Shivika SS : 'The Raven And The Rambler.' Epilogue.

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: KashiTessa
Loved the prologue.
It was having a different story line and I am loving the difference.
Well waiting for updates
could you pm me?

Thankyou for commenting.

Will add you in the list. :)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

very interesting start..please do PM me..😊

Edited by MysticRiver - 8 years ago

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Hello Ritzy🤗 Well I know you don't know me but believe me dear your stories are just awsm(Well I know I didn't review them 😛 bad me! was too lazy to do that but I do assure you that i will try my best to comment here)

Coming to the update It was really interesting.Annika lost her husband.Is shivaay her hubby? Well if that so then it will be really heart wrenching.Actually I just move away from sad ending stories but this just took my attension and I hope I won't regret my dicision!😆

The banner is really beautiful❤️ Just Loved it!

Do continue soon dear! Eagerly waiting for the next😳

Love you,

-Anya😃

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Sanjana

@Sanjana2412

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Well I read the prologue.

As far as your writing skill is considered, no doubt its really good.

You made a good start to the story. No doubt you possess a great writing skill.

But is it Annika who is rejoicing her husband's death, if it is so then I don't like her character here.

How can can she be so cruel too be happy at someone's death.

Nice start but I dislike the character.

Anyways all the best as this is your first work on this forum.

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Risha

@--Risha--

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Intriguing start! Continue soon, ya! 😉

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Neha Maurya

@Neha_Maurya

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Hiii Ritzy🤗..

even i love long comments...any writer would love that😛

about the banner...

i really loved the banner. the pics you chose for it was awesome...

its really beautiful..❤️

now about SS..

its very much intriguing...

i think that woman is Anika ...but i think that the husband about whom she is talking is not shivaay...

i am hoping so...

lets see...

btw awesome starting...

n thnx fr the pm dear...

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@ChaiTeaWali

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Thank you for the pm :)

THE EDIT OMGG ITS GORGEOUS!!!!

Need to do some errands.. will come back and read in a bit :)

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@ChaiTeaWali

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Interesting start. Interested to know the back story of this dead husband who she seems to hate.

Post the first part soon please 😳

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hiya dear! So glad you started this. I would always encourage people to write, especially for this forum. This is the perfect place for all you talented people 😉 When you told me you are going to post it soon you really meant it. 😆👏
And I loved the prologue part, definitely gonna read this. 😳 The story seems mysterious, interesting and you managed to portray some strong emotions there! ;) Seems like she couldn't stand it anymore and finally managed to "escape". I love strong emotions in such stories...
Girl, your rules are really amazing! 😆 And about your writing style I just wanna tell you that it is beautiful... 🤗 I truly admire your honesty and trust me, you have great skills. 😳👏
Waiting for the next update. Take care