SHIVIKA FF- Part 13 Page 12 - You both are made for each other

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Trying a chance at writing.
My version of what cud have happnd -
Read and let me know if i shd continue 😛



INDEX -

Part 1,2,3 - Pg 1
Part 4,5,6 - Pg 3
Part 7,8,9 - Pg 6
Part 10 , 11- Pg8
Part 12- Pg 12
Part 13 - Pg 12


"YOU BOTH ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER" - PART 1



"Mujhe iss ghar ke batwara chahiye"
Annika's voice echoed the big hall.
Dadi looked at Shivaay with her tear filled wide opened eyes.
Jhanvi , Om closed their eyes feeling helpless.
Rudy thinking, "why is bhabhi doing this "
Shivaay looked at Annika with a big question in his head - "Did my Annika jus say this? No, i heard it wrong, Something is wrong somewhere. Let me look into her eyes.
Annika was looking down this time thinks, "What's Shivaay thinking, Am i caught? Ok. Ok. I need to do something soon"
Shivaay caught her moving "She seems restless, ok. I need to handle this. She is upto something,
How will i find out?"
Annika- Aap chup kyu hai Shivaay?
Maine therr karliya. Mujhe batwaara chahiye.
Pinky shouted back - "oho. Dekha aap logone. Iss ladki ki asli roop. Koi bhi mujhe believes nahi karthi thi.
Mera shivaay ko uses karthe thi yeh ladki or aap logo ne iss ko sar pe bitaakar rak rahi thi.
Ab aaya iss ki real faces outs? "
Jhanvi , Om , Rudy, Tej , Shakti looked at Pinky with disgust.
Shivaay kept looking at Annika.

*LOUD CLAPS* *LOUD CLAPS*
All looked towards the entrance of the hall .
A slim figured lady in her mid 30's entered the hall wearing a designer saree clapping her hands with a wide smile on her face , stood in front of all.
Khanna walked in and stood behind her.
She removed her sunglasses and said
"Hello everyone!"
All looked in shock.
Annika stood all clueless " Ab yeh kaun hai?"

Shivaay ran and hugged her tight. He felt calm.
He felt like he is safe. He got sure that everything will be alright now.


To be continued...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART - 2


He got out of the hug and looked into her blue kanji eyes. Those were filled with tears.
She said- "Why is my billu crying? And shouted out loud looking at everyone present at the hall, "This Devika Oberoi Khan is not gonna leave that person alive who made my baby cry"
"Di" , Shivaay's broken voice pierced thru Devika's heart.
Devika cupped his face - " Im here, Ill take care okie. But promise me you will stay strong and calm while i handle all this"
Shivaay nodded a yes.
Devika walked towards Dadi and Jhanvi.
She moved to touch Dadi's feet to get her blessings, Dadi hugged her tight.
Jhanvi came forward to hug her.
Shakti moved and stood near Pinky, who was completely stunned with what is happening in front of her.
Devika went to Tej, he touched her head asking - " how you "
She jus smiled and looked towards om and rudy who came running towards her and hugged her tight.
"Im here right. I'll take care, stop crying u silly boys"
Om- "we know di"
Ranveer watching all this with confused expressions- Yeh kaun hai?
Priyanka- Devika di
Ranveer- eh?
Annika thinking- "yeh ho kya raha hai yaha"
Devika came next to her - "Annika, Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi right? Oops, sorry, Sirf Annika hai na?"
Annika still shocked looked at Shivaay nodding a yes.
"Ab tum soch rahi hogi ki main kaun hu, well me tumari time nahi waste karungi ,
I'm Devika Oberoi Khan,
Mr. Shakti Singh Oberoi ki Beti,
Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki behen. Badi behen"
Annika looked all confused - "Aap"
Devika - " Dont worry, i dint expect you to know me, i know nobody would have told you about me, nobody will, because i was kicked out of the house 10 yrs back, for a big reason, you wanna know? I married a Muslim. Non khaandaani guy. Woh aadmi jisko naam khoon khaandhan nahi hai"
Annika shivered in shock.
" Yeh Mrs. Pinky Singh Oberoi kaha gayi"
Devika asked looking back and saw Pinky looking down like she lost a game.
" wah. Meri Oh my mata! Kaise oh aap?
Devika smirked.
"Aaree me kaise sawal puch rahi hu, Teek hi hogi aap, aapko kaise problems hosakti hai, problems tho ghar ke baaki log ko hogi na"
She came in front of Pinky and stood ther and said - "abhi tak aapne aapki drama kar neki hobby nahi chodi na"
Pinky and Shakti looked at Devika shocked.
The rest of them at the hall had a smile on their faces but Annika still not able to understand whats going on.
Shivaay- "Di! Maa se aise baat kar rahi aap"
Devika- " Ma? Kaun Ma? Yeh Oh my mata?"
Shivaay- "Di, Aapko kya hua? "
Devika looking at Pinky - " Shivaay, muje kuch nahi hua he,
But abhi Kisi aur ko zaroor kuch hoga"
Shivaay looked at Pinky - "Ma, di kya bol rahi hai"
Pinky- " Muje nahi pata Shivaay, yeh kuch bhi nonsense talks kar rahi hai"
"Khannaa" - Devika shouted out loud.
Khanna came running with his ipad, switched on the screen and gave it to her " lijiye mam"

