for the very kind words, babe.

sorry!! I just logged off after posting, had network issues. then came back after almost a day. hence couldn't send pms until much later!

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sara1990
Faye, You are back. This is brilliant. I actually hoped that CV could have also show something like this... Please update the 2nd part soon.

Hello Sara! It's good hearing from you too. Thank you.

Kya kya socha tha humne par mila kya?? 5 minute me mu gone.

but meh, let it be.

I'll post the next part soon.

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: rikara94
Faye🤗you are back...i am so happy
This is brilliant.. awesome dear..
Loved it.. i wish we get this type of situation on show..but anyways..we get it not on tv but here😆
Thank you for this..update next part asap

Your jhappi 🤗

me too happy to see you, all the time.

Aise situations to milenge hi nahi. Gulneet kabhi OM ke baahar nahi jaayenge.

thank you for the love, will update soon.