RiKara SS - SAIYYARA - Episode THREE Updated Pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tellywoodaddict

Pooru...ur too good ...this story is damn interesting ...all those beautiful feels I am so excited for their takkar bazi ...RiKara are so RiKara here ...Gauri will be gauri ...She is brain and om the soul ...it's beautiful ...lots of love

Trish 🤗 you totally understood the essence of the story ... I am so so so happy reading this comment ... Gauri is the brain and Om is the soul ... Ekjactly! This is really interesting as a plot as I want to write how Om realizes what a villain Kali is ... So when the base of his mistrust is shattered let's see what Omkara does ... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola guys🤗

Happy RiKara Reading


EPISODE TWO


Fhat The Wuck was Shivaay's immediate reaction after Gauri discussed with them her idea of performing CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA on the train from which Kali was planning to elope. This was a kind of last resolve for them because the corrupt system of Bareilly was never going to help them ... Arjun being an exception. Omkara was feeling disgusted even though such haphazard planning of Gauri was no news for him ... he knew that she would surely come up with something ridiculous. Tej was intently listening to the conversation when Arjun cut off Gauri in between ...

Gauri tumhe andaza bhi hain ke tum kya keh rahi ho ... bohot khatarnaak kaam hain yeh ... tumhaari jaan bhi jaa sakti hain ...

Hum bass itna jaante hain ke yeh plan kaam karega aur hum hi yeh plan execute karenge ... kisi aur ki zindagi khatre mein nahi daal sakte ... kaali thakur ki rag rag se waakif hain hum ... khana paani naa mile toh zinda reh lega par aurat ke bina nahi ... she told arjun referring to him about how Kali enslaved and treated women.

Gauri what makes you think ke tum aisi stunt baazi karogi ... paagal ho gayi ho ... kali ke saamne jaane ki baat kar rahi ho upar se tumhe CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA karna hai ... naachna hi hain toh kisi club mein chali jaao ... Shivaay was not agreeing to her stupid seeming idea.

Shivaay Bhaiyya aap samajh nahi rahe ... Hawas ka pujari hain woh, kisi na kisi chirraiyya ko toh bandi banaaega hi ... taaki uske safar mein maze le sake ... humme toh woh waise bhi nochnaa chahta hain ... toh kyon naa iss bahane thoda sach ugalwa liya jaaye usse ...

Omkara had had enough, Gauri was behaving impossible. What does she think she is? SUPERWOMAN? Willingly throwing herself in front of Kali ...

Bade Bhaiyya hum yeh kaam karna chahte hai ... aap humme kal tak bata dijiye gaa kya aur kaise karna hai? On a parting note Gauri turned to leave only for Omkara to grab her wrist and pull her ...

Dimaag kharaab hain tumhara ... main jaanta hoon Bareilly mein sab uss Kali ke kuttey hai ... humaari madad koi nahi karne wala Kali ko expose karne ke liye par iske matlab yeh nahi hain ke tum sab aafat apne sar par bithaalo ... he spoke without even breathing and she let him ... she knew interrupting Angry Kara was useless ...

Bol liya jo bolna thha ya aur kuch baaki hai ? he was baffled seeing no change in her plain expression ... not even the punctuation of his long dialogue affected her ... he let go her hand and she again turned to leave ...

I am talking to you Gauri ... suno meri baat ... he was shouting at her

Humne aapse kaha humaare saath batiyaane ko??? She fired him back. Dekhiye humme aapse koi baat nahi karni ... he tried to pull her again but she stomped his foot ... tameez se keh rahe hai toh aapko samajh mein nahi aataa kya? Dur rahiye humse ... naa humme dekhne ki naa humse baat karne ki koi zarurat hai ... aur chhoone ke bare mein toh sochna bhi mat ... she warned him and left.

Shivaay was extremely tensed when he explained the true colors Of Kali to his brother. Omkara realized that not giving a chance to Gauri was a crime ... he committed a sin not wanting to trust her. In whichever way, but he was responsible about how she was being such a stunt woman ... Shivaay told him every detail of how much of a villain Kali is. After talking to Shivaay he rushed to his hotel room to pack his bags.

He knew he was a buffoon as and when he realized Gauri never wanted anything materialistic from him but he chose to let her go as a punishment for himself and now learning about how she is suffering in traps of Kali because of him all he desperately wanted to do is protect her ... he knew he is never going to deserve her as his woman but his priority was her safety what come may ... thinking about which he stepped in her house.

Gauri turned while mopping the floor as she heard footsteps and her lose bun fell on her on her shoulder for the tresses to escape below the low of her back as her eyes met his ... She even noticed his bags lying near the sofa ...

She was annoyed seeing him ... smiling, composed and poised. She was about to yell at him but her phone rang ... it was Shivaay calling.

