Shivika SS : 'The Raven And The Rambler.' Epilogue. - Page 4

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hello Ritzy🤗 Well I know you don't know me but believe me dear your stories are just awsm(Well I know I didn't review them 😛 bad me! was too lazy to do that but I do assure you that i will try my best to comment here)

Coming to the update It was really interesting.Annika lost her husband.Is shivaay her hubby? Well if that so then it will be really heart wrenching.Actually I just move away from sad ending stories but this just took my attension and I hope I won't regret my dicision!😆

The banner is really beautiful❤️ Just Loved it!

Do continue soon dear! Eagerly waiting for the next😳

Love you,

-Anya😃

Originally posted by: Sanjana2412

Well I read the prologue.

As far as your writing skill is considered, no doubt its really good.

You made a good start to the story. No doubt you possess a great writing skill.

But is it Annika who is rejoicing her husband's death, if it is so then I don't like her character here.

How can can she be so cruel too be happy at someone's death.

Nice start but I dislike the character.

Anyways all the best as this is your first work on this forum.

Originally posted by: --Risha--

Intriguing start! Continue soon, ya! 😉

Originally posted by: angel_writer

Hiii Ritzy🤗..

even i love long comments...any writer would love that😛

about the banner...

i really loved the banner. the pics you chose for it was awesome...

its really beautiful..❤️

now about SS..

its very much intriguing...

i think that woman is Anika ...but i think that the husband about whom she is talking is not shivaay...

i am hoping so...

lets see...

btw awesome starting...

n thnx fr the pm dear...

Originally posted by: -Ishqbaaaz-

Thank you for the pm :)

THE EDIT OMGG ITS GORGEOUS!!!!

Need to do some errands.. will come back and read in a bit :)

Originally posted by: -Ishqbaaaz-

Interesting start. Interested to know the back story of this dead husband who she seems to hate.

Post the first part soon please 😳

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Hiya dear! So glad you started this. I would always encourage people to write, especially for this forum. This is the perfect place for all you talented people 😉 When you told me you are going to post it soon you really meant it. 😆👏
And I loved the prologue part, definitely gonna read this. 😳 The story seems mysterious, interesting and you managed to portray some strong emotions there! ;) Seems like she couldn't stand it anymore and finally managed to "escape". I love strong emotions in such stories...
Girl, your rules are really amazing! 😆 And about your writing style I just wanna tell you that it is beautiful... 🤗 I truly admire your honesty and trust me, you have great skills. 😳👏
Waiting for the next update. Take care

Dear Ritzy,

I know I am being foolish to guess this at this point... but still...

Why do I feel, that its Daksh whom Anika was married to and who died 😆 ... I presume it definitely cant be Shivaay unless its a case of hit and miss, I mean like typical daily soap where dead people return back which is highly illogical for me, considering the way they bring it to show.

I am a sucker of happy endings:-) I sincerely hope this will have one:-) I am not much an angst reading person though but yeah for a while, I can:-)


Lots of Love
- Harshada

Interesting start...

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Dear Ritzy,

I know I am being foolish to guess this at this point... but still...

Why do I feel, that its Daksh whom Anika was married to and who died 😆 ... I presume it definitely cant be Shivaay unless its a case of hit and miss, I mean like typical daily soap where dead people return back which is highly illogical for me, considering the way they bring it to show.

I am a sucker of happy endings:-) I sincerely hope this will have one:-) I am not much an angst reading person though but yeah for a while, I can:-)


Lots of Love
- Harshada