Completed: ShivKara TS ft. Ofamily - Facing the Demons (Note pg10) )

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Eshita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow that was quite an outburst from Om. It's quite interesting.

Please continue soon😳

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sara1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Interesting take. Please update the second part as well. Oberoi's especially Shivaay need to know about what Pinky said to Gauri.

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prabhata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice. Waiting for next part

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piyali_rockstar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Thank you so much for this brilliant writing. This is how it should be in the show too. I really want this to happen. Logical while every character stays true to their triats. No one other than Om can show shivaay the reality which he refuses to see. Bang on. Waiting eagerly for the part 2.

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Amazing start dear!!

Loving this!!!

I so want this to happen in show.

Thanks for writing this..

It was awesome..

Cannot wait for second part

Update soon..

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GoodGoneWrong

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Gurveen
That was an interesting one
Couldn't believe Omkara would be the one who will stand against pinky and maybe show a mirror to Shivay too
But please don't misunderstanding between them
Update next part soon

thanks Gurveen. actually IMO, Omkara is the only one who can correct Shivaays erroneous ways. Shiva's respects his opinion and treats him as an almost equal.

and no I don't think this will create any long term misunderstanding between them. If anything they will be closer than ever.

thanks for commenting. next update is written but I am not one hundred percent happy with it. Hopefully will be able to get it ready today.