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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Awsm ekdam jhakaas!!!
Love to see A jealous SSO...
Arnav ji bachke rahna...
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Update soon...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

Really Shivay... Are you kidding???

If you are not jealous then what were u??
I would love to see Shivay loosing the challenge..
Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊


Thanks
But I think shivay will not easily lose 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing update
Great Shivay is ready to redeem himself just to make himself worthy of Anika
But why can't he accept that he is jealous of Arnav???
Let's see what will happen at the party
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

I am single, but people often read my work and ask me if I have someone, and I say nope I am alone with a great imagination


That's true. One of my friend say people who are single gives the best relationship advice. But indeed u have great imagination.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm ekdam jhakaas!!!
Love to see A jealous SSO...
Arnav ji bachke rahna...
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Update soon...



Thanks a lot. Lagat Hai FSSO ka bhukhar sabko Chad Gaya. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing update
Great Shivay is ready to redeem himself just to make himself worthy of Anika
But why can't he accept that he is jealous of Arnav???
Let's see what will happen at the party
Waiting for next update


He want to give their relationship a second chance but he is not able to accept the fact that he is affected by Annika because of his ego.

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: chashi


angel writer i don't know how to thank u. i am seriously very happy 😃. it is the longest comment i ever got for this story.
you analysed the parts very well 👏. your words encourage amateur writers like me to write more. thanks for liking my hindi.
i'm bit a emotional so if blabbered too much sry and once again a very big thank you for your words.😊😊


u r wlcm dear...
i am happy that my comments made u happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

Many of you are having doubts regarding shivika's marriage. Here is a short glimpse of flashback so that u can understand better

Flashback

This scene is set after daksh's exposal

Tej requested media not to publish this news

Tej: don't worry Shivay I requested media not to leak this news

Shivya: but bade papa I want everyone to know about our relationship. I can't tolerate a single word against Annika

Dadi: billu sahi kah raha hai puttar. We should announce this to world

Tej: I understand your decision Shivay but now we r not in a situation to announce this news. We are already facing many problems because of kapoors. We nearly lost 500 crores deals of shuklas. I can't afford to lose more.

Shakthi: but bhai sab anyway someday we have to declare this news to the world

Tej: shakthi tu sahi kah ra hai. We have to inform this news to the world. But Shivay after 6 months u can announce this news. By that time we can solve all this issues. We will have a press meet and can announce this news. Till then no one should know about your relationship.

Shivay: but bade papa

Annika: Shivay bade papa is right. U accepted me as wife that is very much enough for me. I can wait for 6 months. I have trust on u.

Shvay: but what if someone insult u again. I can't tolerate it.

Tej: if this is your problem then u can reveal your relationship truth if u feel it's very necessary.

Annika: I'm okay with it

Tej: then it's final

Flashback ends

Morning at shvika's room

Shivay came out from his washroom after taking bath. He found a gift box with a note on it. He read the note.

Shivay yeh aapko bahut ajeeb lagega

Par mein aapse kuch kehna chahthi hoon

Mein chizhen fekthi hun aur aap chizen thodthe

Yahi humara rishtha hai

Aapne mere liye bahut kuh kiya

Aaj pehli baar mein aapke liye kuch laayi hun

Meri taraf se ek chota sa thofa

Aap mere zindagi ka sabse bada sach hai shivay

Aur mein chahkar bhi aapko nahi bul paungi

Aap mere liye sabse important ho

Agar apko gift acha laga toh party mein pehenkar aana

Annika


Shivay smiled widely and opened his gift. He found a wine colour suit.

He felt very blessed and happy. He was happy on the fact that Annika cared for him. His thoughts got disturbed when he sensed a flash light.

Shivay: what r u doing rudra?

Rudra: taking your photo bhaiya

Shivay: I can see it but why u r doing it?

Rudra: because my lovely bhaiya is blushing.

Shivay: shut up rudra why will I blush?

Rudra: obviously bcoz of Annika bhabhi. By the way bhaiya aapke haath mein kya hai

Shivay: nthg rudra just a gift

Rudra: oh oh bhabhi gifted u right. That's why u r blushing.

Shivay: I'm not blushing

Rudra: ok bhaiya aap ghusa mat kijiye. Mein aapko chedunga nahi.

Shivay: koi kaam tha kya

Rudra: haan bhaiya I forgot to say. Bhabhi asked me to inform u that she directly went to arnav bhaiya's house for checking arrangements. She asked u come to party directly.

Shivay: yeh Annika ko vahan itni jaldi jaane ki kya zaarorat thi

Rudra: bhaiya I feel like something is burning

Shivay: shut up rudra aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. First u tell me about your semester marks

Rudra: bhaiya voh marks I forgot it. I will see and tell u later. He ran away from the room.

Arnav's house

Evening

Oberois reached the venue. Raizadas welcomed them. They congratulated MR and MRS raizada for their anniversary. Amidst of all these shivay's eyes only searched for Annika. He was eagerly waiting for her. That's when he saw her angel coming. He can't believe his eyes. He was awestruck by her beauty. She was wearing a wine coloured gown matching his outfit.

