RiKara SS - Amor Intermissus part 08 updated Pg 32 (30/07) Complete - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

*putting aside my pillow which was squeezed to death reading*
This was incredible. I was smiling like an idiot throughout the update. I guess it was the magic of ur writing about our Rikara that made me smile.

Ufff his romantic avatar made me blush too 😳 😳 I love this side of om (don't know when we will get to see it on tv) anika and soumya's entries were 😆 poor Rikara couldn't eat but decided to go out with getting me excited too. But again there is shivaay to interrupt 😒 like there is whole family present. But no worries finally they found some alone time at night which was for sure bliss

I was exhausted and angry but when I saw ur pm without a second thought I opened it and read which undoubtedly made my mood all dreamy and happy.

Thank u soo much for doing this magic on me. Will wait to get bewitched again. Continue sooonnnishhh


Sumaiya! 🤗

First off, take a tight hug from me for feeling exhausted and angry before... I hope you feel better now. I am super glad I was able to help you feel better, however fleetingly.

Very happy you liked the Golgappa short... I love RiKara, I love to write about them and I love seeing them in love. I guess all the positive feelings behind this are just getting transmitted through the words.

Thanks for reading and commenting, you guys are the ones who do your magic on me! I will be waiting to see if I can bewitch you again!

Stay tuned for an update soon!

p.s. You can always coem to me for a hug, a chat or some fighting words... I'm here if you need to talk 😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

awww rikara going out is not possible...
sab khabab mein haddi bangayi


Aparna... thanks for taking the time to comment!

I'm glad you liked the Golgappa short...

The next update should be out soon... so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: pt311288

wow lovey dovey os series
phle rudy then family
haye aisa om kab milega 😳


Prinku yaar... thanks for the comment!

I'm glad you liked the series...

Aisa Omki jald hi milega Prinku... shayad... pata nahin GulNeet ke khurafati dimaags mein kya kya chal raha hai?

Anways, jald hi update karoongi... padhte rahiye!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: rikara94

Oh genie 🤗this is awesome..

Very romantic update and this made me blush☺️
Pehle rudra and then aaj soumya and anika became kabab mein haddhi.. what happened to the whole family even shivaye bhi hadhi bna🤣unki date spoil krdi
What the hell with pinki aunty..bechari ko invitation dene ko bhej diya.. servent ko bhi bol skti thi..poor gauti kuch khaya bhi nahi tha... but having date in kitchen was also good han😳
Thanks for the pm update soon


Jyoti yaar... thanks for the lovely comment!

I'm glad you liked the Golgappa short! Lo main kya dekh rahi hoon? Maine shot mein golgappe likhe aur Gauri ki mom aaj show pe golgappe le kar aa gayi!

Waise whole family has taken kabab mein haddi ka theka... Pinky ko to chhod hi do... uska kuch nahin hone waala. Baaki sab ko jab pata chalega to zor ka jhatka zaroor lagega and we'll be there to see it.

There should be an update coming your way soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Its so nice dear...so cute update...really i loved it to the core...small beautiful moments and caribg between them...and whole family didnt know anything about the love birds...waiting for the next one...


Thanks for the lovely, lovely comment Aarathi!

I'm glad you liked the second short...

An update should be coming your way soon... so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

aww so sweet OMie dera you are adorable

loved it
hehe gol gappe is awesome i tell you
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi


Sumi... 🤗

Thanks for taking the time to write such a lovely comment!

I'm glad you're liking the series so far...

Golgappa shot likhne ke baad mujhe bhi craving ho gayi hai... and I don't have everything to make golgappas at home now. 😭

Anyways, mere dukh to main start na hi karoon to acha hai.

The next update should be here soon... so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

The most cutest update made by you genie ... really felt relaxed reading both parts...

The whole family is always breaking in through their moments, want to See them being teased..


Shraddha! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment dude...

I'm glad you're enjoying the short series. Poori Oberoi family kabab mein haddi bani phir rahi hai. There will be teasing but who will be doing it? That's the secret!

Read on to find out more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sara1990

Poor Rikara. All they want was to spend some time together. And the family member unwilling being a disturbance to them. I find Pinky was a bit cruel to Gauri. Poor Gauri. But lastly they made up their "date" in the kitchen eating late dinner. The last scene where Om carried her up was so romantic. Could you include in the next update if possible that the Oberois actually sense that Rikara wants to spend time together and they are teasing them by making them busy or something???


Sara... thanks for taking the time to write such a lovely comment!

I'm glad you're liking the series so far.

RiKara are so much fun to write... Pinky to humesha se hai hi cruel... She doesn't respect anyone who doesn't have money. To saaf hai ki she's never going to treat Gauri with care or respect.

Maybe their late night date was better than the one they would've had had they gone out.

I've already written out the next couple of chapters but I'll try and include a slightly altered version of what you asked for in the last chapter of this extended 5S series!

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Good morning genie 🤗 believe I have read this part from the begjning to the end for four times ... I am loving this ... Just stuck up with some work ... Will comment by the afternoon ... Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: writergenie17



Sumaiya!🤗

First off, take a tight hug from me for feeling exhausted and angry before... I hope you feel better now. I am super glad I was able to help you feel better, however fleetingly.

Very happy you liked the Golgappa short... I love RiKara, I love to write about them and I love seeing them in love. I guess all the positive feelings behind this are just getting transmitted through the words.

Thanks for reading and commenting, you guys are the ones who do your magic on me! I will be waiting to see if I can bewitch you again!

Stay tuned for an update soon!

p.s. You can always coem to me for a hug, a chat or some fighting words... I'm here if you need to talk😃




Omg that was sooo sweet 😳 tighttt hug back 🤗 🤗
Can't wait for next part of both lost chances and amor intermissus

That was sooo sweet of u dear. It Touched my heart literally 😭 😊 😳
I've pm'd u haven't replied.. 😒

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