Shivika 3s- life changing DARE(college) part 5 pg9 *on request*2/6 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

Beautifully written :)

continue if possible



Hello dear rainbow ;) thankiieu ! And just read your " soothing the fire ff" waiting for the next part ;) just loving it honey
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

Aww...This was a cute and romantic Part

Shivika drowning in each other's love
Loved it
Please continue it😊



Thankiieu :) !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: water9786

Beautiful update..

Awesome
Update soon


Hey water ;) thankiieu buddy 😳 btw its so long no os/ff? Missing it honey :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sarcasticsmiley

Wonderful update...
So romantic hayee..!! Shivaay is such a gentleman..
Do continue and update soon..



Thankiieu :) btw your names is much lovely ;p
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: farinaks

Amazing
..cute romance
Update soon
Do pm me if possible
Tq for continuing it



Hey ! Thankiieu for the comment :) and sorry i dont give pms :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Sorry for late review...
Love this part a lot.. Tnq so much for this part Di...
You are such an amazing writer
Will wait for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Part 5



Shivaay was wide awake now and stopped all so noicy alarm clock bells!
Shivaay - annika! Wake up !!!
Shivaay- annika...uthooo
Shivaay- ANNIKA COME ON WAKE UP !
Shivaay(shaked her)- Anniikkaaa!

Annika- kaha aag lagi ? bhagooo !
Shivaay- ooh miss lady khumbkaran ! Kahi aag nhi lagi hai...
Annika- hey wait ! Did u called me lady khumbkaran? Are u insane?
Shivaay- OH HELLO! Tum soo toh aise hi rahi thi , khumbkaran jaise... (chuckled)

Annika(Stammering)- k..k..kyaa? Haa kya! She hardly patted on his shoulder!
Shivaay- oooch...kya kiya tumne? Apne newly made BOYFRIEND ko kon marta hai aise?
Annika- main marti hu na ?! Aur mar khani hain...idhar aao tum btati hu main...

With that these two billies ran all over the room !and suddenly both stopped! All sweating and panting !

Annika(breathing heavy)- pakad liya...tumko maine!
Shivaay- acha !?

And all of the sudden shivaay 's hormone came back and started raging LIKE a ignited lawa in the Volcano!
He pulled her on himself and she clashed on his stoned chest ! The very moment her breathing caught in her throat! Slowly he grasps her hand, lacing their fingers in a way that makes her heart beat ever faster! She always cursed herself of having this effect of him on herself! And there shivaay was enjoying teasing her raging breathe!

Annika(Deepest tone)- shiv..vaay chodo mujhe jaana hai... girls hostel khul...gya hoga...
Shivaay- abhi mera mann nahi..
Annika- par...
Shivaay stopped her by keeping his fingers! Anika felt as if 100s of butterflies started exploring her stomach and a strong cold wind passed through her giving her goosebumps!
And she took in a sharp breath and glance over at him, her cheeks scarlet red...
Shivaay always enjoyed this colour of her cheeks which he know was ONLY his privilege!

Annika- stop...teasing me okay?
Shivaay- its My right ! U cant take it from me !
Annika- mujhe...late ho raha hai..
Shivaay- jao na toh...
Annika- chodo ge toh na jaugi?
Shivaay left her hands which was laced with his !
And like cat runs for milk ,annika ran out of the hostel ,and entered girls hostel and safely landed in her room ! She thanked god for all being asleep in her way ! It was 5am and now she was waiting for the day to start ! It was going to be the first day of her official relationship! And she decided to take a power nap, then take bath and get ready for her beautiful day ahead!


At canteen

Shivaay felt something different in the air ! Everything seems to be beautiful and for the first time in his life, he felt to jump, dance, and sing in enjoyment!
The boy has been smiling since morning! Anyone can tell that its indeed something beautiful happening with him !
He felt Love is indeed so beautiful !
Annika felt a new hope, a new refreshing change in herself as if she is awakening for someone,and the beautiful thing is that she knew for whom is she !



And then she saw him, wearing her favroite black shirt, folded sheeves ; he looks so cute ! She thought
Suddenly he felt a beautiful feeling, a mesmerizing emotions and he knew it was his lady love there !
He looked back and saw HIS BEAUTIFUL ANGEL, wearing a blue mini dress, star earings and world's most beautiful smile adorning her face ! Somewhere he knew , and felt proud of himself for being the one and only one for her !


She came there and saw him gawking her she chuckled!
Annika- hello?
Shivaay- hmm
Annika- hellooo Mr. Cheapde singh oberoi!
Shivaay- fhat the wuck ? Cheapde!
Annika -(sitting opposite him) aise TAADOGE toh cheapde hi khehlaoge !
Shivaay- ab apni girlfriend ko dekhu bhi nhin?
Annika-nhin dekh sakte ho...kon rok raha tumhe!
Shivaay- koi rok bhi nhin sakta!
Annika- TADI !
Shivaay- naahhh *Haq*
She slightly blushed at his comment!
Shivaay- oho My blushing queen !
Annika (trying to change the topic) - toh wo... physics project par kaam kab chalu karna hai?
Shivaay- jab tum bolo !
Annika- aaj se karte hain...jaldi hojyga !
Shivaay- as u say my blushing queen!
Annika(frowning)- Hey im not blushing queen...!
Shivaay- ok ! Okay chill baba ! Btw m aaj pune jaa raha hu!
Annika- achanak se kyu?
Shivaay- humare motor k kuch parts yaha available nhin h...usse lene !
Annika- ooh ! Toh kab tak wapas aaoge?
Shivaay- abi gya nhin hu aur wapas kab aaunga kaise btau !
Annika- phir bhi?
Shivaay- kyu itna miss karti ho mujhe?
Annika- stop teasing me shivaay! Tumhe pta h na wo rasta raat m safe nhin hai...!
Shivaay- pta hai... m 8 bhje tak wapas aajauga !
Annika- theek h... !
Shivaay- chalo class ka time ho raha h..
Annika- chalo !







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i really hope you people like it plz your beautiful comments in comment box :) Its always a great motivation! Sorry for typos




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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
As usual again a very wonderful update..
U r indeed a very good writer dear..
U r having an amazing grip on ur language as well as words..
I just love ur updates..
I appreciate as u r continuing ur story specially on the requests of the readers..
Marvellous update.. awesome & thanks for the earlier complement dear..
Wanna read more..(puppy eyes)
Do update soon.. will be eagerly waiting..

Till then a loadzz of good wishes..!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Lovely update
So cute😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
awesome Loved it
shivaay is too cute in this avathar...

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