Shivika SS- Fhat the Wuck! NO! 12/07

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is something I had written long long back, but didnt find the courage/time to post it! 😆 however, the new news makes me feel like okay, should give it a try! So read and lemme know if I should continue or not! 😳

Hi guys! So idk why I just happened to recall something from ipkknd1 and as I see many thing in IB are slightly similar to Gul Khan's previous shows, so I thought why not give it a try? So I will write the Prologue and only the 1st Chapter is half done and you guys say whether I should continue or not. Yeah?


Prologue

'Shivaay... Shayad aapke liye ye chitthi aayi hain...' Anika came running to Shivaay who was busy checking his mails.

'Chitthi? You mean letter? Mujhe letter kaun bhejega? I have an email ID, letter kyu bheja hain?' Shivaay asked Anika, confused.

'Mujhe kya pata... Khol ke dekhiye, kisne bheja hain?' Anika said, rolling her eyes.

'Kaha mila?' Shivaay asked.

'Wo, main door ke bahar!' she said.

Shivaay took the letter from her and began opening it. Anika sat next to him on the couch to see what the letter had in it. But, the letter had no name it in, nowhere.

"Dear Shivaay,
Pichle saat saalon mein maine bohot koshish ki ye Zimmedari mein khud hi uthau, aur main uthati rahi... Lekin aaj, dil pe patthar rakhke ye letter tumhe bhej rahi hu... Main nahi chahti thi, ki tumhe in saab baare mein pata chale, lekin ab main majbur hu... Toh aaj, main Hum dono ki Zimmedari, jise maine aaj tak akele sambhala hain, usse tumhe de rahi hu. Shaam tak tumhare ghar chala jayega tumhari zimmedari! Please take care of it. Please!
With love..."

'Ye...um... Kisne bheja hain?' Anika was the first to speak after reading the letter.

'Kya isme koi naam likha hain? Nahi na? Toh mujhe kaise pata hoga Anika?' Shivaay replied, slightly annoyed.

Shivaay tried to force himself to remember what responsibility was the letter referring to, but no, he couldn't remember a thing, he never ran away from responsibilities, so why did the person write that only he/she took care of it till now? What was this all about?

'Konsi Zimmedari?' Shivaay kept on thinking, and Anika held his hands to calm him down.


DONE DONE DONE! If you like it, let me know and also, comment below what you think the responsibility is! 😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome concept yar...
I got it the responsibility is a baby heina...No no you said the seven years na...so it's a child like in ipkknd
I really dnt know wats with gul and adopted child
actually she always gives a ready made baby for the pairs...🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing concept dear..
Cannot wait to read more..
Waiting for update
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting update
I think it will be a kid
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hehehe
Awesome concept
Wonder what zimedari is it
Jo shaam tak aa jayega
SSO is gonna have a tough time now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing concept
I would love to read more

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