RiKara SS - Amor Intermissus part 08 updated Pg 32 (30/07) Complete

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sara1990
Rudy bangayi Rikara's Khabab mein hatti. Haha. Poor Rudy. Waiting for the next one.

Thanks for taking the time to comment Sara...

I'm glad you liked the short trial at writing lighthearted fluff after immersing myself in some heavy stuff for my other stories.

Rudy ka to mission hi hai kabab mein haddi banna... That's what younger brothers are for!

There should be an update coming your way soon... so stay tuned!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Wonderful

Thanks a lot Divi...

I'm glad you liked the short.

Stay tuned for more soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lovesick23
Hehe rudy always kabab meh haddi
But that was cuteee

Thanks for taking the time to comment friend!

Rudra ka to job description hi kabab mein haddi hai... So what else to expect from the youngest OBro?

Gald you liked the first part, stay tuned for more to come...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MyLoveisMyLIFE
awesome dear
loved it

Thanks for taking the time to comment luv...

I'm glad you liked the first part.

Stay tuned for more to come soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it yar...
awww rikara romance is on full mode
Rudy tho gaya

Thanks for the lovely comment Aparna!

I'm very glad you liked the first part of the short...

RiKara romance ki raah dekhte dekhte meri aankhen thak gayi... So I decided to write some light hearted fluff myself as a break from writing some heavy dramatic stuff for the other stories. And here's the result of that.

There should be an update coming your way soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: alinaza
I LOVED IT!!! These days we are so deprived of Rikara romance... wait let me phrase this, since we have never gotten any mutual happy consensual true Rikara romance since the start lol, stories like this make me so incredibly happy!
I loved it, it was so great and cute and sweet! Who knew Omkie could be so assertive in his attentions. Love, love, love Rudy! He is so adorable and adds such fun whenever he enters a chapter:)

I hope maybe you will continue this one *puss in boots eyes at you* ?!

Awww... Thank you for such a lovely comment! I am so happy you liked reading this short.

Having been a DBO follower since the beginning of the show, I've been waiting for RiKara for a looong time now. Abhi bhi sirf starting trouble hi dikh raha hai... but at least they're broaching the subject on the show now! Yay for canon fluff soon!

But yeah, having waited for RiKara for a long time, I knew it was time to just write some of my own... and I needed a break from dramatic storylines for a bit.

Imo, Omki is an intense and very private person who doesn't really open up with everyone. But with the person he chooses to open himself up to, he would be very much himself, very honest about his emotions and everything. And Om won't accept Gauri as his wife unless he's ready to open himself up to her. I believe my headcanon Omkara is a very private but assertive and passionate person, who's completely committed to their relationship.

No need for Puss in Boots eyes... but I wouldn't say no to a shot of Leche! 😆 Stay tuned for more coming your way soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Naina280599
This was so beautiful
I loved it. Rikara are just so amazing!! I really loved Rudy's entry too. He's so cute.
Waiting for the next shot.
Much love 🤗

Naina 🤗

Thanks for such a lovely comment!

I'm glad you loved the first part of this short.

RiKara is always fun to write and writing fluff after a long time was awesome! And its always fun to write Rudy baby...

The next shot should be on its way to you soon... so stay tuned!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome

Thank you! 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: rikara94
Amazing update dear.. loved it
Romantic rikara and their romantic moments... waise gauri mentioned something about last night.. kya hua tha last night?
Hope yoy clear it in next part..
Poor rudy...gya kam se..kbab mein hadhi jo bna
Plz update next part asap and thank you for the pm

Jyoti 🤗

Thanks for the lovely, lovely comment yaar...

I'm very glad you enjoyed this li'l short.

When you say Gauri mentioned last night, do you mean her saying 'kal ki baatein'?

She was talking about kal as in the past... she wants him to forget their rough past and move on. Hope that cleared some things for you.

There should be an update coming your way soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I'm reading enjoying and wanting more although the I can't write to express that feeling to my hearts content. Studies are calling will be back as soon as I get time...till then please forgive me!
Really loved this!

Sakura dear... you've really gotta stop apologizing.

I'm glad you took the time to read this li'l short... hope it gave you a nice break from the monotony of your studies. I'm glad to have a line from you the same as a whole essay... that you liked my work and enjoyed it matters more to me than having a long comment from you... not to say I don't enjoy a long comment... I do, I really, really do.

There should be an update coming soon... I will PM you, read at your leisure.

All the best for your studies!