SHIVIKA FF- Part 13 Page 12 - You both are made for each other - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
nice loved the updates.
waiting to see how pinky reacts to shivika moving out
please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
awesome Loved it yar...
you know wat i really wanted shivaay to leave oberoi mansion Atleast for some time...and that would be likely a slap to pinky
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Bang on!!!! Part 9!!!!
Devika is soo khidki Tod wali bandi yaar...kaha SSO ko prinku jaisi behen de Di...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: thisissmansi

Bang on!!!! Part 9!!!!

Devika is soo khidki Tod wali bandi yaar...kaha SSO ko prinku jaisi behen de Di...



Wohooo. I love my Devika too 😆

Praanca 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Keep going babe! I want more OMM of Pinky...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART- 10

Devika's room-
*Phone rings*
Devika - "Hello"
"Hi Di , Good Morning"
Devika- "Heyy shivaay, Good morning! Kaise ho? All fine there right? Annika kaisi hai?
Shivaay- " All good here! I jus woke up. Had a really good sleep "
Devika- "uuu .. ahem. really good sleep uh? "
Shivaay - " Diii!!!!"
Devika- "Hehe, glad you happy"
Shivaay- " Di, hows mom?"
Devika- "mom ko kya hua. Waise ki waise hai, sigh. par koi baat nahi, Mrs. Pinky Oberoi ko thodi grooming shooming chahiye, I'll take care of her. Tu apni biwi ko kush rakh, Teri Maa ko me sambhalungi"
Shivaay- " Di, can i ask u something?
Devika- "kya hua billluuu"
Shivaay- Di, Im serious, are you still angry with her for what happnd 10yrs back?"
Devika- " arre tu serious kyu hai, Nahhh. Mom ne jo kiya ussi wajah se I have build up my life on my own, i will always be thankful to my parents for kicking me out, warna me yaha reh kar, ek aur "Pinky Oberoi" ban jaati. Magar Shivaay ek baat toh hai, , i will be never be a mom like her, who loved us for selfish reasons, usse "pyaar" keh sektihe?
She separated me from you. I will never ever forgive her for that"

Shivaay- "Di, aap jo bhi karengi, I will be ther for you, Pls take care"
Devika- " Shivaay, im sorry baby. But i want you to stay out of this. This is between me and Mrs. Pinky Oberoi, i want her to know what she lost and i want her to know how it feels getting separated from your loved ones"
Shivaay- " But di..."
Devika- " Shivaay. Dont worry. Everything will end well, Give me some time. I know i dint let u talk to her after what all happened but before you talk i have to settle things with her.
Abhi Tum , tumare aur Annika ki bare me soch. Spend more time. I know you will be busy with your office work even at home. No bahanas ok. Ill tell Mishra to handle everything for sometime.
Ek kaam karthi hu. Im booking tickets for you both, Go to London for sometime..

Shivaay- " Nooo dii, not noww. "
Devika- "kyuuu. I told you na. I will take care of everything here"
Shivaay- " I know you will. But i want to be with you here. Abhi nahi. Maybe after everything gets settled"
Devika- "hmmm ok.Tumse nah me jeet nahi sakti "

Shivaay - "ahhh woh toh hai"
Devika- " oye billu , Chalo , give my regards to Annika. Ill come ther someday . Oh and one more thing, i will need your khanna to be with me till Im here okie? "
Shivaay - " Ok di, Ill messg him. you take care and call me if u need anythin"
Devika- "Shivaay"
Shivaay- " Yes di, what happnd"
Devika- " Nothing. I might jus do things overboard. Dont be surprised. Ok?"
Shivaay- " Love you Di"
Devika smiled while she cut the call. Looked at her Dadaji's pic in her room and her eyes filled with tears,
"Miss you Dadaji, miss your hugs and your chocolates, Give me the strength to bring back that old joy and happiness in this family, Muje maaf kardijiye agar meri harkatein galat hai , but i have to do this for Shivaay and his future here, Aapko pata hai na how much I love him, His happiness is only that matters to me, Nothing else. Meri saath dijiye Dadaji"

"Woh humesha teri saat he puttar, Teri yeh Dadi bi"
Devika turned back to see a smiling Dadi, and Jhanvi came in saying "Me bhi Devika"
Devika went and gave them a hug,
Dadi- "chal apna kaam shurukar, rona dhona nahi"
Devika- "Dil bole...
Dadi & Jhanvi - " Oberois"


To be continued...
Edited by forumgirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
PART - 11

