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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Beautifully written 👏👏

Shivaay opened his heart and poured everything 😊

He confessed his live for her after that the hug was bliss😉

Keep writing. ...thanks for pm😛

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I would kill for a scene like this! It was beautifully rendered...all of his frustration and anger towards his mother...its got to culminate and he needs such an outlet...hoping we get something like this!!😛

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Awesome os

Thanks for pm me

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Beautiful ..lovely
U penned down his inner turmoil so brilliantly
I too wanna see something like this happening in the show
Thnx for the pm

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Dola Bhadra

@crazy-pri

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

It's beautiful... Ssly Shivaay is a human...but under this pressure of being the great wall of SSO the human who equally deserve to be loved cared & comforted can cry or be vulnerable has lost or suppressed... & U brought that hidden piece sooop neatly... It's just PERFECT...amazinggg...& thanx a lot for the pm...

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Gopika

@itsgops3010

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Awesome story... Keep writing 😳

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Nice...

Loved this shivaay..

Thanks for the pm

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

RES 😛 but it was amazing

UNRES

I only have one word: PERFECT

Like this was absolutely amazing and the Shivaay you illustrated was very much like the reel Shivaay. 👏 👏 👏

I just hope that something like this happens, but after today's episode, I don't know whether Shivaay would react like this 🤔

But your OS has been captured in my memory forever 😳

WAITING TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK! 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_
This is lovely Krishi!!❤️

The way Shivaay spoke his heart out to Annika, about how his own Mom was destroying his happiness, and how he wanted to stop being the Great Wall for just some time, how he wanted to be happy with his own guardian angel for a while - those dialogues are so beautifully written👏. I was a bit restless thinking about this week's epis which are surely gonna be quite disturbing to watch, but this one gave me some peace. Loved it!

Thanks a lot ❤️

I for one, want this to happen. Shivaay needs to show some emotions of this sort :)

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ridz13sdqt
Beautifullly written.. I loved how Shivaay confessed he needed Anika by his side.. always.. 😳 I am waiting for the track to unfold in the show as well..

I am so glad you liked it Rida😳

I am waiting too... Hopefully, it ends like we want it to😆

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