Enough! - A DBO-IB SS Chap 5 Pg 11(24/06)

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Super amazing episode

Wonder what Shivaay n Gauri talked

Must be something serious

Oberoi's need to brush up their hindi

Well I can understand their plight

Even I am weak in Hindi

Gauri will go mad explaining things to Oberoi's

Rudra was hilarious

Sultana... O ki life mei itni ladki

Jango...kaun hai aur 3 mahine bhuka rehke Zinda kaise hai

Portein shake🤣

Shivaay was shocked

Couldn't come up.with a plan

Well we have super Gauri for that

Always comes up.with something or the other

This time too amazing plan

Loved how Anika supported Gauri throughout

She against Shivaay

Poor shivaay ab 2 hai handle karne ko

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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Naina

@Naina280599

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

It's a treat to read chapters of two stories of yours in a day tbh! This was too good. Oberois' need language classes xD I wonder what gauri said to shivaye though O.o Rudy boy is too cute xD Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

awesome Loved yar...

it was too hilarious...

oberoi's should learn hindi properly...

dnt knw even the hindi of crocodile...

Poor rudy he is confused...how many girls are in om's life...sultana it was too funny yar

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Hi genie its so nice yar...wanna see how u took it further...i want to ur point of view...

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Preetii0005

@Preetii0005

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

amazing update dear
thanks for pm
waiting for next part

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Intersting plot genie👏

Nice update..i read all parts but om kahi bhi nahi tha usme😕

Chlo next part mein aa jayega

Very amazing ss dear

Love the dialogue Aap Oberoi khaandaan waale... school mein hindi nahin padhte kya? Hahha😉

And another o ki life mein itni ladkiya haii hume pta hi nahi chla😆

Thanks for the pm update soon

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

I could actually hear all their voices, this was so great. Exactly the way it would play on screen, with everybody speaking over one another. I love it.

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Super amazing episode
Wonder what Shivaay n Gauri talked
Must be something serious

Oberoi's need to brush up their hindi
Well I can understand their plight
Even I am weak in Hindi
Gauri will go mad explaining things to Oberoi's

Rudra was hilarious
Sultana... O ki life mei itni ladki
Jango...kaun hai aur 3 mahine bhuka rehke Zinda kaise hai
Portein shake🤣

Shivaay was shocked
Couldn't come up.with a plan
Well we have super Gauri for that
Always comes up.with something or the other
This time too amazing plan

Loved how Anika supported Gauri throughout
She against Shivaay
Poor shivaay ab 2 hai handle karne ko

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Thanks for that amazing, amazing comment Vrinda!

This is what I write for you guys... I'm so happy now Vrinda... thank you so much! 😭 (those are tears of joy btw)

I'm glad you liked the update... with an ensemble cast, I get to experiment with some comedy and various different interactions between the characters. This is what felt most natural while writing... if IB had retained its original OBro storyline and charm, this is my version of what it might've been like.

The Oberois do need some dictionaries and hindi lessons if they're gonna keep up with the two elder bahus.

Glad you liked it so much... Stay tuned for an update coming your way soon!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Naina280599
It's a treat to read chapters of two stories of yours in a day tbh! This was too good. Oberois' need language classes xD I wonder what gauri said to shivaye though O.o Rudy boy is too cute xD Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon!

Thanks for the love Naina...

I know LC and Enough! has taken a serious hit due to SIIC... but I think I have everything in hand atm... But I think SIIC and Enough will be getting updates on the same or consecutive days from now on... so you can expect to have more than one update to read on multiple stories sometimes.

The Oberois are in dire need of some dictionaries and language classes... poor things.

Glad you liked the update... stay tuned for another one coming your way soon!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Superb

Thanks!

I'm not sure if this is the first time I'm hearing from you... if it is, Thank you once again for taking the time to read and comment! Welcome to our li'l corner of this oft lovely forum.

If not, I humbly apologize... but thanks all the same, for reading and commenting!

Stay tuned for an update coming this way soon!