Devika comes down to the hall with Dadi and Jhanvi,
And finds Tej , Shakti , Pinky, Om , Gauri , Rudy sitting in the hall and comes forward to make an announcement .
Rudy - "Di , Good Morning, Sexy lag rahi oh aap "
Devika went and caught his cheek- "Thank you Rudy"
Devika saw Gauri and went to meet her .
Devika smiled at her saying - "Gauri right? Im Devika, You are a pretty girl"
Gauri- "Thaaangu Devika Di"
Devika- " Heyyy. "Di " teek he, om bhi mujhe Di hi kehte he"
Devika winked at Om saying- "my omie is lucky"
Om gave back a small smile.
Devika- " Hey everybody, i have a surprise announcement"
Tej - " what is it Devika?"
Devika went near Dadi - "Bade papa, since my sweet dadi has given me permission to come home and stay here often (paused , looking at Pinky ) i have decided something.
Pinky look at Devika , raising her eyebrows.

Tej- " This is your house too, you can come and stay here whenever you want"
Om and rudy exchanged surprised looks at what Tej jus said.
Devika- " i know Bade papa. Thank you for saying that. But the surprise is im planning to launch a boutique here in Mumbai . So i can come visit my dadi and everybody else often. I have a colleague here who will take care of the store, ill jus have to come once in a while.
Tho uss bahane i can stay here too "

Tej- " wow , thats a wonderful idea"
Devika- "Great! So. I'll be having a press conference morrow morning at 10, i want all of you dressed at your best ok?"

Tej- "Sure , ill ask khanna to arrange everything for you, No worries"
Devika - " Thank you bade papa, ill be going out to get some stuff too
(Her phone rings) oh. Excuse me i need to take this call"
Tej- " hmmm well then , Shakti let's leave to the office, we are getting late. have an important meeting"
And they started to leave.
Shakti looked at Devika expecting to her come and say something, she got busy with the phone call.
He jus sighed and left.

One by one everyone left the hall.

Pinky walked towards Devika and took her phone off her hand and cut the call.
Devika- " kya kar rahi ho aap"
Pinky- " yeh to mujhe tumse puch na chahiye ki , yeh kya naya natak hai"

Devika - "what? aapki problem kya hai"
Pinky- " meri sawaal ke jawaab tho, yeh sab boutiques openings..
Devika stopped her.
Devika- " Hold it right ther. Aap meri mamle be interfere karneki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Aapke liye acha nahi hogi. So better stay out of this"
And she started to walk off.
Pinky screamed - " Tu mujhse iss tara se baat nahi kar sakti. Tu mujhe dhamki deh rehi ho? Tumari Ma...
And she stopped.
Devika smiled - kya hua? Meri? Meri kya? Khairr. Woh sab chodiye.

Ek kaam karo, aap aapni room me jhaakar Tv dekhlo, yaaa kuch aur plotting shotting karo, iss ghar me tho aur bhi log hai, sabko nikhalne ki planning karo,
aur me yaha aapki plans flop karneki koshish karungi,
We will have lots of fun ,
bohat mazaa ayegaaa mum maaa "
And Devika's expressions changed to a serious one.

Devika- "Aakri bhar keh rahi hu, Meri kaam me interfere karne ki koshish mat karo, warna me woh sab karungi jiske waje se aapko yeh Ghar chodna padegi"

Pinky got shocked at what Devika jus said.

Devika- I hope u understand, You better understand"
She grabbed her phone from Pinky and turned back to walk.

Pinky's eyes filled up with tears. She jus stood watching Devika walk away.

Devika reached outside OM entrance and called out for khanna.
Khanna came running - "Ji Madam"
Devika - " Khanna, sab teek hai? is the car ready? we need to go to a place, Did u get the cash?"
Khanna- "Yes mam sab teekh hai, jaise aapko chahiye, all set"
Devika - " Good , then let's move"
She wore her sunglasses and got inside the car.
Called up someone on the phone - "I will reach there in half an hr, everything should go according to our plan"


To be continued ...
Edited by forumgirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
I read the new chapter 9 of ur FF and I am lovin it!
Love love love how her own daughter is going to ruin Ponky's life!
Perfect it is.
I loved the last line of Devika :)
Keep going with the amazing work...Cannot wait to know more what Devika has planned :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
*goes to bring bucket full of popcorns n drinks to read and visualise Devika doing Pinky's OMM*
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
You need to have index column. ...
easy to follow the story

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