Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September| - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

DaddyKara ka memory loss..
OMG!!! ab kya hoga???
continue sooonish...


Haan daddykara ka memory loss. Ab confusionkara milega with more shocks coming up.
Yes I will continue 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Wow

Omkara wakes up
Has Amnesia

But why??
And he is a daddy too
Would love to read more
Update soon


Yeah it's amnesia. Well I can't tell u why but don't worry u will know it in upcoming updates He is daddykara now.
Inshallah will update tomorrow 😊
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
A/N you all must have noticed that i replied to all your previous comments on this story. I do it rarely but i replied to all your comments because i noticed that when i read a writter story and comment on it they reply my comment and i feel good so thought i would also start doing the same. So coming back to the story. I'm a science student and i have little bit knowledge on this but If I'm wrong somewhere and i did any mistake then sorry in advance. Please forgive me for that. This update is a bit intense but inshallah next update would be fun to read. Also like this part for pm's

Part 1

The two little babies stood their with shaking legs, begging for him to pick them.

He just stared at them, bewildered.

"Pa..pa"

The difficult uttering word of babies made him numb in shock.

Gauri kneeled down gently pulling them back grasping their tiny arms with care.

He strided out of room and stood out banging on the locked door.

The door opened in few seconds after continuos banging.

"Om. What's wrong.?"

Shivaay asked in concern without wasting a second, reading omkara's expression.

"Shivaay. Today's date. What is it.?"

Composed look was plastered beneath the tension on his face.

Shivaay was confused at his question. He knitted his eyesbrows in confusion but replied at his demanding state

"Uhmm..its..5th july"

He stood there shock but jiggled his head asking him.

"Are you sure.?"

"Yes but why.? Is something wrong.?"

Shivaay stepped out worried.

He pinched the bridge of his nose not ready to accept the truth.

"Year. Which year is this.?"

He asked grabbing his shoulder, shaking him violently.

"Om what wrong with you"

Shivaay stared at him shocked at his behaviour.

He left his shoulder, repeating his question in demanding tone.

"Which year is this shivaay"

"2017"

The words made him numb.

He stumbled back with distress. One hand on his forehead with beads of sweat dripping down.

'How could this be possible.? I can't remember anything.'

"O are you fine. Chulbul bhabhi said you were distressed"

A worried rudy came running with soumya following him behind. Omkara looked at him confused.

"Who is Chulbul bhabhi.?"

He stared at rudra confused not aware of the petrified state of his family laced with worry at his question.

He glanced at the whole room. His expression changed from confusion to worry at their faces of horror.

"What happen.?"

"You don't know.!"

Anika breathed out shocked. He shook his head in reply.

"She is your wife Gauri"

"Gauri"

He stated in completed shock ignoring the warm feeling he felt inside with thumping heart.

"Yes she is your wife"

Omkara tried to think hard hoping for flash of any memory about marrying Gauri.

'How can i not remember my marriage.? How can i forget everything in one night.?

Om focused hard trying to remember but all he knew was Gauri was going marry kali before he left bareily and today was supposed to be his marriage with ridhima.

'This can't be possible.! I can't forget almost two years of my life'

Array of questions started to clog his senses making him tremble in fear. His hands started shaking with beads of sweat dripping from him face.

His breath turned uneven, he felt smothered. Slowly he wasn't able to breath choking.

"Om are you fine. What happened. OM"

Shivaay grabbed his shoulders shaking him, calling him again and again but his senses were blocked he felt smothered.

"OM"

Shivaay screamed his name. He was choking, not able to breath trembling.

"Anika water. quick"

Omkara kneeled down choking. Not able to register anything.

"Omkara"

Screamed Gauri petrified at Om's state.
She ran to him grabbing glass of water from anika.

She sat holding his trembling body. She made him drink and embraced him tight, drops of tears dripping down her cheeks with utter fear at his trembling state.

"Om breath. Breath"

Shivaay held this right hand in his and rudy joined him placing his hand on shivaay

"O breath. Breath O"

Shivaay was on verge of tears while rudra was already crying for om to reminding him again and again to breath.

Omkara closed his eyes listening to shivRu's words and gaining his support from Gauri's embrace.

He inhaled deeply and let out a sharp breath. Repeating it few times, his breath was slowly getting normal but he was still trembling.

Gauri was caressing his back smoothly to reduce his trembling, sobbing.

Gauri's embrace and her silent assurance of everything being alright reduced his trembling unknowninly.

Omkara opened his eyes after his tremble situation reduced completely but still he was in shock and fear.

Shivaay helped him to stand up taking him inside his bedroom.

Gauri left him teary eye, not able to see his position but making sure everyone were with him before leaving.

Rudra passed shivaay another glass of water and shivaay made him drink.

"Shivaay i don't remember anything. Today was supposed to be my marriage with ridhima. It should be 5 feb today. Why is it july."

