Farmhouse Shenanigans- Shivika TS (Last part on pg 21) 14/08 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Hayyyee!! ☺️ Payal...I don't know that I have the capacity to write anything more as I am still lost in the bliss of the chapter...somewhere in a crowded closet on the second floor!!!😳


Thankyou so much Nargis!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: minamma

Awww

Aaloo puri and gobhi parathas were best
Haaye rumya were soo cute
And shivika ke to kya kehne
Haayeee
U better update soon this time..
Dying to read next part


Thanks! Will try to be soon with update😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SHIVIKA8532

Finally!!! You posted..was waiting for this one!!

Amazing shot!!! Update nxt part soon!! ❤️


Thankyou!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
you would have no idea how happy i feel after reading this chap.
i know the amount of hard work you had put in for this. i remember the conversation we had and am really glad we had it after reading this now😊

i still am sick and i am yet to get back to all the pms, but seeing this title i just couldn't refrain from reading and commenting dear.

awesome work sweety
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update payal 🤗

it was purely bliss
awww it was so cute that shivaay and Rudra makingaloo puri and Gobi ki parathe...
wat i loved about your update is it will always be cute yar...No unwanted drama...just magical moment
totally loved it 🤗


Thanks Aparna! And there's enough drama in the show, so I try to keep my works light-hearted. Glad you like them❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: kaepps

This one is a fantabulous story..wish to hv updates ASAP


Thanks!
And yes, will try to update soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ridz13sdqt

Hayee.. so beautiful ❤️ thankyou so much for the PM 😳
Continue soon...


Thanks love!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: FawadHolic

Oh my god, super super super super cute!


Read both the parts today. The first one was adorable, I like how they are friends and comfortbale in each others' company. And Oberois fussing over Annika is so cute! Loved it!

And this part, awww. ❤️ Shivika were adorable, waiting for a lot more from them, this kiss has left me in painful anticipation. ☺️

But what I loved the most is how this reminded me of initial IB days, with the brothers cooking, taking Shivaay's case, the girls gossiping. All in all, such a refreshing and warm story! 👍🏼


Thankyou so much! I'm glad you like the story🤗Feels great to get such lovely comments. And oh, the old IB days I'm flattered you compare my story to those wondeful times!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: babydevil

Oh la la la, that was such a superb update!


filled with all correct emotions and moments 😉
though I feel so bad for my okie-shomkie 😭😭😭
he is just shipping everyone around everyone.
Anklet please bring in Gauri if you can, Please Please!!

I loved how Annika accepted her attraction/like/love towards him and also how, if not, accepted but Shivaay neither denied when his brothers just stated that he loved Annika.
And about the cooking time I loved how even rudy participated into cooking for Sumo. I loved the bonding between Sumo and Bade bhaiya, because all it took was puppy face for Shivaay to agree. Awww😳

and then to Our Shivika

the whole store room scene was such a heart beat raiser thing, from him admitting that he senses her to the kiss. Oh la la la la baby ☺️
even the silence for some reason looked so comfortable and I loved how Shivaay stated that they should go down but didn't even bugged from his place...😆😆
The Kiss had a lot more emotion behind than what was displayed. I mean just because Annika didn't pulled away couldn't have lead to this. There has to be some talking happening heart to heart ❤️
but Dearest Anklet, Why ? just why always Rudy interrupting such moments?
just why?😭😭
even in that one shot of being locked into a room or wardrobe, rudy was the one knocking, You know it kills me knowing Rudy, of all the people, RUDY broke the moment. I HATE YOU for this 😡😡

But all in all, another great work of yours Anklet, You make me so proud👏👏

Please Update Soon 😃

Love
Divu


Ah, Divs. It's been ages since I got your comment. But I understand you've been busy so you're excused!
I wish I could put in Gauri in here too! But the story just wasn't permitting it. Warna toh you know how much I adore Om But I'll still try and put in something in the next chapter!

Oh, how I miss Saumya! She shared a bond with Shivaay and Om that was just... so sweet! But I guess I sort of am liking Bhavya now. Atleast, I like the bond she shares with Annika and Gauri.

And duh, it HAS to be Rudy who interrupts😆 Who else would be able to be annoying and get away with it? Only our Rudy babyyy. And puhlease, I know you love me :*

I make you proud? yayyy🤗 (see I'm not saying thank-you😆)

Will try and update soon❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Finally!!

I've waited so long for this and I'm so happy that you updated.
The kiss ?! Awww.
Anika want something to happen?
Bang on !!!!

ShivRu are cute.
Om teasing? 😆

Thank you so much for the wonderful update.
Yesterday's episode cracked me up 🤣


Sorry to keep you waiting!
And thankyou, I'm glad you liked it😃

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