RiKara FF: Musings of the Heart |Pt 2- Pg 7| 29-12-17

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Hey everyone,

My first attempt at an SS/ FF. I am not sure as to how many parts this would comprise of, but I am hoping for support from you all. Please do comment and let me know what do you think of it.

Presenting to you all, "Musings of the Heart"




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* Character Sketch - Page 1
* Chapter One - Page 2
* Chapter Two - Page 7
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Character Sketch



Omkara Singh Oberoi:
Thirty-two year old Omkara, fondly known as Om, belongs to one of the most affluent and richest families- The Oberoi's. His passion lies in Art and is an Art Teacher by profession in Mount Carmel School. A kind, polite, sensitive person with a heart of gold that is ever-willing to help. His elder brother, Shivaay, is his 4 am friend, his pillar of strength and someone he can lean on.



Gauri Sharma:
A self made woman and a single mother, Gauri works as a part of the event management team at the Oberoi Industries. Her life revolves around only one person- her four year old daughter, Chhaya. At quite an early age of twenty-six, she has learnt the ways of the world and refuses to trust anyone. Her only confidante and best friend- Annika is dating Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi, who also happens to be the heir to Oberoi Industries.



Chhaya Sharma:
A four year old girl who has just got an admission in Mount Carmel School. Her Mamma is her everything to her.



More characters to follow, if required...
Edited by dbo_savina - 8 years ago
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Done. I await some constructive Comments/ Criticisms/ Suggestions 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great...
Pls PM me wenever u update... :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow love the concept. Please continue asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb idea.
Do pm
Want to know if rikara will b doing a simple arranged marriage...
Or a very tashan wali meeting leading to Marriage..

This is not any suggestion, simply wanted to know...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OK gauri as mother
Omie as a successful businessman hmm concept looks intriguing update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice concept
Something new and different

Nice character sketch
Omkara a school teacher
Gauri a single mother
Chhaya will bring them together

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: HamiSky

Great...

Pls PM me wenever u update... :-)


Thank you, will update in some time 😊

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