To start with - I want to apologize for not reading and commenting on this before. I am sorry although I was updated about this but as I was off from forum for sometime during march april and I did not quite come around here during that period was busy in My Native. 😊
Okay But I love u way too much to skip your writings that is why i did a binge reading today.. all drabbles at once.
BUT this drabble series of yours was an Amazing Long Romantic drive for me. I was blushing and grinning like a love sick puppy all through my reading. I love how u personify their unsaid feelings and Radiating desire between them that they keep exchanging and yet have their control in their hand. They are like Over Filled water In the damn.. it's spilling but the moment the barrier breaks they will destroy every skin they have. Mad bulls kept behind the barricades. 😆
As I said I am NOT good and very keen at giving huge comments, lengthy and detailed but Because I have 7 drabbles to comment on and Too much love to show u.. I have written a short take on every drabble you wrote.
Drabble 1 - A moment of few seconds and u make it sound so romantic , One look, one touch, a breath, one instance and U make it a memory to blush over for years to come
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Drabble 2 - A simple eye lock when becomes a conversation full of unsaid desire, burning yet Keeps you calm.
Annika I love how u put words their batting eye lashes and frozen moments... it's like the time has stopped yet ShivIka are moving driven by desire.
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Drabble 3 - "How she had missed his presence, His touch, His scent, His closeness and Him"
Waowww *blushes* Annikas raw mind in here in words... she indeed missed HER Shivaay... the sense of Detachment that she had when Nakli Shivaay around... she couldn't understand that because she never knew she too loved His Touch , his gaze on her and His scent.. It was because of THIS uncontrollable and Naive Desires she doesn't know is growing on her is what made her go and Wish him Holi by applying colour because THE touch was the need of time for her... She had indeed missed him and his warmth.
Shivaay ever since he looked at Annika after the kidnap scene.. he is so different and kind of more aroused with his feelings.. As if he has realized in those dreadful days away from her in the dark alone that what he wants is her... he always wanted her... he started savoring every minute he has with her as if Thats his drug. The moment he saw her first , no words no explaination, no othee thoughts JUST Annika and Her TOUCH is what he needed... as if that would give him the PROOF that he is alive and still breathing.
Very detailed scene with depth in it and it got its meaning because of u Anni.. U put their exchange of desires and emotions with Exceptionally perfect words.
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Drabble 4 - Cheesy? God Damn! It was so sensual. If u ask me I would say this was the perfect scene to depict what ShivIka romance is. It's not at all soft And mushy, they are tadibaaz duo. I loved the way they showed the plate breaking.. shows how rough they are.. passion and intense romance is best when Heated and rough and ShivIka are not made for Flowery and cheesy mushy romance. No. They are for romance where more plates break, clothes are thrown, water is splashed, silence is shyed away, breath becomes unruly, eyes wide open and locked and time is stopped.
Intensity unke Rag Rag me bhara hai.
And U my girl have just Made them reach a level higher by Defining their undefined desires. U r are Taking our breath away drabble by drabble.
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Drabble 5 - Cute, So Cute! It was was full of Blazing cuteness. The HOT quotient was added by Shivaay Ofcourse and Cuteness by Annika. Shivaay for sure has understood Taming Annika has just one Mantra. INTENSE ROMANCE. One intense look with his blue eye surrounded by saffire and Annika will crumble down into softness, trapped in his burning eyes filled with Desire. He knows that his words won't make her understand what he wants but his Dark Gaze cutting through her wall of control definitely can.
Shivaays Smile when Annika was "giving dard" to him LOL, showed exactly what switch did Annika flipped ON, it looked like shivaay just thanked god for her innocence and naivety in all this.
Again All this beautifully explained by you in perfect words designed for their ongoing thoughts at that moment.
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Drabble 6 - See THIS.. THIS I was talking about...this is THEIR TYPE of Romance. Rough, heated, burning, Adamant, strong, Loud, Clashing, Breaking, Twisting, Blaming, Yanking, Pulling, pushing, throwing, drowning, Intertwining, Tangling and what not... IT everything But Calm and silent. It's everything but Smooth. Sun and Lava meeting here.
Girl Tone down with your words please PLEASE. U are gonna kill me with your drabbles. Reason of death would over blushing. U r crossing the best each passing drabble. I am love with these short drabbles u write. Capturing emotions and Unsaid love and Controlled Desires. They are dying to Tangle into each other just that being the tadibaaaz duo they are, none want to give in first. It's hilarious and cute and humongously HOT to watch them evoke each others desire with such little Sensual talks yet not give in to get what they are dying for.
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Drabble 7 - This was the phase where he has Crossed the wall and is a step closer to her. No more shyness, no more trapping her in his eyes pool of lust and love because now he can Pull her and hold her and Tease her without having to prepare her because Now he has lost patience and he knows and has seen the desire in her eyes but not as Fiery and Wipping lava waves as his but he cares less Because he is more than happy to Enjoy and savour The eternal Truth that SHE IS HIS. She gives in first or no... you are mine and mine forever. U are mine to touch, hold, twist, soothen, caress, kiss, stare or whatever my heart says and I don't need your permission to do that because I have claimed you and That is enough for me, for US. Take your time, I don't mind. But U CANNOT stop me.
Anni darling.. every drabble was worth reading, rolling on bed re-reading and blushing.☺️
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P.s my comment has less of smileys and Lols because I have typed this in my mobile.. saving each para after reach each drabble. So couldn't Add the required and necessary smileys.. I hope u understand what comes where 😛😆, also ignore the typos. 😊
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