RiKara SS - SAIYYARA - Episode THREE Updated Pg 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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" Oh my dear son, it is just because of you ... That we are stuck in this mess ... You took the freaking responsibility of the Bareilly land deal ... Or didn't you ?!?!?! Tej had accused his son for the nth number of time now! If I am the one to be held responsible then I will be the one to sort the matters out ... You get it Mr. Oberoi ... Om shouted back. I will go to bareilly, Angry Kara announced ... We all will interrupted Shivaay ... "
So guys again the wheel of my brain is spinning with some new ideas of what can happen to RiKara after the three month time lapse ...

So tell me ... You like it ... You like it not! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue Pg 2
Episode ONE Pg 3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4861586 ">SAIYYARA

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

interesting plz continue it

For sure Ayushi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindukrishna

interesting Please continue

That I will sindu 😳
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So found the thead ... I am going to start working on this on now 😃😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yay another SS.. super excited and looking forward to this story unfolding the endless imagination of Rikara 😉

Great start.. update soon girl :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very Intersting
Pls cntnue soon
Edited by rikara94 - 8 years ago
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Hola Guys🤗

So I am here with another RiKara story which is on similar lines like that of the show but treated a bit differently. Here other factors remaining constant, Gauri is an 11th grade dropout and she can never be the damsel in distress because she is the distressing damsel!

Happy RiKara Reading


PROLOGUE


This story begins from the beginning when Omkara decides to take part in familial business responsibility and so goes to Bareillly to deal with Kali Thakur for a big piece of land. He meets Gauri there, is quite irritated because of her lingo and antics but literal height is when she crushes his car with a bulldozer making it look like a used tin can ... because he ruined the only source of her income, the small shop outside the Shiv Mandir which was not even hers but rented. She protested a lot after understanding that the atheist wanted to demolish the temple claiming right over the land. Their equation turned out to be like sodium held in air. Eventually both of them started to realize that if they behave like adults they can actually be civil to each other. Knowing that it was his debut single handed deal, she offered to help him with all the contacts she had because of her own small businesses. They worked together for a month and it was because of her that many locales agreed to work with Om. With her Omkara always chose to be formal and strictly professional but she was not able to resist the idea of falling ... falling deep for him. He was successfully able to seal the deal with Kaali Thaakur only to get to know that Gauri was about to marry him which made Jahnvi Thakuraaein commit suicide. Relating himself to the whole situation, he hated her now. He wished that she could have done all the marriage fiasco after he left Bareilly ... he felt betrayed. He was seeing how the whole city was celebrating Kali's wedding and so he chose to leave a day early. When he was about to sit in his car after putting the luggage ... he heard her faint voice which grew louder as she was screaming for help ... she came rushing to hide behind him. He was very confused but at the same time scared to see how each goon is holding something that can take away Gauri's life. She is a shameless girl! Everyone shouted ... she ran away from the Mandap ... came a different voice ... Omkara did not know what he was supposed to do, his hatred cannot false the fact that she helped him through and so he dragged her in front of some burning wood and leaves... lifted her in his arms owing to her injured foot to take the saat pheras and then filled her maang with his own blood. Feeling ridiculed ... he was shouting ... She is my wife now! Before anybody could do anything he threw her in the car and managed to drive amidst stones, bullets and tear gas. Gauri was not able to register about what and why did he do? The hopelessly tired was in pain. Om took her to Mumbai to the Oberoi Mansion and she got acceptance as Mrs. Omkara Singh Oberoi. Gauri was on the seventh cloud ... it felt like her life was a bollywood film ... she married the man she loved because of circumstance and now she was living her happily ever after. She noted that he had become an indifferent and difficult man to live with but she happily thought that she can solve the mosaic of him. Gauri's happiness was short lived until a point when she realized that Om brought her in his life just because he had plans of getting rid of Svetlana and what hurt more was his thinking about her of being an opportunist ... a gold digger and how he judged her to be Kali's Thakurs mistress. The high point of their brawl was how he was about to hit her ... he left her alone in tears and the only words looping in her mind were ... You will have to leave ... Leave this place, these people and all the money! Just go away Gauri ... and that is what she did ...


UPCOMING After Three Months


so guys let me know if i should continue or not ... is this worth your time? 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrenal11

Yay another SS.. super excited and looking forward to this story unfolding the endless imagination of Rikara 😉

Great start.. update soon girl :)

thank you so much shrenal ... i have plenned the first episode 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Very Intersting

Pls cntnue soon

jyoti 🤗🤗🤗 working on the first episode 😃

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