Shivika SS: Trouble In Paradise (Part 3 Updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Awesome storyline...
Shivaay has landed himself into a very big mess..
You write very beautifully..
I m even following ur heart vs mind ss which is as good as this one..
will be waiting for nxt update what will shivaay do now..??
Till then - gud wishes 2 u from my side..!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Oh, poor Shivaay! I really hope he tells Annika everything real soon and things get sorted. But this was an amazing chapter! The emotions were written about so beautifully. Looking forward to reading more :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
both t parts r awsm. love t concept.
shivaay did a huge mistake, lets c how he solve them
aur haa jaldi jaldi update karna
plz PM me when write nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Awesome update
Poor Shivika😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
poor anika her doubts are getting more vivid
she is bound to think like this when she has an example of tej and jhanvi
and this ragini is making worse situation
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: FawadHolic


Haha no, not yet, but I will make one right away, thanks for the prompt! ❤️



Looking forward to read more of your work.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Loved the update too. Indeed trouble is brewing in paradise. It feels so long to read a well written work. Thank you for sharing.❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
I am feeling so sorry for Anika.
After all the hell they have been through, Shivaay would be knowing her very well right.
He could sense her insecurities also?
Once this Ragini fisco is going to happen. Anika would be really turning into a durga.
Shivaay tell her the truth when there is still time.
Because if Anika found out about Ragini from any others vo tumhari tai tai phis kar dengi.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
oh god i am getting major michmichis
hate you nagini
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
I am hooked up with this Insanely interesting story ..
Awaiting the upcoming updates.

Brilliant writing with emotions of both Shivaay and Annika
I love how u gave proper reasons to Annikas insecurities and did not make it a obvious characteristic of a poor wife to a rich husband 👏

I love ur writing..
Please update sooner and if possible only then pm me 😊
I very rarely come to IF for Fiction reads and I do not wanna miss a bit of ur story.

Superb.

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