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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Beautiful!
So raw and real, so full of emotions and feelings! Loved it :)

-Sanu

Thank you so much Sanu 🤗

You saying it means a lot ;)

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

This is lovely Krishi!!❤️

The way Shivaay spoke his heart out to Annika, about how his own Mom was destroying his happiness, and how he wanted to stop being the Great Wall for just some time, how he wanted to be happy with his own guardian angel for a while - those dialogues are so beautifully written👏. I was a bit restless thinking about this week's epis which are surely gonna be quite disturbing to watch, but this one gave me some peace. Loved it!

Edited by _SilverLining_ - 8 years ago

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Rida Sadaqat

@ridz13sdqt

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Beautifullly written.. I loved how Shivaay confessed he needed Anika by his side.. always.. 😳 I am waiting for the track to unfold in the show as well..

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Oh my God, Krishi This is so so so beautiful. The way you wrote it, it's just perfect. ❤️ I loved it. :)

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Res partner!
Will come soon.Really missed your works!
I think you weren't in the forum for a few days :(

*******

Unress.

Dear Krishi🤗,

This is one of the most beautiful Os I've ever read.It wad realistic as well as piognant ❤️
I to wanted shivaay to give up all of this and just be shivaay Annika's shivaay for once.He is also a human.He also wanted someone by his side to be his wall to be his support it's not like Omru are not there but still annika is different. brotherly love and true love-- there is a vast difference in it. His frustation towards annika was really well potrayed.I'm too pissed off by Pinky's behaviour these days.She is just unpredictable.

Do write more buddy,
-Anya 😳

Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago

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ChaiPiyoge

@ChaiPiyoge

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Fantastic work 👏👏 loved it ⭐️❤️

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

awesome Loved it

it's just fantastic...you really portrayed Shivaay's emotions very well... I really don't know how tothe CV's are planning to expose pinky but shivaay will definitely be shattered because he will learn that his mom used his own weaknesses to take away the happiness,strength,the most valuable things away from his life... his annika...

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Summixxsummi

@Summixxsummi

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Man this is beautiful!!! Thanks a ton for the PM.

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meetaa_13

@meetaa_13

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Beautifully written!! Loved it 😳

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

frst thng...why did you stop dear????...u could hv written mre...nd i wud hv jst read on nd on nd on...with a smile on my lips imagining shivaay as an ideal man (caring fr both hs wife nd mom) and anika as a perfect woman (understanding the perspective of a mother nd supporting her husband also)...it ws a phenomenol story dear...do write more dear...thanks a lot fr d pm..else i wud hv missed such a nyc story..😊

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