Drabble Series- ||Baagad Billa & His Biw|| *new-pg19 no pms - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Too good.. Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Read all the drabbles in one go...
Really loved each and every drabbles...
Very beautifully written...
And the GIFs are❤️❤️...
n thnx fr the pm dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Aise na muje tum dekho
Sene se laga longa
Tum ko main churana Lunga tumse
Dill main chupa lunga...😳

Omg anii
This is beyond words...
Love this dabble series...
This was so amazing...
Love it so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Deze two wld be d cause of my death specially diz baghadbilla wid all hiz hot sexy sensuous gud luks nd diz kanji aaankhein dey relly chnge colors...waiting fr d nxt drabble pm me
Edited by farinaks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
You wrote really damn deep Annika!
This description gives more more effect on the scene!!!Fabulous written!


One bit i loved the most

"Agar hua bhi, toh Bhi main nahi bolungi!" Her words scratched his heart and did damage to his already violent ego. His eyes still burning in the fire, which had started in his heart.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Aise na muje tum dekho

Sene se laga longa
Tum ko main churana Lunga tumse
Dill main chupa lunga...😳

Omg anii
This is beyond words...
Love this dabble series...
This was so amazing...
Love it so much...




Well song suits well...hahha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

wow

i never thought a hand twisting can be this much hawwwt...you have a way with using words Annika
it's awesome


😆
Thanks Aparna..!
I m highly ahhh... A papu at writing such kinds of passionate scenes , but seeing these gifs ...writing them.becomes easier..!😆
Just Learning😆

Originally posted by: angel_writer

Read all the drabbles in one go...
Really loved each and every drabbles...
Very beautifully written...
And the GIFs are❤️❤️...
n thnx fr the pm dear...


Ur welcome Nehu..!
Miss u around..!🤗

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Aise na muje tum dekho

Sene se laga longa
Tum ko main churana Lunga tumse
Dill main chupa lunga...😳

Omg anii
This is beyond words...
Love this dabble series...
This was so amazing...
Love it so much...


Ahaan..!😆
Thank you Khushiji..!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
A Short Shot-
|| Tu Chaaiye ||

Gif Credits-naadanmasakali
(Thanks A Ton Fary, your work is much appreciated)⭐️




"Main aap ko jhel ti hoon!" She exclaimed, and that was it. The very next second he pulled her to himself..Her body hitting his as his arms encircled around her waist locking her close to him. She arched backwards to maintain the distance between their faces, not to much help. Her elbows now were caged between their upper bodies. She struggled to hold on to the clothes with her left hand. His eyes gazed at her inviting lips. He moved closer pulling her still closer if that was possible.

She looked him in the eye, they expressed way much than he spoke. His actions sure spoke loud but his eyes spoke still louder. She couldn't break the eye-lock. She tried hard to look away, but failed desperately.He knew she was captivated, the way she looked at him told him all. He blinked moving closer giving her a chance to take her eyes off. He spoke up-"Kya Kahaa!" His voice helped her revive her thinking capability.

With much struggle she finallyspoke up-"Ye aap Kya Kar Rahe Hain!" Their closeness sending shivers up her body.
"Jhel thi ho naa tum mujhe , bas dehk raha hoon kaise jhelti hoo tum mujhe!"




"Mujhe Jana Hai!" She said
Thanks to the proximity,it made it sound more like a plead. He knew it, she felt it. The same that he felt. She wanted ti be there as much as he wanted it. "Toh jaao naa Anika!" He said his eyes caressing every bit of her face.
The way his sight touched him, only added to the mushiness she felt inside her. She couldn't move.
She was scared that theunknown desires within her may win. She was scared of the consequences of his proximity.

"Mujhe jaana hai !" She pleaded. His eyes played to and fro between her lips and eyes.
"Jao na Anika!" He said huskily with a tinge of naughtiness in his voice. He knew she couldn't move. His gaze still causing havoc within her. She was breathing heavily due to fear or anticipation, even she din't know.



He took advantage of her lostness and slowly moved his hands from her back to her waist. She inhaled a sharp breath as she felt his hand move , having no other resolve she clutched the clothes tightly. His mere touch through the coarse fabric, had heated up her skin. Her face was flushed. He crushed her waist in his hold. She took in a sharp breath and looked down. Her eyes settled on his hand, clutching on to her waist. He closed in near her forehead, feeling her, breathing her. She looked up at him with questioning eyes. What was she to understand from this.!
She looked up at him for an answer. He simply blinked his eyes reassuringly. His eyes asking Don't you trust me Anika?

She simply looked down at his lips and back to his eyes, letting her tensed body relax. She trusted him. More than herself.



He smiled. He read her answer. He couldn't be happier. He noticed the clothes that had been in between them. He din't care, nothing could come in between them. He took her dupatta and threw it up behind, without caring to see where it went. It felt like he was removing all barriers between them.They indeed had.! They had removed all that could separate them, and he would always. Nothing could come between them , Nothing! His face reflected his happiness. She blushed. The way he looked at her, made her go week in her knees.She reflected that joy in his face.

