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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -simmi-

yayyy!!! am first 😃
What a mind bobbling update 👏

It was so emotional 😭
Okkay honestly i felt for Mahi and shivaay too 😔 the way you describe Mahi's situation it was lovely but i also believe somewhere in all this act he became selfish (a little) may be because he too wanted anika which i find absolutely justifiable!! 😊

For Shivaay i always saw him as a man so strong The Great Wall with a ego as big as sky who shy away from any kind of vulnerability and for him Anika is that vulnerability because somewhere he knew he loved her immensely!

i think both loved her but both were scared somewhere 😳 but mahi had advantage because he knew anika from a long time and he had time to processed his feelings whereas shivaay knew her for just 2-3 months and his upbringing and principles was in between his feelings for her 😳

and now its all about anika what she feels, what she wants?

But you know what i feel ..the bench scence where she carved "Anika Shivaay Forever" and mahi said that she will get all the solutions for her confusions there that is where she gonna get her answer and ofcourse as you said shivika is the end game !! Srry if m spoiling something but m too much excited 😃

Now do i need to mention that you are a wonderful, fabulous, fantastic (and their synonyms) writer? 👏 😉


It is but natural for someone in his position to become selfish right? When you have loved someone for a long time and suddenly that person starts loving you for the mask you wear.. So you decide, just one more day and I will reveal myself.
And also you caught an important part of my plot

Thanks for the comment.. It feels good when the first commentor leaves a satisfying response
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Wait what ???!!!
Gosh woman what have you done to my mind.
I never thought it would turn out this way. Never in the wildest dreams. Tia the cunning fox Arrrghhh.
I never liked dushyant, he was just dumb.
ShivOmRu are gonna be so freaked out in the next one. You've created something really fabulous here. Commendable I'd say.
Coming to Mahi...
Even though he was doing everything to save his one sided love this isn't correct at all. I know I know everyone will kill me for disliking that, but in my defence I don't think any lying should be involved in love. Mahi had 14 days to tell everything to her. Not only he didn't tell her but he made a date for the Doom's day to come. Anika had been enjoying intimacy with a man who possibly loves her but also isn't the one whom she desires.
I love the story it's remarkable, I just couldn't make myself like mahi even though he did everything for a reason. No Tia or dushyant would have come searching for him anywhere in kashmir. Cheating the person you love is as pathetic as killing a soul in my dictionary.

Thankyou for the update the Story is excellent.
Exquisite.

PS : Hoping that someday I'll get a comment from you for my story. :)

Lots of love
Ritzy


Mahi, is caught between a rock and a hard place. 😆😆😆 His POV will be explained in the next update. But i guess somewhere on the way when he experienced Annika's love, he too became selfish. Thanks Ritzy for your comment
I started with your FF and I loved your writing style but when you mentioned it was a dark ff. Honestly I get scared of dark FF especially when the writing is as powerful as yours. So I bookmarked it to read it once you were done😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

This is Amazing

Truly Amazing
I have become a fan of your writings
This is incredibly Brilliant
I am just speechleess ...u have made me short of words
My heart was running at a speed of 120 km/hr...i tell u while reading the whole update😆
Shivay was in Singapore and now he knows the truth
The mastermind behind all this was TIA
Mahi loved Anika for what seemed like almost 2 years...His Unrequited love
Awesome
Continue sooon
Pretty plz ... continue soon
I cant wait to know what is gonna happen next😊


Thank you so much.. I think an accelerated heart rate was what I was aiming for😆😆😆
Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: water9786

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What you have done dear?? I am totally speechless.. I don't have words to describe what I am feeling after reading these chapters.. I never even in my wildest dream thought that it will turn like this...
Update was super awesome and Mahi.❤️...
I know he is wrong but you have made me fallen in love with him a little..
So Mahi was the one who was with Anika in Kashmir.. and Shivaay was in Singapore...
That was the reason he carved A❤️ M.. Everything was like a dream till last chapter and it turned out to be like this..
Mahi loved Anika with all he has .. wanna ask something Anika knows about it or not..
Please don't make Anika misunderstand him.. he loves her so much..
You have made me fall in love with him..
Everything, every line was superb and wonderful..
Cannot wait to read more
Waiting for next update..
Please update soon..