Annika saw shivay. Their eyes exchanged a lot of emotions. She was proud of her selection. Her husband was looking breath taking in that suit. She was jealous because many girls were drooling on him. Shivay went towards Annika.

Shivay: beautiful

Annika looked around

Shivay: why r u looking around Annika?

Annika: u always say arrangements are beautiful

Shivay: but this time

Shivay held her hand and kissed it.

You are beautiful

Annika was shocked.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Annika was standing like a statue

Shivay; Annika I am talking to u

Annika: shivay woh first time u complimented me that's why I am shocked

Shivay: I guessed it

Annika: you r also looking very handsome in this suit

Shivay: I know Annika I am very handsome and u r checking me out

Annika: ji nahi mein apko tad nahi rahi thi

Shivay: aniko jab pati itna handsome and hot ho toh tadne mein koi galti nahi hai

Annika: cheapde kaike shivay aap kabse aise baat karne lage

Shivay: jabse tumhe p...

Annika: aap ruk kyun gaye

Shivay: voh sab chodo thank u for the gift

Arnav: sorry MR.oberoi for interrupting. I want to ask Annika will u dance with me?

Shivay was giving an angry glare. Even arnav got afraid for a second but he composed himself. Before shivay could say anything he dragged Annika to the floor. Shivay sweared to kill arnav for this but he have to be patient. .

Music started

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

arnav and Annika started to dance. Arnav held annika's waist with one hand and her shoulder with other hand. They started moving slowly

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
Haey tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri


mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

Her eyes never left shivay. Even though she is physically dancing with arnav, all her thoughts revolved around shivay.


mere dil vich re ke mere
dil da haal na jaane
tere baajo kaleyan be ke
ronde nain numane
jeena mera Haaye
marna mera naal tere si
kar aetibar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

shivay was looking at Annika desperately. His orbs displayed many emotions. He remembered his sangeet dance with Annika. How he held her hands and the feeling of having her in his arms was mere enough to create butterflies in his stomach

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji


HOo,oo,o,o
ni changa nai O kitaa
ve changa nai O kitaa
dil mera torr ke
ve bara pachtaya akhaan
ve bara pachtaya akhaan
tere naal jorr ke

Annika thought about her almost missed kiss. She don't know herself why she was very much attracted to shivay. His presence made her heart jump in happiness.

sunjiyan sunjiyan dil diya galiyan
sunjiyan meriyan baawan
aaja teriyan khashboo walon
love diyan meriyan saaman
tere bina ki main karaan door udasi
dil beqrar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

Shivay couldn't control his anger anymore. He was having a bouquet in his hand and he started to pluck out and crush the flowers to control his anger.

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji
Haaye tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri


mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

Song ended and everyone clapped for them

Omru came towards shivay and noticed the bouquet in his hand

Rudra: o don't u think bhaiya is desperately looking at someone

Omkara: u r right rudra. I feel lke shivay want to kill someone.

Shivay: both of u shut up aisa kuch bhi nahi hai

Omkara: don't get angry shivay. We are just telling the truth. Look at the bouquet in your hands.

Shivay: voh I don't like these flowers that's why I did this. U guys enjoy the party I have to make a call.

Saying so shivay left the place

Rudra: o I think bhaiya is very much angry

Omkara:. U know na he is very much possessive about his things.

Rudra: haan o u r right bhaiya can't see bhabhi with arnav

Omkara: unless he say his feelings this will not get sorted out

Rudra: I wish the same

Arnav: u danced very well Annika

Annika: thanks arnav. I have to make an important call can I go. (Actually she wanted to meet shivay)

Arnav: yeah sure

Annika: shivay u r here I am searching for u everywhere.

But she got a call before that.

Annika: shivay I should go jhanvi aunty is calling me

Shivay wanted to blast his anger but he reminded his challenge. He left from that place without saying anything.

Near bar counter

Shivay decided to drink something to cool himself. When he was ordering he saw Annika coming towards him but before that a beautiful girl sat next to him.

Hi mister, she said

Hello, I replied

R u mr.shivay singh oberoi, she asked curiously

I replied her with a smile

My name is dipti sharma, She introduced herself

I wanted to avoid her but seeing Annika I got some other plans. I began to smile at her .

Only a beautiful girl like u can have such a beautiful name, I slightly flirted with her to make annika jealous. I was pretty sure she heard us.

She kept her hands in my thighs and grinned at me.

U look handsome MR.oberoi especially your green eyes, they are so mesmerising, saying so she pecked my cheeks lightly. That was when I noticed tears brimming in annika's eyes. She hurriedly left from that place.

I'm sorry ms. Sharma, gotta go I replied her and went searching for Annika. She was sitting in garden. Luckily there was no one around. I asked khanna to keep an eye as I don't want any disturbance.

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So guys do tell me your opinions. Please like and comment. Even a single good comment can encourage a writer to write more. But I am going to update next one if I only get 40 likes. I am really sorry about that.U know my policy right so want next update soon then comment and like bcoz I AM BAD NOT VERY BAD.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: angel_writer


u r wlcm dear...
i am happy that my comments made u happy...
😳😳


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