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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Awesome update
Omkara n Gauri had worked together
But then KT fiasco happened
Omkara married her
But the twist came
He took her to OM
Never expected this

All drama to make Svetlana leave
But what about gauri now
She has to leave
N glad she did
I so want Gauri to leave OM
3 months leap

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
beautiful prologue
hope u update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Heyy poorva🤗
Very intersting story line my dear
Prologue itna acha hai toh story kitni achi hogi
Its diffrent from current track but what about misunderstandings😲
They worked together in barelly fr bhi misunderstandings😔
He married her and took her in OM only for that svetlana make leave...poor gauri...she is in love with him..but he ..
And after three months kya hoyega
Iske liye part one ka wait krna pdhing
Jldi post krna meri behna wait nahi hota mujhese u know na😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

Omkara n Gauri had worked together
But then KT fiasco happened
Omkara married her
But the twist came
He took her to OM
Never expected this

All drama to make Svetlana leave
But what about gauri now
She has to leave
N glad she did
I so want Gauri to leave OM
3 months leap

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Thank you vrinda ... I say the story which will follow will be something just and fair for RiKara ... As a couple and a treat for the fandom ... Quoting my own self ... Gauri is the damsel who distresses 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: kgmu

beautiful prologue

hope u update soon

I am typing it right now ... Need some time 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Waiting to read this new story of yours!! New story with the same original concept.. Its really interesting.
PS, I have also read ishq bulaava but was unable to comment on it.. Sorry yaar!! N the story is going great.. I'm totally in love with that fiction!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: rikara94

Heyy poorva🤗

Very intersting story line my dear
Prologue itna acha hai toh story kitni achi hogi
Its diffrent from current track but what about misunderstandings😲
They worked together in barelly fr bhi misunderstandings😔
He married her and took her in OM only for that svetlana make leave...poor gauri...she is in love with him..but he ..
And after three months kya hoyega
Iske liye part one ka wait krna pdhing
Jldi post krna meri behna wait nahi hota mujhese u know na😉

Jyoti 🤗 this is my absolute version of how we can get back authentic RiKara ... Misunderstandings ought to be there ... Yeah even after working together there are misunderstandings ... Because of Om and his rigid mind ... Teen mahine ke bad Jo bhi hoga ... Dhamaakedaar hoga ... Main abhi type kar rahi hu ... Shaam take post karti hu 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Waiting to read this new story of yours!! New story with the same original concept.. Its really interesting.
PS, I have also read ishq bulaava but was unable to comment on it.. Sorry yaar!! N the story is going great.. I'm totally in love with that fiction!!!

You never have to be sorry Sree ... Thank you so much for reading ... I am typing the first episode for this story 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Hola guys🤗

I have come up with yet another story idea which I am trying to present trying hard that it does not seem melodramatic ... I hope you like it

Happy RiKara Reading


EPISODE ONE


The marketplace roared in sunshine after Bareilly's peaceful slumber. The shops were stuffed and so the vendors made the street extremely narrow forcing the people to walk in straight files. Shops of different variety stood on the opposite sides of the road trying and competing with each other. Large tattered wagons carried variety of fruits and vegetables with their sellers becoming auctioneers along with a trail of cows making their way comfortably through the chaos. Sweaty buyers skillfully wove their way by locating minute gaps between people and squeezing through. Bargainers trying to save on a rupee and two. The place seemed a beautiful mess.

It was so damn busy, it was so damn her! That being the reason he chose to take a fifteen minute walk from his hotel to the office busy reminiscing the essence of Gauri ... his pace became that of a snail. He took note of every little colorful detail. The bangles in a stall, the vendor selling chaat, the sale of fresh mogra flowers, that one little shed from where she used to buy all her colorful duppatas and not to forget her favorite spot where they sold sugarcane juice. Everything reminded him of her ... everything reminded him that what kind of an idiot he is ...

"Khafa Adaton Se Bhi ShiKayat Ho Gayi ... Kya Aate Waqt, Kya Jaate Waqt ... Kuch Bhi Naa Poochne Ki Ijazat Ho Gayi ...

He was lazily dragging his feet across the street where she made a trash can out of his favorite luxury car ... He was lost in his world of thoughts when Tej Oberoi pinged him

Omkara! We fail to have all the time in this world so stop enjoying your vacation and come to work FAST.

Once he reached the office, he saw Shivaay & Tej busy discussing some matter with a group of lawyers. Out of their conversation, he was able to understand that how Kali Thakur was all set to double cross and trap the Oberoi's in a land scam and he had even cheated his father with a good amount of Rs. 175 crore.

This reality hit him hard again. Something that was scaring him and the last vein of his heart. He realized that Gauri was not interested in a single penny out of the Oberoi Empire because she disappeared without even uttering a word with only her three pairs of clothes leaving behind all the expensive jewellery and sarees she got as a gift and now that every trait of the malicious Kali was surfacing to him ... he started feeling like a criminal in every moment.

Shivaay we need to prove that the Oberoi's have nothing to do with that bas***d Kali ... Tej was screaming till his vocals chords were in pain ...