Aapka bhai mere ghar mein kya kar raha hai ... woh bhi itne saare saamaan ke saath! She was in no mood to spare her bade bhaiyya this time

He wants to stay with you Gauri, tumhaari safety ka sawaal hai ... main koi risk nahi lene wala ... Shivaay ordered her in his obvious kind of tone

Humme kisi body guard ki zarurat nahi hai bade bhaiyya !!! she was screaming in the kitchen ... Om was able to listen to her in the living room ...

Gauri ... for what happened to you today ... I cannot trust anybody except family for the sake of your safety.. main nahi toh tumhaare liye Om hi sahi ... saying that he disconnected the call and she came out cursing Omkara ...

Aap yaha karne kya aaye hai??? Her voice sharp enough to kill

Maine socha kuch din sasural mein guzar liye jaaye ... he said lazily stretching his arms

Aapko teen mahine do hafte aur chaar din baad yaad aayaa aapka saural??? She was mocking him ... hum nahi chahte aap yaha rahe ... signaling him to get out ...

Dekho Gauri pyaar se keh raha hoon rehne do mujhe tumhaare paas nahi toh ... nahi toh main yeh jagah khareed lunga! He said giving her no choice.

Kharidiye ... jo kharidna hai khareediye ... yeh ghar khareediye , yeh gali khareediye ... poora bareilly khareediye ... humme kya ... humaari jaan pe sawaar hone ki zarurat nahi hai ... she cautioned him

Say whatever you want to Gauri main iss jagah ko chhodke kahi nahi jaaunga ... apne tareeke se samajhlo nahi toh agar main samjhaane pe aayaa toh pachhtaaogi ... he was giving her a dose in the same tonality she was irritating him ...

Gauri had to give up ... she knew Omkara Singh Oberoi can be stubborn as stone and adding to it was her bade bhaiyya who very unconvincingly talked her into staying with Om ...

Her home was a small one BHK row house which was well maintained as well as decorated. He observed that she kept herself super busy ... she worked as a clerk in a school nearby from where she was pursuing commerce as her higher secondary stream ... in her free time she weaved beautiful embroidery ... that was her side business and in other time she kept doing something or the other to make her home look prettier. She never gave herself any leisure time to think about anything ... the day passed by

He saw her serving dinner for him ... roti, sabzi, dal, chawal even salad and papad. She had put in way too much effort.

Gauri itna sab kuch karne ki zarurat nahi thhi ... he said to her politely

Her parched tone replied ... khana khaa lijiye nahi toh aapko neend nahi aane waali

He was amazed of how she remembered his food habits.

Tum chintaa mat karo ... agar neend nahi bhi aaegi ... toh bhi main tumhe pareshaan nahi karunga ... he said chuckling.

Dekhiye aap sote hain tab bhi humme pareshan kar dete hain ... GHHR ... GGGHHRRR ... GGGHHHRRR ... she imitated how he snores ...

Main kharratein nahi leta Gauri ... he tried to defend himself

Jo bhi ho ... itna samajh lijiye ke agar humne aapke saath atithi devo bhava wala vyavhaar nahi kiya ... toh bade bhaiyya humme gangaji mein swaha kar denge ... she rested her case.

Om ate in silence but he was disliking Gauri's attachment with her bade bahaiyya ... for the first time in his life ... he was jealous of Shivaay.

Gauri was finished with doing the dishes when he cornered her ... reading his expression she knew something serious was going to come her way ...

Main tumhaari zid ke laayak nahi hoon Gauri ... mere liye apni jaan jokhim mein daalna band karo ... Kali ko hum expose karenge humaare tareeke se ... beechme padne ki zarurat nahi hai tumhe ... he said to her totally irked with her CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA idea ...

Dekhiye aapko kisi galat fehmi mein jeene ki zarurat nahi hain ... hum aapke liye kuch nahi kar rahe ... humme Kaali ko saza dilwaani hai kyonki uske aadmiyon ne humaari maa ko kidnap kar liya hai ... har doosre din humme phone karke dhamka rahe hain who log ... ke maa ko maar daalenge ... aur hum Bade bhaiyya ki madad isiliye kar rahe hain kyonki woh bharosa karte hain humpe ...

Omkara was thunderstruck after knowing that Gauri's mother has been kidnapped ... all he could helplessly do is blame himself ... drown in guilt.

Ek baat saaf saaf bata dete hain aapko ... har baar har baat aapke baare mein nahi ho sakti ... she managed to speak as her throat choked and tears welled up in her eyes ...

He held himself responsible for every wrong that happened to her ... his self confession enclosed words of guilt and regret. It was just because of him that she had to deal with the wicked world on her own ... seeing her he was dying every moment ... thinking about her he drifted off to sleep.

