RiKara OS - CHURA LIYA - TEASER

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola Guys 🤗
Pooru aapko RiKara Compositions ke baare mein tease karne se baaz nahi aaege ... 😆
It is just my way of assuring myself that I will post my compositions in the forum after Completing every punctuation of them! Otherwise I have more than half a dozen OS's saved in my laptop drive 😆 ... Bear with me 😆
So coming to the point ... I again saw zeenat aman with the guitar aur mere dimaag ke ghode daudne lage 🤣
Here I present to you a plotline and characterization off the CVS and writers radar ... With RiKara being happily in love being a cetirus paribus!

'He knew she was innocent ... But realized now that she is not naive for sure ... Yearning is synonymous to his feeling of missing her ... Even when she was right in front of his eyes... He was envious to even the air that surrounded her ... Love as a concept for him was vague and unrealistic ... Suiting only for his art ... But now here he was awaiting the gorgeous her with all his dopamine levels gone silly ...'

I present to you Romantic Kara and Possesive Ri ... In the most authentic Pooru ishtyle ...

About the story... Priyanka, Gauri, Bhavya and Mallika are college mates and a gang of the best of friends ... Now in their final year... Being close to his sister Om has known all her friends from day one ... Has been meeting them since the Oberoi's had arranged a freshers party ... He has known Gauri properly for two years now ... Himself did he not relaize that they were opposites and attraction was more of a magnetic pull... She had a similar kind of condition ... She genuinely liked him as Om and not as Omkara Singh Oberoi ... After a simple 'In-his-Studio' confession ... They have managed to secretively romance for over six months! Both of them being private persons wanting to give each other space and time. Thinking about taking the relationship forward ... Omkara proposed marriage to Gauri when they were spending their quality 'We Time' ... She obviously said yes ... But yet again this is a secret ... She wants him to talk to their families ... He has planned to officially engage to her after she has given her convocation speech and recieves an appointment letter through campus placement ... which is going to take another two weeks of secret mancing after which ... She will be the official to-be- Mrs.SufiKara ...well well well ... That's a surprise for her!

Knowing their story and his plans ... Let's come to enjoy some RiKara moments when it is Priyanka's birthday celebration and the gang of girls decides to stay back in Oberoi Mansion for that night ... What's in store for the readers when she is admirable and he becomes irresistible ...

" Tum Mere Ho ... Tum Mere Ho
Aaj Phir Itna Wada Karke Jana
Chura Liya ..."


To know more ... STAY TUNED!
Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello pooru waiting for this will read once u update it
and ha would u write something like gauri obsessed with omkara
like behad's jenny😆 latter on one can get her treated u know i am lil sadist I love to read heart breaking love stories but prefer happy ending😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

hello pooru waiting for this will read once u update it
and ha would u write something like gauri obsessed with omkara
like behad's jenny😆 latter on one can get her treated u know i am lil sadist I love to read heart breaking love stories but prefer happy ending😃

Hey Pt 🤗 I have loved her obsession ... To write something like this thoda tedha sochna padega ... Will give it a try ... On the romantic front .. I am Kind of a 'distance brings two hearts closer' kind of person ... But Obsessive can be a good read 😳
Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm already dead with ur tease...pata nehi aage kya hoga..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I suddenly thought of Maya in beyhadh, but I know how cute will be possessive Ri in pooruish style...😆
And my dear bae...I'm yearning for a chap of ishq bulava... whenever I see a pm notification, I do pray in my mind that it should be of an update of ishq bulava...😳

Also,this name itself indicate that this one will be showing some stolen moments of them... NAUGHTY...like u pooru😉😃
Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I'm already dead with ur tease...pata nehi aage kya hoga..

Aage aage wahi hoga Jo manzure Poorva hoga 😉 thanks tasnim 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

I suddenly thought of Maya in beyhadh, but I know how cute will be possessive Ri in pooruish style...😆

And my dear bae...I'm yearning for a chap of ishq bulava... whenever I see a pm notification, I do pray in my mind that it should be of an update of ishq bulava...😳

Also,this name itself indicate that this one will be showing some stolen moments of them... NAUGHTY...like u pooru😉😃

Shradhha 🤗 about obsession I have not imagined Gauri to be such an extreme character ... Dekhte hain ... What my mind offers ... Will try and update ISHQ BULAVA soon ...
About CHURA LIYA yes ... This one is going to be a tale of stolen romantic moments ... Both of them have been in love with each other but always handled the relationship maturely and calmly ... As of now with both of them promising marriage to each other ... Let's see what is going to happen ... When they come under one roof for a night!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ahaan you back with another os
Not bad han..
She stay OM at that night..it means kuch sanskari aane wala hai🤣
Amazing concept dear..you are such an amazing writer..
Plz cntnue soon .. i want to know aage kya hoga.. bcoz title os very intersting and at end of the teaser you mentioned some of the lines of this song it seems like she is very possessive.. anyway update soon


Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko.nzar nahi churana sanam
Badal ke meri tum zindgaani. Tum kahin badal na jana sanam
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Ahaan you back with another os

Not bad han..
She stay OM at that night..it means kuch sanskari aane wala hai🤣
Amazing concept dear..you are such an amazing writer..
Plz cntnue soon .. i want to know aage kya hoga.. bcoz title os very intersting and at end of the teaser you mentioned some of the lines of this song it seems like she is very possessive.. anyway update soon


Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko.nzar nahi churana sanam
Badal ke meri tum zindgaani. Tum kahin badal na jana sanam

Jyoti 🤗
This one is going to be a curious case of RiKara in OM on an andheri raat 😆 ... Actually her staying in OM ...😉 about sanskari panti ... You know it better ☺️ losing in love ... We will see how romantic Kara is and how possessive Ri can be seeing everyone drool over Romantic Kara ...

CHURA LIYA ...
Dil ki dhadkano se ... Saans gawaane ka haq lekar ... Woh poochte hain ... Aakhir kya gunah kiya ...
Hum bhi toh bebas huye ... Thamti nabz ki wajah se ... Jaan bachaane ke khaatir hi toh ... Unhone humme khud hi se chura liya
#ORIGINAL 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah wah... poorva
Shayri mein bhi amazing ho

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