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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: shrenal11
Pooru-- as always such an amazing OS. I like this Gauri.. she is naive, innocent yet smart and intelligent. Rare combination which makes your Ri even more appealing 😳

Thank you so much kinza 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
lovely os dear
well written...

Thank you so much enthusiastic 😊

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Pooru .. my girl .. you're just the best.. what a spin you give to the stories .. one basic premise n ten different treatments .. super plot lines .. I love them. The whole ChulKara bit n the way Gauri maintains her distance n the best bit is that Omkara is an active participant in this story.. I love dabang girl Gauri.. n the way Omkara rushes with her for the pheras.. aweee.. he knows his family's worth.. I love the pace of your works yaa.. keeps me hooked.. lovely effort .. keep them coming .. n take care

Thank you for both awesome encouraging comments neha 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
last part was hilarious
hehe OM main sab saath main hi hota hai

Thank you sumi

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sara1990
The last one, the wedding sequence was funny😆

Thank you Sara

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

NOTE

Thank you so much guys for such an overwhelming response ... This composition has extracted the energy of six hours from me ... Thanks a ton for appreciating the effort 😊 I am really sorry for not replying properly to all the comments ... Please forgive me as I am really tired because of my schedule ... A special kampat wala thank you to all the silent readers who have spared time for this composition ... I say this one is one of my favorite ... So as we have worked and moved towards Omkara accepting gauri in matrimony ... Pate ki baat yeh poochni thhi ke part two likhu kya???

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
NOTE
Thank you so much guys for such an overwhelming response ... This composition has extracted the energy of six hours from me ... Thanks a ton for appreciating the effort 😊 I am really sorry for not replying properly to all the comments ... Please forgive me as I am really tired because of my schedule ... A special kampat wala thank you to all the silent readers who have spared time for this composition ... I say this one is one of my favorite ... So as we have worked and moved towards Omkara accepting gauri in matrimony ... Pate ki baat yeh poochni thhi ke part two likhu kya???

Something sanskari🤣

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Haa jyoti I will surely write something super se bhi upar sanskari 😉

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
NOTE
Thank you so much guys for such an overwhelming response ... This composition has extracted the energy of six hours from me ... Thanks a ton for appreciating the effort 😊 I am really sorry for not replying properly to all the comments ... Please forgive me as I am really tired because of my schedule ... A special kampat wala thank you to all the silent readers who have spared time for this composition ... I say this one is one of my favorite ... So as we have worked and moved towards Omkara accepting gauri in matrimony ... Pate ki baat yeh poochni thhi ke part two likhu kya???

YES wo bhi in CAPS

I am eager to read part 2