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Neha Maurya

@Neha_Maurya

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

hiii...so i read both the parts in one go..

part 1

very good start dear...loved it..

loved how anika want to stand on her legs with any support from shivaay other than emotional...

oh u introduced ASR...loved it..

n Anika impressed by him..

i just hope this ASR koi raita na phaila de..😆

n here the intro of our jalkukkda shivaay...it will be fun until there is no problem between shivika because of ASR...

part 2

shivaay broke one more phone...poor phone😆

our jealous shivaay...really will be fun to read..

n wow..shivaay romancing with his wife in this way...n his dream to kiss her crushed by ASR..

but really dear...i loved it..

looking forward...

n yah your hindi is good...

btw thnq dear for the pm😳

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Neha Maurya

@Neha_Maurya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

so read the 3rd part also...

really loved it...

n that line when shivaay said " I can say without Annika there is no Shivay."..really loved that line..

really loved how shivaay want to make their relationship more n more stronger...

n when i read that restaurant scene...i thought that may shivaay will do something which he will regret in future...but i am soo happy that he didn't do something like that...

n the challenge...gonna be fun..

loved it dear..

cont. soon...

n thnx fr the pm dear...😳

P.S.:i hv replied for part 1 n 2 on pg 6

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

awesome

I really loved om and Shivaay's conversation...

now jealousy track will begin

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jeness

@jeness

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Woah!

Jealous SSO is always a treat to watch or read.

I like it. Loving your take on this story.

Now Ms writer. Don't be so cruel😛, And keep it coming.

Well done

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: angel_writer
so read the 3rd part also...
really loved it...
n that line when shivaay said " I can say without Annika there is no Shivay."..really loved that line..
really loved how shivaay want to make their relationship more n more stronger...
n when i read that restaurant scene...i thought that may shivaay will do something which he will regret in future...but i am soo happy that he didn't do something like that...
n the challenge...gonna be fun..

loved it dear..
cont. soon...
n thnx fr the pm dear...😳

P.S.:i hv replied for part 1 n 2 on pg 6

angel writer i don't know how to thank u. i am seriously very happy 😃. it is the longest comment i ever got for this story.

you analysed the parts very well 👏. your words encourage amateur writers like me to write more. thanks for liking my hindi.

i'm bit a emotional so if blabbered too much sry and once again a very big thank you for your words.😊😊

Edited by chashi - 8 years ago

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
A challenge...interesting...

thanks 😊

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome
I really loved om and Shivaay's conversation...
now jealousy track will begin

thanks 😊😊

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jeness
Woah!
Jealous SSO is always a treat to watch or read.
I like it. Loving your take on this story.
Now Ms writer. Don't be so cruel😛, And keep it coming.
Well done