The hair, the features, the composure ... nothing had changed about him. A bit rough into the edges, he was a master piece. She observed him as he had adjusted himself to sleep in a considerably small mattress in her living room ... this man with a handsome face possessed a heart of gold ... she knew it ... she loved him enough to lose her self ... But not her self respect.

UPCOMING Jatadhari Jiju !!!


Response awaited guys ...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Ayushi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my my my god
Kya bomb fenka hai yaar poorva👍🏼
Hahha i mean gauri ka character ek dun different hai current track se
Yeh toh ek dum teekhi chhuri hai... patakha hai jo kabhi bhi fatt jata hai🤣
Mind blowing update
U know poore update haste haste padha hai maine🤣
Superwomen gauri..train pe chaiyya chaiyya krna hai isko
I love each dialogue of gauri.. ek dum krara jwab deti hai
I loveed it when she said teen mahine do hafte char din bad yad aya apka sasural hahha
Hats of to u poorva for lovely and funny dialogues
He feels guilty try to understand na gauri
And precap jatadhari jiju hahah
Ab kya krne wale ho aage behna soch soch ke abhi se hasi aa rhi hai
Superb update
Wow
Thanks for the lovely update and pm
Update soon cant wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lol,i still can't believe she is doing a sting operation
and now her idea of chhaiya chhaiya?gauri is mad🤣
i like gauri and shivaay's bonding, the way she is talking to him😃
and omkara bodygaurd bhi bann gaya ab
and usko apna sasuraal yaad aa hi gaya😆

ohh.. omkie shomkie snores Ghhrr Ghhrr🤣 i can totally imagine gauri telling him this and his annoyed face 😆

loved this epi
thanks for the PM update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Oh my my my god

Kya bomb fenka hai yaar poorva👍🏼
Hahha i mean gauri ka character ek dun different hai current track se
Yeh toh ek dum teekhi chhuri hai... patakha hai jo kabhi bhi fatt jata hai🤣
Mind blowing update
U know poore update haste haste padha hai maine🤣
Superwomen gauri..train pe chaiyya chaiyya krna hai isko
I love each dialogue of gauri.. ek dum krara jwab deti hai
I loveed it when she said teen mahine do hafte char din bad yad aya apka sasural hahha
Hats of to u poorva for lovely and funny dialogues
He feels guilty try to understand na gauri
And precap jatadhari jiju hahah
Ab kya krne wale ho aage behna soch soch ke abhi se hasi aa rhi hai
Superb update
Wow
Thanks for the lovely update and pm
Update soon cant wait

Jyoti 🤗i am super duper glad that u love this gauri ... I have tried to keep her rustic roots intact ... Omki ki heroine hai ... Dabang toh honi hi chaahiye ... Nahi toh takkar ki ishqbaazi kaise hogi 😆 ... Chhaiyya chhaiyya bhi karegi woh ... Woh bhi din gin rahi hai jabse Omkara se alag Hui hai ... Omkara is going to feel terrible and about the precap ... Maza aaega 😉
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Jyoti 🤗i am super duper glad that u love this gauri ... I have tried to keep her rustic roots intact ... Omki ki heroine hai ... Dabang toh honi hi chaahiye ... Nahi toh takkar ki ishqbaazi kaise hogi 😆 ... Chhaiyya chhaiyya bhi karegi woh ... Woh bhi din gin rahi hai jabse Omkara se alag Hui hai ... Omkara is going to feel terrible and about the precap ... Maza aaega 😉

imagine gauri's chaiyya chaiyya with om
Aage mza ane wala hai😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Escape-

lol,i still can't believe she is doing a sting operation
and now her idea of chhaiya chhaiya?gauri is mad🤣
i like gauri and shivaay's bonding, the way she is talking to him😃
and omkara bodygaurd bhi bann gaya ab
and usko apna sasuraal yaad aa hi gaya😆

ohh.. omkie shomkie snores Ghhrr Ghhrr🤣 i can totally imagine gauri telling him this and his annoyed face 😆

loved this epi
thanks for the PM update soon


Thank you sona ... I agree gauri thodi crazy hai ... I loved writing all of Gauri's dialogues ... Glad u enjoyed it ... Ghhhr ghhhrr ghhrr 😆 ... About sting operation ... She is dabang Gauri ... Kuch bhi kar sakti hai ... 😉😆 ... I am happy that this one is not turning out to be overtly dramatic ... Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Jyoti Chhaiyya chhaiyya mein abhi thoda time hai ... Usse pehle thodi aur tadakti phadakti dialoguebaazi ho jaaye 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

@Jyoti Chhaiyya chhaiyya mein abhi thoda time hai ... Usse pehle thodi aur tadakti phadakti dialoguebaazi ho jaaye 😉

Neki or pooch pooch😆😆

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