The remaining piece of cloth had the same fate as the previous. She couldn't help but hyperventilate. Her body shivered as he jerked her closer. Their bodies colliding. Her breathing was way out of rhythm. Her heart thudded. He felt her body collide against his. He was enjoying the effect he had on her. He loved the way she looked at him. He loved the way her heart thudded when he was close. He Loved Her!

She clasped her left hand on to his kurta near the neck. She feared she might melt the next moment. She tried hard to meet his eyes but the fire of desires she saw in his drugged eyes burned her raw. Her body trembled as his right hand slid back over her waist, pushing her more into him.

If their desires had a chance to dance a little longer, she was sure she would have been ash in his blazing desire.

*********************************************


P.S
Couldn't help but write on this scene. Amazingly brought about on the screen.
Hope you all liked it!

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: annikaa

A Short Shot-
|| Tu Chaaiye ||

Gif Credits-naadanmasakali
(Thanks A Ton Fary, your work is much appreciated)⭐️


"Main aap ko jhel ti hoon!" She exclaimed, and that was it. The very next second he pulled her to himself..Her body hitting his as his arms encircled around her waist locking her close to him. She arched backwards to maintain the distance between their faces, not to much help. Her elbows now were caged between their upper bodies. She struggled to hold on to the clothes with her left hand. His eyes gazed at her inviting lips. He moved closer pulling her still closer if that was possible.

She looked him in the eye, they expressed way much than he spoke. His actions sure spoke loud but his eyes spoke still louder. She couldn't break the eye-lock. She tried hard to look away, but failed desperately.He knew she was captivated, the way she looked at him told him all. He blinked moving closer giving her a chance to take her eyes off. He spoke up-"Kya Kahaa!" His voice helped her revive her thinking capability.

With much struggle she finallyspoke up-"Ye aap Kya Kar Rahe Hain!" Their closeness sending shivers up her body.
"Jhel thi ho naa tum mujhe , bas dehk raha hoon kaise jhelti hoo tum mujhe!"




"Mujhe Jana Hai!" She said
Thanks to the proximity,it made it sound more like a plead. He knew it, she felt it. The same that he felt. She wanted ti be there as much as he wanted it. "Toh jaao naa Anika!" He said his eyes caressing every bit of her face.
The way his sight touched him, only added to the mushiness she felt inside her. She couldn't move.
She was scared that theunknown desires within her may win. She was scared of the consequences of his proximity.

"Mujhe jaana hai !" She pleaded. His eyes played to and fro between her lips and eyes.
"Jao na Anika!" He said huskily with a tinge of naughtiness in his voice. He knew she couldn't move. His gaze still causing havoc within her. She was breathing heavily due to fear or anticipation, even she din't know.



He took advantage of her lostness and slowly moved his hands from her back to her waist. She inhaled a sharp breath as she felt his hand move , having no other resolve she clutched the clothes tightly. His mere touch through the coarse fabric, had heated up her skin. Her face was flushed. He crushed her waist in his hold. She took in a sharp breath and looked down. Her eyes settled on his hand, clutching on to her waist. He closed in near her forehead, feeling her, breathing her. She looked up at him with questioning eyes. What was she to understand from this.!
She looked up at him for an answer. He simply blinked his eyes reassuringly. His eyes asking Don't you trust me Anika?

She simply looked down at his lips and back to his eyes, letting her tensed body relax. She trusted him. More than herself.



He smiled. He read her answer. He couldn't be happier. He noticed the clothes that had been in between them. He din't care, nothing could come in between them. He took her dupatta and threw it up behind, without caring to see where it went. It felt like he was removing all barriers between them.They indeed had.! They had removed all that could separate them, and he would always. Nothing could come between them , Nothing! His face reflected his happiness. She blushed. The way he looked at her, made her go week in her knees.She reflected that joy in his face.

The remaining piece of cloth had the same fate as the previous. She couldn't help but hyperventilate. Her body shivered as he jerked her closer. Their bodies colliding. Her breathing was way out of rhythm. Her heart thudded. He felt her body collide against his. He was enjoying the effect he had on her. He loved the way she looked at him. He loved the way her heart thudded when he was close. He Loved Her!

She clasped her left hand on to his kurta near the neck. She feared she might melt the next moment. She tried hard to meet his eyes but the fire of desires she saw in his drugged eyes burned her raw. Her body trembled as his right hand slid back over her waist, pushing her more into him.

If their desires had a chance to dance a little longer, she was sure she would have been ash in his blazing desire.

*********************************************


P.S
Couldn't help but write on this scene. Amazingly brought about on the screen.
Hope you all liked it!


enchantinggg n beautifulll 👏👏 I melted in this scene like how 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
You have done full justice to what Narbhi had portrayed in the scene.
Loved the shot.
👏

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