Omkara blurted out still in distress

"Ridhima.?"

Shivaay asked confused and he nodded.

"It was going to happen last year but it broke off. Don't you remember.?"

He shook his head in no.

"Gauri is your wife om"

Anika stated.

"How is this possible.? She is a cheat. She was going to marry kali. How did she landed being my wife"

He spoke completly ignoring the little feelings he felt.

"It must be her act of play. She's.."

"You married her"

Shivaay's words made his mouth shut. He stared at him trying to sink in his words.

Shivaay feared to inform him anything but he informed because today or tommorow he is going to know truth.

Soft noise of blabbering forced omkara to glance at door.

It was Gauri standing in complete worry and distress.

She was holding little baby in her arms while down one small baby stood clutching to her clothes with shaky legs.

She walked inside at slow pace with the baby trying to walk fumbling.

He glanced back at her. Her eyes were moist. Her gaze was making him feel sad, he felt like hugging her right there soothing away her pain.

She stood few inches away from on left side.

The baby who was standing with his left hand clutching her clothes, fowards right slowly moving away with shaky legs.

Gauri released down the baby, who followed the first baby's steps

Now both babies were standing infront individual grasping on omkara's knees with thier tiny fingers.

"These are your kids. Ved and vyoom."

Shivaay said. He have guessed it before but was hesistant to except it.

They had two little dark brown pair of eyes on milky white skin like Gauri. Button little slender nose and soft plum lips like omkara with rosy cheeks like Gauri.

They were reflection of both of them. How was she suppose to ignore these cute mini bundles of joy.

"Who is who.?"

He asked in confusion. They were identical. Shivaay chuckled.

"Both look like similar but in weight ved has teensy bit less weight comparing to vyoom"

He peered at them and noticed both were same weight but ved was teensy bit less weight.

Ved raised his both hands asking him to pick him up.

"Everyone say boys are always mama's boy but here its different ved is papa's boy"

Omkara picked him up with a smile looking at his eagerness and effort bobbing his feet. His distress vanishing

He glanced down at vyoom who was busy digging his nails on knee trying to pinch the fabric.

"Vyoom is continuing the saying of mama's boy"

"Don't get jealous O. It happens"

Omkara rolled his eyes rudy's comment but looked back at ved who was gaining his attention by pinching his both cheeks and bowed his head up down below his chin blabbering.

He grinned at his acts.

She looked at him with a small smile hoping those babies remind him of her.

The trauma of him forgetting her made her woe in pain.

Omkara married Gauri in bareily. She came back as Chulbul. He was angry, being with her and getting to know her made him forgive her and marry her again.

The beautifull memories of their marriage. The day when he confessed his love. The look which he had on his face when she told him she was pregnant. The happiness he had looking at his twins. It was all vanished.

He no longer remember his Gauri. Who devoted him. The Gauri who loved her with every ounce. The girl who filled his empty pale canvas of life with bright colours.

He doesn't remember his Gauri. He only remembers her as characterless Gauri.

The thought of it made her scatter into pieces.

He was busy playing with ved tickling him with his nose but sudden pain he felt inside made him glance at her.

Lone tear rolled down from her rosy cheeks but she wiped it as quickly as it fell.

The pain in his heart he felt looking at her hurt made him feel like they were bonded.

Bonded as one.

Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Aw..!! Ved nd vyoom..!!! Cutest characters ever..nd omkara can't remember anything..kya ho gaya mere omie ko..?? Feeling bad for gauri...will be waiting to read the next part...update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
OMG it's too interesting...daddykara...memory loss
wat happened to him...
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Awww... two chubby little bundles of cuteness! Ved and Vyom... this is the absolute cutest yaar...
I'm grinning like an idiot at the thought of Ri and Om having twin babies... you've made my day with that picture.

Even with an amnesiac Omki, I was so happy at the end of the chapter... he felt her pain and is trying to understand the situation. This is becoming so awesome!

Eagerly waiting for more!

Thanks for the PM

Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Ved and Vyoom, the cutie pies of RiKara.
Can't wait to read more
Super sweet chapter Sumaiya😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Though Omkara may not remember Gauri
But his heart does
He feels comfortable
When she is there
He can feel her pain

But his mind is contradicting
He has twins..OMG
Glad family was there
Shiv Ru handled things well

Wonder why omkara forgot
What led to Amnesia

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Dear Sowmya,
Wow what a different concept and different start. Om forgetting 2years of his life. And mostly forgetting his love of life. Not able to accept the reality and is in confused state. But Om was happiee to see his two little bundle of joy. But can still feel the pain of his wife. But for Ri her whole world is collapsed as Om doesn't remember her. The further path will be tough for Ri. Waiting how both will find solace in each other. And how will become one again. Update asap.
With love,
Divya
Edited by Rumadiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
I am feeling bad about gauri...how he suddenly lost his memory

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