Devika increased the volume and passed it on to Shivaay.
" Tujhe Shivaay ki zindagi se bahar jaane keliye sirf 3 din he"
All looked at the video shocked.
Shivaay heard and saw everything on the screen.
His mom screaming out loud, His annika looking at his mom all helpless.
His mom saying he is "najayaz"
Everything.
There was complete silence after the video got over.

Thud!
A slap passed across Pinky's cheek.
Shakti lost his balance after gving her a tight slap.
All looked at him in great shock.
This wasnt expected.
He got back in position to give the next one but rudy came and stopped him "chote papa, nahi"

Shivaay stood all numb. Annika dint know what to do.
Dadi hugged Jhanvi and was holding on to her for support.

Om went to hold Shivaay.

To be continued.
Edited by forumgirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART - 3

Shivaay tried to focus and remembered all what happnd in a flashback.
Annika all tensed these days, saying things like going away, missing him, last day, getting angry about the jewellery, and right now when he proposed , he saw in her eyes , she was surprised happy for a sec but when she saw pinky her whole expression changed, so this was the game. She planned all this. I dint understand anythin. Why dint I?
Annika ran towards Shivaay and hugged him tight.
"Shivaay, aap kuch mat puchiye, maine yeh sab kyu kiya. Muje nahi pata, me sirf yeh janti hoon ki me aapko tuthe huve nahi dekh sakti, uss video me aapne jo dekha woh sach he magar.. pinky aunty ne jo kaha woh woh.."
"Woh ek dum Jhoot hai" Devika roared.
Annika and Shivaay looked at Devika.
Devika- "Shivaay Singh Oberoi mera Chote bhai he, Shakti Singh Oberoi or durbhaagye se Pinky Singh Oberoi ke beta hai woh"
She came near Pinky who was standing shocked -
" Kya maine kuch galat kaha , Mummy?"

Pinky looked at her and screamed - "Shivaay mera beta nahi hai"
Everyone looked shocked.
Shivaay trembled. Annika closed her eyes and held him tight.
Om held both of them together.

Kamini entered the hall shouting "Woh , aapka beta hai Pinkyji"

Pinky looked at Kamini who entered with a smile. She came and stood near Pinky.
Pinky- "yeh tum kya bakwaas bol rahi ho kameeni"
Kamini- " Bakwaas woh nahi jo me bol rahi hu, bakwaas woh hai jo aapne abhi tak kiya he"
Pinky screamed "Kameeniii, get outs hojaho mere ghar se"
" koi kahi nahi jaayegi abhi " - Shakti came forward.

Devika looked at Pinky and said - " Sab ke ..Sab ke OH my mata karnewali meri mummy ko itna bada surprise me ne plan kiya he , ki aap na , dekh te dekhte hi aapki oh my maata hojayegi"


To be continued 😛
Edited by forumgirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oooh wow!
I am really intrigued in knowing what happens further!
M sure Shivaay is going to catch upon the whole thing
And whooo has entered the mansion?
Too interesting!

Waiting for updates :)
Really liked it so far!

Sanam x
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is getting so interesting 😆 I'm excited to know who is gonna enter OM! That person must bring Pinky's OMM with her isn't it? 🤣 Love your writing style!!
Love the fact that Shivaay does not believe Anika's sudden change of behaviour here and makes everything in order to make her disclose the truth <3
What an amazing start dear and waiting for your next update... 😳
Continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kaun hai woh, kaun hai woh.

Jaldi batao Neena... i'm so excited


I love Shivaay's Reaction. He knows that something is wrong with his lady love. ❤️I love it. Pinky ki OMM hogi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you my Lovelies .

Check out part 2 post 2
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my god! I so didnt expect thaaattt!
2nd part is more dhamakedaar than the first one!
Mere andar bahaut se ladoo fute jab shakti slapped pinki...Oh god 😆😆😆😆😆😆
Why did Rudy stop him 🤣
Pinky deserves worssee!!

I cannot wait to see SSO ka reaction post this!
Poor baby. I LOVED DEVIKA! She was sooo sasssy. Damnnn. I wish someone came like that and treated Pinky this way. Amazeballs!

Lovely update!
Waiting for 3 :D

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Neena, part 3 please!!! It's helping my depression... can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my F**king God 🥳 i'm so shocked and Happy at the same time 👏. GREAT! I love Devika di!


You rocked it. Bravo.


I hope babies will talk to each other and have some good time together all alone ❤️...


thank you dear!

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