TS-The Rise & The Fall Of The Bleeding Beast*Completed Pg5- 12/08

mirnalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

It's really good.

Please continue ⭐️

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome update Anniii 🤗

you portrayed wat all of us wanted to see

so many MU had happened between them... each time shivaay had hurt her so much and she had forgiven him so easily...Everything was according to his wish... He forcefully married her...it was his wish and again he wants to correct his mistake.. so he arranged another marriage as a surprise... for Godsake it was her marriage also so he should have asked her... it was like he decided something and it should happen that way...

first shivaay should understand in a relationship the opinion of both the partners is needed...

you portrayed it beautifully Anniii and you should definitely continue this

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

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Amazing OS Anni

This is masterpiece!!!

Loved it totally!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It depend on you if you want to continue it or not...

Edited by NarbhiForever.. - 8 years ago

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vriddhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

hey!!
plz continue soon... it's amazing... I really liked it... I wanted to see annika like this... strong and fierce and pointing his mistakes and making him realize that sometimes u do need words to express.. to speak ur heart out... to converse and to tell them how much u care, u love, u understand ...
eagerly waiting for another update

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Meghma11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Plss continue plss i was waiting so long to read something like this.

This is just outstanding !!

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S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

This was awsome

Penned so nicely, beautifully portrayed their pain

Please pleases do continue as far as you can, its superb

Love it truly

Keep writing

Much love!!

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Eshita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

It was brilliantly outstanding.

Please do continue this story😊

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--geny--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This was wow Anni!!! Marvelous writing... will read again...just perfectly put all the angsty &intensity of shivika...bravo!

loved this too much

"Kaunsa Haq...yeh Haq jisse aap mujhe dard pahunchaate hain? Yeh Haq Jisse Aap har baar mujhe tadpa the hain...Yeh Haq Jisse Aap Mujhe Todte Hain. Kaunsa Haq Shivaay. Yeh Haq Mere Saath Badtameezi Karne Ka Haq...!"
Her every word was a slap across his face. Each word broke his heart a million times.

I want second part too... how did they sort out?PLEASE...? Will be waiting ..k

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Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

It's really lovely...you portrait their emotions beautifully...
Please continue this...waiting eagerly for next part... Tnq so much for superrr se uparrr wala update...

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