RiKara OS - GUZARISH Author's Note Pg - 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

Originally posted by: -Lemonade-

really nice

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Awesome pooru...so brilliant...in writing this plot...

Love all ur stories...do post it in ib forum...ok...

Originally posted by: shailajabanthia

It was damn superb yaar waiting for ur another os on rikara

Last wala funny tha🤣

Originally posted by: rikara94

Gud mrng behna🤗

Today i am very happy bcoz subah subah itna acha update mila meko

You know what this one of best os my osbaaz🤗

I appriciate your work poorva.. you are an amazing, superb , fantastic writer

Ab kya kahu aur.. i have no words to explain my feelings right now

Apne aap samajh lena my lovely sister

This track is intersting woh chulbul banke nahi gauri ban ke ayi OM mein

And gauri ki bonding sab ke sath woh bhi itni achi wali specially with dadi who gives her ishaqbaazi lessions

Banda guilty feel krta rha baar

And gauri serial ke jaise chup nahi rahi sari badhaas nikal di teekhi churi ne🤣

Omkara ko pyar hone lga gauri se

And i love this tume mujhe pyar hone lga hai.. and she said thoda thoda pyar krna chahti hoon😳

and at the he confessed sochna bhi mat biwi hai woh meri like rudy said in show😉

And again they get married

Perfect dialogue delivery poorva , i loved it

A big hug to you again🤗with lots of love bcoz khush kr ditta aaj tune

Bahut hi long update tha and agar cntnue krogi toh aur bhi acha lgega and i know jyada expect kar rhi hoon but fir bhi sochna is baare mein

and thanku for the pm nai toh ishqbaaz forum par hibreh jaati main toh🤣

Again Thanku for this awesome update

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Comment dekhke dil khush ho gaya re 😳

I love you jyoti 🤗

About part two sochti hoon

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

Too perfect

Gauri entering OM as Gauri

She won everyone's heart

Saved Jhanvi

Befriend Rudra n Anika

Even took care of Svetlana

I thought omkara might get jealous

With Rishab sending marriage proposal

Shivaay & Rudra convincing Gauri

But u had more awesome plan for them

Sara Tamasha main wedding mei hua

Svetlana out

Family shocked

Rikara marriage again

That too Omkara insisting on it

All in one package

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: priya_86

Lovely Poorva...beautiful

I loved the way how you described Lana..."as the slimmer version of Shrek"...🤣

Originally posted by: pt311288

loved it and please write 2nd part too

ye thoda kum sanskaari tha next part thoda sankaari likhna 😆

and do pm me 😉

Originally posted by: crazian

Poorva, such a well written piece of work🤗

As usual enjoyed every bit of it, and especially this part..

SOCHNA BHI MAT MR. OBEROI ... BIWI HAIN WOH MERI ... Om had gripped Tej's wrist.

Man, this was the best...sometime back I said in AT that I want him tell this loud and clear and now I am getting this

Loved how Om took his own steps to saving his marriage...

Good one poorva...