Rikara FF: In Between Ideals(Part 7- Page 15) 17.12 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Wow..!! Omie nd svetty are married..but om will fall for Ri...it's gonna be interesting to see svetty suffering to see her hubby with someone else..but I think Ri will be suffering more as she'll always be treated as a second woman for the world..omkara will love her, care for her, admire her...but he can't give her the rights of a wife nor he can protect her from the world...heartbreaking...can't wait to read more..continue soon...



He will protect her from the world but only think he can't give is the right of wife😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Yeah, this is great unisha.. Plz continue.



Thank you Ishani😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@All I will post first chapter tonight or tomorrow😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy

I am definitely gonna read this one. Update soon Nish



Thanks Deepu and this story will be from Omkara's POV most of the time😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Unisha123



really glad you like it😊
I am really excited to write this story. It will show the conflict in characters.. we have make a conception that all second women are home breaker or bad and wives are poor and helpless. I wanted see will a Gauri also consider as bad and home breaker who fill the color in Omkara black and white life. when she makes him smile and took out him from the darkness and will Svetlana will also considers poor when his husband left her and be with his lover when she only care about money, power and her ego. I want to show the conflict between Om's ideals and his feeling. He hate his father but he is in same path to became like him.
Kuch jyaada hi likh diya 😆😆


I know there will be lot of conflict
U r right
It's gonna change the Outlook
And give the POV of third person too
But will Svetlana even be worried
I know she has crush on Omkara
But isn't her aim money power n fame

Something new n unique
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful concept ❤️ continue it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

No proof reading 😊

"O please, doesn't do this, Please O" Rudra is trying to convince his big bro from the day he got to know about his brother decision. "Rudra please I have already taken my decision. I need to do this for mom." Om answer him without turn his face. He is looking himself in mirror. "I know Om you will not change your decision but please think once again you really not do this we will find other way. Shivaay know his brother is most stubborn one but still he tries. "There is no other option shivaay we have already tries to find other ways but now I really need to do this." He wears his pagadi and ready to leave room but ShivRu did not move from the place. He smiles "I know you don't want me to marry Svetlana but I want my brothers in my special day to be with me. You both are my support system I want your support bhai, please mujhe akla mat chodo. From today my life going to be completely change can't I expect my brother to be with me?" He asks with smile but his eyes are moist. ShivRu couldn't stop and hugged him. "We are with you O always." Rudra told while hugging him. "Om, we will support you no matter what decisions you take but I wish you will never regret your decision." Shivaay says while break the hug. "I also hope that Om also says with smile."

*Knock* Knock*

All turn toward door where they could see Svetlana is standing in bridal dress. "Can I come in? Svetlana ask them. "No kaha tho konsa andar nahi aaogi" Rudra said while making face. "You are right Rudra I mean devarji. She said and walking toward them with the sarcastic smile. "Can you both excuse me and my would be hubby for a min uske baat I won't disturb your Obbros moment." She ask them. She place her place her left hand on Om's shoulder. "Abhi tho disturb karhi diya hai aur kitna aarogi Rudra mummer to himself but heard by all. Shivkara don't say anything. "Did you say anything devarji?" "No, actually yes wo kya hai na shaadi ke phale dulha duhan ek dusre se akle me nahi milte aap ko jho baat karni hai humre samne karo Rudra command her while being all protective toward his brother. "come on Rudra you are modern young man and aaj kal ke jamane me kon manta hai sab and don't worry mein tumhari bhai ko kha nahi jaugi." She replies with sarcastic smile. "Kha gyi tho mere massom bhai ko lomdi kahiki. He remake in a whisper only shivaay heard him. He tries to control his laugh as this is not time but his brother makes it impossible. " Shivaay, Rudra, it's ok I will mange you both go and see the arrangements. Anika akeli hogi. Om said while blinking his eyes to assure them he will be ok. Both left him alone with Svetlana. She smile and turn toward him. "Good, you send them away. They can get in nerves sometime. "Svetlana! They are my brothers and I can't hear anything against them. If you want to marry me you have to adjust with them Omkara warn her in small but harsh tone. He didn't like her remark about his brother. They are his life and she need to be careful. Svetlana smile nervously she has already know about his anger when he almost kill her when she bad mouth his mom. She can't afford to make him angry. "Baby, relex mein tho yese hi bol rahi thi. I don't have any problem with them. "You want to discuss something? he asks rather. "You have promise me to give me my price. Svetlana flaunt her eye lashes toward him. He looks toward her confusingly then he remembers he had asked her price to leave his father and marries him. "Oh! So now you have decided your price? Omkara asks her mockingly. He can't believe he is actually meet woman who told her price and ask him to buy her and why even he is surprise the woman is Svetlana how he can expect any decency from her. "I have made an agreement paper for our marriage, prenuptial agreement she took out the papers. "Excuse me Omkara ask in uncertainty. "I have taken the biggest risk of my life by choosing you over Tej. Kya pata kab tumhara dil badal jaye and tum mujhe divorce dedo? You know mujhe mere future security ke bare me bhi sochna chahiye she smile and hand over the paper to him. "You can read before sigh. She smile cunningly Om look at papers and gave Svetlana furious look "don't you trust me; I am a man enough to take responsibilities of my promise. He displeased when she doubt his intention. He has no plan to give her divorce. He promises her something then he wills surly full filled it. He is man of his word. "Sorry baby but Svetlana kud Svetlana me bhi trust nahi karti. I have to make sure you will not leave me. "What if I will say I won't sign the papers? He dares her. Svetlana smirk if you don't want sigh its ok I will go for a option T I mean Tej I am sure he will be more than happy to marry me. Do you remember he still wants me? Think about your mom. What will happen to her when Tej divorce and I will take her place? How will she survive? she tries to sound innocent. "Will you shut up? he can't hear more. He heard enough how can he forget how shamelessly his father ask her to go back to him even after she choose om. "Ok I will sign he took pen and close his eyes he remind himself whatever he is doing is for his mother and he won't regret his decision in future. He sigh the papers. "As I did what you want can we proceed? I am sure everyone must be waiting for us. He said blankly. "Sure let's go.