Yes Bade Papa ... hum saboot dhund rahe hai, we will surely get strong evidence ... Shivaay spoke in a composed tone trying to mange his frustration

Kab Shivaay ... Hum Sab Jail Mein Chakki Pees Rahe Honge Tab !!! Kab milega begunahi ka saboot, Tej banged his fist on the table ...

A treacherous kind of silence crept in as Tej was worried about saving his business, his money, his reputation, his name, his everything. Shivaay was constantly checking his phone waiting for some information and for Omkara all of this was more like a personal attack as he became more concerned about what kind of a man is Kali Thakur ... Nobody spoke

MIL GAYA SABOOT!!! Came in a frightened and aching voice as she ran into the door pushing it with all her power to almost fall on the floor...

Shocked will remain an understatement for Omkara about how he distressed he felt seeing Gauri there ... her eyes were red even her face , evident it was that she was slapped hard ... clothes shred and she tried to cover herself with her duppata, her body had some bruises ... skin slit for blood. She was hardly able to breathe. Omkara was numb seeing her ... adding to it was her state of mind and body. He saw Shivaay rushing to support her.

Kya Hua Gauri? Tumhaari aisi haalat ... yeh sab kisne kiya???

She pulled out a small chip from her hair which was red in her blood ... yeh lijiye bade bhaiyya ... isse check kijiye ...

Pehle tum mujhe yeh bataao ke kaha sting operation karne pohoch gayi thhi? ... maine tumhaare liye special security force ka intezaam kiya thha ... he asked examining her face ..

Bade bhaiyya unhi se toh bachkar bhaagte bhaagte aapke paas aa paaye hai ... she spoke in a scrawny tone

Omkara kept staring her not able to understand a word out of his brother's conversation as Tej rushed to Shivaay to snatch and check the data in that chip.

Gauri ... Om gathered all of his wit to take her name but realized he was not the only one calling for her ... turning his head he saw another wheatish broad shouldered man calling Gauri ... she chose to walk away with him ... a sudden pang of anger hit straight into his chest. He followed them into the sitting area where both of them were whispering to each other ...

Gauri got up and moved away to check her vibrating phone but felt a sudden haul forcing her straight into the wall ... Om had caged her into him ... glaringly ...

Kaun Hai Woh Gauri? Pandrah minute se kaunsi zaruri baat ho rahi hain uss insaan se???

She just turned her face not wanting to look at him ... in his eyes.

Jaane dijiye humme ... she said in a dry and frustrating tone still not looking at him ... Humme bohot zaruri kaam hai ...

Maine tumse kuch poocha Gauri ... Jawaab do! He tightened his grip on to her arms just to feel her warm we blood ... she was in pain ... he loosened the grip and tried to question her again but a distracting factor for him was Shivaay calling everybody in the cabin.

Everyone even the wheatish man stood in the cabin and Omkara got to know that he was ACP Arjun Rathore of Bareilly police when he informed that Kali was going elope to save himself in a goods train after three days ... Om just kept staring at him until Tej started fuming in anger ...

You realize Shivaay hum barbaad ho sakte hain ... the video and article in this chip is meagre ... we have to save ourselves ...

Haan Bade Papa ab Yaha tak pohoch gaye Hain toh iss problem ka solution bhi dhund lenge ... Shivaay was not able to figure out about what was he trying to do ... assuring Tej or assuring himself ...

Yeh sab mere bohot Laayak bete Omkara Singh Oberoi ki galti hai ... Tej announced continuing his blame game ...

Shivaay was sick and tired of trying to ecplain Tej about the scenario time and again but Gauri chose to speak this time ...

Dekhiye Mr. Oberoi Poori duniya jaanti hai ke iss kand mein sabse bada haath aapka hai ... aap bhi sach maan lijiye ... haalat se bhaag nahi paaenge aur kisi aur par jhoota ilzaam lagane ka koi matlab hi nahi banta ...

Omkara realized that she did not even want to take his name.

Tej was about to shout at her when Shivaay interrupted.

Haan Bade Papa ... Humme kisiko bhi galat saabit karne se zyada apna aapko sahi saabit karna hai

Shivaay from where the hell are we going to find any proof??? Tej threw away a paperweight from the table ...

And suddenly rang Arjun's phone ... CHAL CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA ... CHAL CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA CHHAIYYA ...

Everyone was feeling disgusted seeing him for his so special ringtone but the expression on Gauri's face suddenly changed .. Omkara knew that raised brow and lop sided smile... it was eureka moment for DABANG GAURI ... he understood her ...

Don't you dare Gauri ... now he was yelling


UPCOMING Meri Marzi!

Response awaited😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Superb update
I thought Gauri left
But here she was doing a sting operation
What all happened
Plz put some light on
Gauri's activities after leaving OM

ACP Rathore n Gauri
Omkara was so jealous
What is Gauri thinking
Omkara knows what she is thinking

Can't wait to read more
Waiting eagerly
Update soon

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