The Perfect Reunion :Mr & Mrs.SSO Shivika DS (19/04/17) updtd! - Page 12

AWWW...this part is so cute n romantic...
just loved it...

Too good.. Shivay might just loose all the control around her in a few days

lol the happy holi baiya in the end killed me

Superbbb!!👏 Coincidentally I was listening to O Jaana while reading it and the song just made it more perfect!❤️

Good one. Shivika are adorbs❤️

Lovely os
shivika romance hayeee

I loved it!!!!!! ❤️ Like, I really loved it.
The entire time I was smiling like an idiot and now while typing this, my cheeks are hurting.

It was short and sweet, but very romantic and cute. 😳 The mini bed scene in the beginning was amazing!! I had butterflies in my tummy while reading that and couldn't stop blushing!!! 😳

Then the way Rudra entered with Om was one of my favorite scenes. 😆 😆 I could so imagine this happening in the actual show, actually it felt nothing, but real. Then Rudra making fun of Om because of Chulbul just took it a notch higher. 😆

Lastly, the ending was just fabulously romantic. 😳 It was the perfect ending.

Would love read a continuation. But anyways, it was really good!!!! 👏

Amazing...

Originally posted by: anushka.0506

Superbbb!!👏Coincidentally I was listening to O Jaana while reading it and the song just made it more perfect!❤️

I don't know why the hell was I blushing the whole time!😆😆

Shivaay sleeping tightly by holding her waist and missing her in the morning and also making her wear those kangans are some of the scenes I really wanna see in the show! Nevertheless, reading your OS gave me the same feeling, felt like I was reading the WU of some episode!

Anddd the best part was Happy Holi Bhaiyya🤣

Hey tysm 😆
The best part of writing is comments.
Thank you so much for writing good long comments for me!!!
Love ❤️

Originally posted by: jeness

<font color="#990000">Good one. Shivika are adorbs❤️</font>

<font color="#990000">Their cute antics are always adorable .</font>

<font color="#990000">Maybe you can add confrontation/confession or something like that .</font>

<font color="#990000">CVs have missed out a lot of things. They just pulled it to the conclusion leaving the best part behind. So yeah, a little something would do great to fill that gap.</font>

<font color="#990000">Well, Its just sort of idea. You might have already weaved better than this, given the fact you are one of the amazing writer here.</font>

<font color="#990000">Cheers😊 </font>

Ya ty dear!
About the confession part I haven't written it as such!
I don't know I feel Shivaay saying I love you wierd.
It would be more like..."please don't go, I'll die, I can't live without you" kind...