Darmiyaan - A Shivika Short Story [Chapter 5 - Page 23] *18/8*

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Seema84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Wow beautiful update ... now unknowingly they have attracted to each other... n top of that Omkara's underlined word uska dil kamzor hai Tod mat dena ,,,, shivaay z blank that moment he doesn't get the accurate meaning of the word... eagerly waiting for the next update try to update soon n please don't feel that ur disturbing me by giving pm, because I m desperately waiting for the updates...

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

wow that indeed is an amazing update rhea

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

wow so nice yupiee

loved it

please do continue

bye sumi

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Aparna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Lovely Update!!!

I guess their mothers were talking abt their rishta only...

ShivOmRu convo was cute...

Post Soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Tani.88
I am so loving this billu and billi..
Awesome story..

Thank you! 🤗

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
awesome update

Thank youu. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome update yar...
Totally loved it...
so shivaay is too much noticing about Annika
is tia his girlfriend?

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. 😳

Tia is Shivaay's ex who cheated on him leaving him heartbroken. 💔

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Rainzz
Awesome ⭐️
I loved the dialogue- "Uska dil kamzor hai, tod mat dena."❤️

Shivaay couldn't understand the underlying meaning here as he is unaware about her heart condition.

Thank you. ❤️ Yes, Shivaay is completely unaware of the fact.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Seema84
Wow beautiful update ... now unknowingly they have attracted to each other... n top of that Omkara's underlined word uska dil kamzor hai Tod mat dena ,,,, shivaay z blank that moment he doesn't get the accurate meaning of the word... eagerly waiting for the next update try to update soon n please don't feel that ur disturbing me by giving pm, because I m desperately waiting for the updates...

Thank you so much, Seema. 🤗 Will be updating soon. 😆😉

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Sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

this gives me love breakup zindagi feels, in a good way, this storyline does suit Shivika, Om eluded to her heart being weak, I bet both familes are trying to get them together, but neither listened to their mothers fully.