Both sat on mandap and start their marriage process. Omkara was sat their blinkingly and going everything robotically without any emotions. He knows he himself push toward darkness and now he can't come back to his old self. This is not marriage for him but the dead of his old self. He fills her forehead and tied margalsurta on her neck. Panditji declare them husband and wife ask them to get blessing from elders. They did the same. Both reach dadi. Om touches her feet but Svet just blow her head. Dadi is not happy with marriage but still gave her blessing to them for om. After dadi they turn toward Pinky and shakti Om touch both feet but svet again just blow her head. "O My Mataa jethani nahi bahu bani ho ache feet ko touch tho karo tabi blessings deneka hearts hoga. Svet made face but still touch their feet properly this time. Om saw his brothers and his babhi anika. He go near them and svet just follow. He hugged his both brother. "O aap shadi karne dulhan ghar laye ho but yesa kyu lag lag raha hai aap paraya daan hoge ho" Rudra said with moist eyes. Omkara didn't say anything just tries to give fake smile. Rudra never gets his father and mother's love as they were always busy with their life and problems. He saw them fight like cat and dog but he has always his two brothers who protect him from every problems. He is not child he knows everything but still he use to smile and make others smile with his silly jokes but today he is seeing his older brother broken and unhappy but he can't even joke and make him happy.

"Svetlana apne jeth aur jethani ki feet touch karke blessings nahi logi. Pinky taunt her. "What, excuse me! They are smaller than me in age I think you are mistaken don't they should touch my feet?" Svetlana ask confusion she can't believe she has to touch Anika and shivaays feet. "O my mata nayi bahu rani rishte me tho Yeh tumse bade hai na aur hum jho rishto me jho bada hota hai uska feet touches karte hai umar se nahi. Pinky explains her. "Whatever!" svet make face and try to touch their feet but they didn't let her. "It's ok Svetlana aapko yeh sab karne ki jarurt nahi hai." Anika said blankly. She is not happy with this relationship. She knows Svetlana is not good for Om. Om is her friend first then her devar but she couldn't do anything for him. Shivaay doesn't even looking toward her. He is holding omkara's hand and looking toward his face. He is trying to read his face but first time he is not able too. He is not same Omkara he knew he has changed. He hates it. He always wants to protect him from everything like baby but he failed to protect him this time.

Omkara saw his father coming from outside. He called him "Mr. Oberoi you are late but it's ok late is better than never. Tej stop after hearing him. "Come, daring we need to take blessing from my father too. Om put his arm on her shoulder and pulls her toward tej. " Tej, opps mein bhi na I mean Sasurji gave us blessing that we will always be together no matter what. Svetlana told Tej with cunning smile. Both touch his feet but Tej didn't move. Om smiles "Mr. Oberoi I won and you lose. He said with smirk. Tej just smile. "As you touch my feet for blessing, I hope you won't become like me." He said while touch his face and left from their while Omkara stay still. "I won't become like you Mr. Oberoi. I can never be like you." He said to himself or he tries to make promise to himself for never being like him.

Pre-cap: Gauri's entry

Hope you like it😳

Edited by Unisha123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for the next part eagerly unisha. Jaldi Karna 😃

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