RiKara SS - Amor Intermissus part 08 updated Pg 32 (30/07) Complete

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing update dear.. loved it

Romantic rikara and their romantic moments... waise gauri mentioned something about last night.. kya hua tha last night?

Hope yoy clear it in next part..

Poor rudy...gya kam se..kbab mein hadhi jo bna

Plz update next part asap and thank you for the pm

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

I'm reading enjoying and wanting more although the I can't write to express that feeling to my hearts content. Studies are calling will be back as soon as I get time...till then please forgive me!

Really loved this!

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey genie 🤗

Total justification to your name is what you do ... Fulfill wishes and make people happy...

I am glad that you are writing on such a stress free plotline ... Happy Wife Ri Husband Kara are a dreamlike relief

Both being happy in each others imperfections ...

First of all thanks a ton for sketching Artist Kara ... It has been a long long time seeing him work ... The way you introduced Om and his boredom was so simple and sweet ... Moments seem taxing him without Gauri.. The desiring ailment of new found love... The way she excitedly goes to see him is so lovable and believable because such moments do happen ... The way he cannot keep his hands of her wanting to memorize her like a prose ... The way she anchors him emotionally ... These two are made for each other Relationship Goals!

I am happy knowing that their relationship is mature and they know how to handle it ... Not wanting to trouble anybody else and sorting out issues on their own ... They are strong bonded 👏

Their gentle abduction of lips into not doing any kind of talking was a delight to read ... So easy going and smooth ... Comfortable and relaxed ... They are so much in love

Entrapped and Enchanted! Hats off to you for keeping the essence of RiKara intact ... Their level of understanding to be mature and their approach to the relationship very comfortable ... And at last we have Dumbbell Oberoi 😎 with his usual flair and flavor ... His entering in the studio ... Made me remember some good old IB days (Remember the face pack scene!) Little does he idea about what's brewing between Mr. & Mrs. Sufi kara 😉 ... If Rudy was getting bored ... I very well know Om must have planned to bore him in the ocean floor now 😆 ... God save him ... He really does not know that disturbing a Possessive Ri & Romantic Kara is equal to sin ... GHOR PAAP 😆 I hope his bulbul bhabhi saves him ...

This is relatable kind of writing for me genie ... Do continue soon

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Hello Gen! After a long time! Read this when stuck in a train during heavy rain! (accidentally clicked and then the page wouldn't load completely due to bad network, I actually wanted to shake my fist at it!) The beautiful mausam and then uparse your beautiful writing! Ufff!!!!

Girl, you good!!! This was such a good read! ArtistKara is a dreeeaaammm and Gauri gets to live him. *I don't know what I'm saying, please excuse me*

The level of physical comfort between them makes me go aaawww!! And she's not shy at all and he doesn't have any inhibitions before pulling her away into sensuousness. Yet they remain SO intense! An impatient Omkara is a treat to read and you put in the specs!

I can't wait to read the next part.

Thank you for the pm!

I totally understand that feeling though. There are people here who have thrown many invisible things at me just because I keep boring them with my silly OS instead of updating Woh Humsafar Tha and Khamoshiyan! *sailing in the same boat*

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This os was really much needed one. Thank u sooo much for writing this dear 🤗

First I loved how u connected to the show from start to end and didn't wrote a complete different one. I liked how brought soumya back and showed progression in shivika' relation.

Reading Rikara was a bliss. You write their scenes so perfectly that somehow I dream to write like that one day

Rudy baby kabab mai haddi bangaya and he isn't even aware of it. No worries picture abhi Baki hai 😉

I'm glad that u asked suggestions though it would tough to write with everyone's wishes I would say that's the spirit girl 🤗 here my prompt I would love to read some jealous ri and chulkara scene which all would waiting to read

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Genie.. long time🤗

This is such a relief in this hard times.. once again an awesome piece of os with a nice romantic and a feel good flow.. I loved Om ri s convo and their passionate sensual moments were beautiful. Naughty omie is something we all are yearning and I loved how ri is not shy but instead innocent passionate.. best was Rudy s untimely timing.. poor Rudy incurs the wrath of omie shomkie😆. Aise scenes kaash show mein bhi dekhe ko milthe.. keep coming up with such nice writing and we will be delighted 😊

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Wow wonderful dear...superb one...waiting for next...

Thanks for the lovely comment Aarathi!

I'm glad you liked the first part dearie...

The second part of this should be coming your way soon... so stay tuned!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
oh my poor rudy
hehe
loved it
shivika as newlywed are amazing to imagine and poor rudy eyes.
haha totally in love with this part
please do continue
bye sumi

Thanks for taking the time to write such a lovely comment Sumi... you're so sweet! 😃

I'm glad you liked the first part of this 3S. ShivIka as newlyweds is really fun to imagine... poor Rudy uske donon bhai uska turn by turn OMM kar rahe hain.

Hope you like the second part too, that should be coming up soon... so stay tuned!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Shrishti.
This is abosolutely wonderful. Just loved it.
Shivika tho. 😆
It's so sweet.
Rudra ki toh oh my mata hone wali hai. 😆

Shrishti 🤗

Welcome to IF and to the newly merged and super awesome IB forum! Hope you have a lot of fun with us here...

Thanks for taking the time to comment... I'm very glad you liked this first part.

ShivIka se aur kya expectation rakhi jaa sakti hai? And Rudy ka to isi hafte do aur baar OMM ho chuka... bechaara.

There should be the second chapter coming your way soon... so stay tuned!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Superb shot
Love to ready some lovey dovey moments
Rikara are going romantic along with shivika
Rudy is there to add the comic element too
Perfect mixture
For a light hearted drama

Thanks for the love Vrinda!

I'm so glad you guys liked this short of mine. After writing updates for LC and SIIC, which I'm still working on, I needed a break and wanted to write something lighthearted.

With the show finally starting on the RiKara relationship properly, I wanted to seize the opportunity to have some fluffy RiKara... becoz come on... who doesn't love RiKara fluff?

Anyways, thank you for reading and commenting, there should be the second part of this coming your way soon!