Thanks for your comment...
As far as Annika misunderstanding Mahi is concerned, a feeling of betrayal isnt easy to digest no matter how deep the love😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pritzz

Shit , Holy Shit 👏

The whole story... Especially the second part and the ending...the way you placed your words... It was like unfolding a thriller amazing 👏

So it was Tia planting Mahi all the way.

Mahi was in love with Annika since 2 years 😔 Oh his unrequited love that he did not have the courage to approach her to give him a chance 😒

And He isn't bad If you want to Give Mahi a chance - He actually accepted to himself that Shivaay was Annikas life and he respected that. Untill he came to know that The heaven he saw from outside the mansion was actually a hell for Annika from inside. Now Love is crazy, love is madness, Love wants to see happiness and give happiness. He loved her. He did what love expected to do.

He Did not want to cheat Annika 😭 Poor Guy he did not want to. But Had too because LOVE. Love is both weakness and strength.

But he decided to play it NOT because he thought it's a good chance to get her . NO. But because he wanted to save her and give her a happy life she deserves.

I think I know where this going.. but I won't Share it here , I want to excitement to remain for myslef Too.

Just that please don't make Annika MISunderstand him till the end.
🥺

If not Love atleast let him have the happiness of getting her friendship. Her Bff. 😭😭

Unrequited love is most painful feeling.

Aasthi, your such a brilliant Writer. The twists are so sharp, I had a bumpy emotional ride throughout my reading. Once u finish I am gonna re-read all chaps together again. ❤️



I thought that u'd guess d plot.. our predictions were normally in sync remember.
Unrequited love is indeed a painful feeling..
I believe the next update... (well I wont reveal) 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Illuminati07


Mahi, is caught between a rock and a hard place. 😆😆😆 His POV will be explained in the next update. But i guess somewhere on the way when he experienced Annika's love, he too became selfish. Thanks Ritzy for your comment
I started with your FF and I loved your writing style but when you mentioned it was a dark ff. Honestly I get scared of dark FF especially when the writing is as powerful as yours. So I bookmarked it to read it once you were done😆😆😆


That is just the thing I thought. He became selfish and I hate it. What's the point of taking love that wasn't meant for you. Nothing.
Welcome.
Thankyou for appreciating my writing style. It isn't a dark story, dark stories contain lot of violence, my doesn't actually it's just a simple love story with a shot of tragedy.
Nowhere will you see Shivaay overpowering Anika. It is going to end actually next two parts and I'm finished with it. I don't have a powerful writing style just learning. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for such a prompt update... And making certain things clear for me. I think I see where this story is heading now... And am feeling a little better now. Shivaays redemption is going to a hard step for him but one which will for sure clear him of all his wrongdoings. I see an agnipariksha just this time he will be walking on the fire with his wife and not blaming her or even doubting her.
I am so excited.
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Posted: 8 years ago
uhhh dude you literally shocked me with this. I just read the whole thing and i was not expecting maahi to be part of the picture at all😲 I'm so intrigued by your story. But now i'm kinda upset cause you updated just now so that means next update isn't soon😭

wait so now will she be in a dilemma to choose between maahi and shivaay? Cause the man who she fell deeper in love with during the trip is maahi. He's the one who's been making her feel like the princess she is. Taking care of her, giving her the love she deserves. Shivaay, on the other hand, has just been accusing, misunderstanding, and torturing her the whole time, tho even with all that crap, he's the one who she fell in love with to begin with.

Actually on second thought, maahi's whatever he's doing is so messed up no matter what the intentions are. He basically kidnapped her, pretended to be her husband, whom she trusts, in the name of love, and deceived her for 2 weeks. If anything, she should be having PTSD symptoms after all this by just looking at shivaay or anyone that may remotely look like shivaay.

Oh boy shivaay's got it coming! But i feel more bad for annika. She has to go thru abduction, and post abduction symptoms now. poor girl

Update soon girl!
Edited by monmon95 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh god dont know what to say
why do i get the feeling that mahi will die saving anika
and anika will be so shattered seeing it
hopefully tia also die with him.
Shivaay you had lots of sins to be repented.
i dont know whom to support
whatever will happen its only anika who will be suffering.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my god I'm really speechless all the parts for exceptional I mean like they were so engaging full of emotions full of happiness full of sorrow a mixture of everything planning plotting you are an All-in-One writer I even love 3 months later it is one of my favorites please update the next episodes soon and kindly pm if possible

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