Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144

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Guesswhat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#731

It was a wonderful updat ... yeah no problem with not getting them married... it was beautiful your way ... give the next update very soon ... please update faster till Anika wakes up .. after that it is ok iTunes slow down

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llakshmisree

@llakshmisree

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Posted: 8 years ago

#732

Amazing update.Emotional as well as heart touching.I think I will be as anxious as Shivaay till next update.

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_fati_

@_fati_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#733

Carpe please please please please please please don't let her die after giving so much hope. I'll be crying then 😭 and I know u will not let her die and when this will happen I am gonna thaaank you loads and one day if I'll meet u somewhere in the world I'll give u a tightest bear hug and gonna tell u how AHMAZING writer you are, u have an wonderful ability to hook your readers till last and last. U are exceptionally a great writer ❤️

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#734

Firstly, thanks Anu for posting 2 updates in the week.

I loved this update. I felt happy and sad at the same time. Your story always has both of these emotions equally. Loved the way Annika explained her situation with reference to Sahil.

I loved the conversation between Shivaay & Annika on the hospital bed. Its really heart breaking when you see them talking about their future when there is an every equal chance of that not happening. If it was so bad for a reader, I can understand the feelings that both of them might be going through laying on the bed in a hospital not sure about the next morning. Yet Shivaay gave her a glimpse into their future together and that might have actually have an impact during her surgery. She really could think of all those moments she wants to have with Shivaay in future and may be that will make her resolve even more to fight for them.

And that little first kiss in the end, it was both beautiful and heart breaking. Annika was worried, what if she never makes it ??? She had to have their moment right ? But Shivaay is more confident that she would return for him, for them.

Waiting for the next update !!! An emotional one .

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KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#735

I loved every single thing about this update and my most favourite part was the night when they discussed about their future, a future they are not sure they have to spend together.
Loved the update.
Waiting for next update impatiently.
Pl update as soon as you have time.

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real12

@real12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#736

It was sad, yet beautiful ❤️. Your Shivaay gives major #boyfriendgoals. Its not about finding a perfect partner, its all about finding an imperfect who is perfect just for you. The way Shivaay is ready to change his lifestyle for Annika is just aww. The person who never believed in love and marriages is now talking about getting married and I can't help but cry *tears of happiness*. ShivIka talking about their future was plainly beautiful. Can't wait for the next update 😆

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Taaniii

@Taaniii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#737

Amazing update...very emotional.. please. update soon

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#738

Beautifully written.

Loved each and every part of the story.

Darn it...you made me cry.

Would love to see. ..the wedding and fights.

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pri12

@pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#739

Superb...

I loved their talk in the hospital bed ..

Shivay is being strong for both of them

I know their love will conquer everything..

I want them to win this battle ..

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

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Posted: 8 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: rohnit_ruhi
Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
Handsdown ... How on earth you could manage to write such amazing stuff... I m mesmerized with ur writing... God it all looked so effortlessly brilliant.. It was dreamy... Can't describe how much I loved it & it brought me sweet tears of joy, happiness & sorrow all at once...
Ok I choose it, after reading so many ff, ss etc etc... On this forum this was my favourite chapter of watever I have ever read till date & believe me it's not at al flattery...
Throughout the chapter was brilliant can't choose anything Favourite as everything is my favourite... But thoda sa zada that shivika's bed convo. 😉 ...
N u r such a sweetheart to update this so early...muaah...
Plzz dear now this tym too update soon... I'll be eagerly waiting for next update :)
P.s:- this was the best 😉 👏

Yaay!! This is my favorite chapter too😳

And you made my day by saying that this is you fav chapter on the forum..Thank you!!!!

I think the bed convo is special because it has that underlying sadness in it..glad you liked it😊