#Shivika.... a jouney from MU to LOVE (part 13 on page 18)(19/10/17)

It's my 1st work on #Shivika...It was posted on fan friction forum & so I wasn't getting proper responce...so I'm posting it here so that I can know how is it???
It's based on the Shivika confrontation on Shivaay's MU 4
regarding Daksh...but in my style...so plz give it a try & let me know hw's it...I mean hit the like & comment button...
So here it goes...
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As Anni came from the Blue Bliss
Resort & Shivaay Left the hall all
angry knowing Anni tried to spy
on Tia Annika followed him with
full 'Josh' & reached their
room...As soon as he sensed her
he came back to his so called
"BAGADBILLA"/"TAADIBAAZ"
avtar & started shouting on
her...
S: How DARE YOU ANNIKA TO
DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT?????
HOW CAN U STOP SOOO LOW
THAT U STARTED FOLLOWING
HER THAT TO WITHOUT NO
REASON???
A: NOOO REASON???? I had a
valid reason to follow/spy her
Shivaay...She's already married
& cheating on YOU with another
guy...
S: OHHH REALLYYY????NOW U
WILL TELL ME THAT SHE IS
CHEATING ME WHO BEATRAYED
ME HERSELF WITH SOMEONE
ELSE???
A: WHATTT???WHEN i CHEATED U
& WITH WHOM???
S: JUST CHUCK IT...TELL ME...do
U have any proof regarding
that...that Tia is cheating on me
with Another Guy?(turning his
head to some other side)
A: Yes I hv...(in my #FF they
clicked some pics of her with
Robin but couldn't see his face
& when she found to be spied
by AniOmRu she md Him run
away hiding behind a waiter &
when OmRU tried to chase him
he pushed a pussing guy in their
way so no Robin's death & no
Tia revenge drama here)
thn tried to show him her phone
but found it to be lost...& in this
searching process he lost his
temper & broke out 4 the 2nd
time...
S: Couldn't find it write????
A:I guess I lost it Shivaay...
S: I think U didn't lost it...
A: did U find my cell
somewhere????
S: me& Ur phone???No...actually
I guess no one can have...cause
I fill U didn't have any proof so
now to trap me Ur making this
cooking this fake story of
stealing...I guess U r forgetting
my name...I'm SHIVAAY SINGH
OBEROI...U can't trap me like
this innocent face of urs
always...
A: What the hell U mean by
cooking fake stories Shivaay????&
What do U mean by Trapping
U?????that too again...I guess U
have lost it Shiv...I can't make
head or tail out of Ur lines
Shiv...
S: Ohhh!!!!!so now U would say
that u r right & I'm wrong...U
know what I could have fallen
For ur words If I won't know the
real you...I could have fallen for
Ur Innocense...BUT IT'S NOT
POSSIBLE NOW MISS ANNIKA...
[ANNI was shocked 2 hear Ms.
Annika that to From her own
Husband & then he started
again]don't be Shocked to hear
Ms. Annika Annika cause I
DON'T ACCEPT U AS MY WIFE &
WON'T DO THAT EVER IN MY
WORST NIGHTMARE...CAUSE A
CHARECHTERLESS GIRL WHO
CAN SLEEP WITH ANY RANDOM
GUY JUST 4 15 LACKS[ hearing
this Anni raised her hand to slap
Shivaay bt he hold it so tight
that Anni winced in pain]DON'T
U DARE ANNIKA...D.O.N.T Y.O.U
DAAAREEE...& U KOW WHAT
DON'T HAVE RIGHT TO BE MY
WIFE & TO POINT HER FINGER
ON A PURE HEARTED INNOCENT
GIRL LIKE TIA SAYING HER
CHARECTERLESS...LOOK AT UR
OWN FIRST THEN SAY ABOUT
OTHERS...
A: WHATTT THE HELL R U SAYING
SHIVAAY???DO U EVEN KNOW
THAT U CALLED ME A
P***TIT**E??
S: YEAH I KNOW & i MEAN IT...&
IF u CAN dO THIS THEN WHAT
MISTKE HAVE I DONE TO SHOW
U THE MIRROR...DIDN"T U SLEPT
WITH DAKSH THAT DAY AT HIS
ROOM???
A: Daksh????Who told U
Shivaay????
S: DAksh himself...
A: & U trusted him???
S: YES I DID???SHOULDN'T I???
afterall U R a middle class girl
with no class,status & money
problem...& 15 Lacks is really A
big deal for U...
[Anni was HURT< felling guilt
that she fell for a guy who can
think that cheap of HER...even
can call her a P****ti***e so
casually & can justify his words
too...She was ashemed of her
whole being that SHe took
PHERAS with a guy who doesn't
have minimum respect to
her...she broke down completely
from inside but hiding her
fillings as always & holding HER
HEAD HIGH she spoke]
A: Really Shivaay???? I used to
think that U r a GREAT BUSINESS
MAN & A INTELLIGENT PERSONT
WHO USES HIS BRAIN ALWAYS IN
A PROPER WAY & CAN FIGURE
OUT THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN
REAL & FAKE AT HIS OWN...BUT
U PROVED ME WRONG TODAY...
{in this time Shivaay tried to say
something but Anni stpped her
wshwing her palm with full
attitude]
I'M NOT DONE YET
SHIVAAY...IT'S MY TURN...U
HAVE SAIED WAY TOO MUCH
ALREADY & I HAD ENOUGH OF
UR BRAINLESS NONSCENCE TILL
NOW...NOW I"LL SAY & U WILL
HEAR...SO MR. SHIVAAY SINGH
OBEROI JUST ANSWER A SIMPLE
QUESTION...HOW MUCH
AMOUNT ONE CAN FILL IN A
BLANK CHEQUE...I GUESS TOO
MANY THAT CAN BE MUCH
MORE EXPENSIVE THAN 15
LACKS RIGHT?????
S: [being totally clueless of her
attitude & what she was
saying...hesitating a bit]
YEESSS...SOOO?????
A: & I FILL U DON'T HAVE A
SHORT TIME MEMORY LOSS
PROBLEM OR SOMETHING
R8?????[FROWNING A LIL]
S: DEFINETLY NOOOTTT...[IN
FULL ANGER&ATTITUDE]
A: THEN REMEMBER THAT U
GAVE ME A BLANK CHEQUE
ONCE TO BUY ME AFTER
MAKING ME HOMELESS...WHEN I
DIDN'T ACCEPT UR MONEY THAT
TIME THEN WHY NOW????JUST
THINK...
[by this words of Anni
something stuck on Shivaay's
useless brain & he looked at
Anni in a helpless way like some
has taken back a chocolate from
a child's hand...but couldn't
utter a word]
A: JUST TELL ME SHIVVAY
COULDN'T I?????BUT I DIDN'T...&
WHEN i COULD EARN THAT
MUCH THAT DAY THEN WHY I
DIDN'T????DIDN'T U THINK IT
FOR ONCE ATLIST????& NOW
OUT OF NOWHERE WHY SHOULD
I SLEEP WITH HIM????
S: THEN THOSE PAPERS????HE
SHOWED ME A CONTRACT PAPER
OF 15 LACKS...[being as stupid
as him...actually I don't have
any word to describe his
stupidity]
A: WHICH DAY SHIVAAY???
S: THE DAY I PREPONED MY
MARRIAGE...
A: THAT WAS A LOAN PAPER
WHICH I TOOK FROM BANK BY
SHAKTI UNCLE'S REFFERENCE...U
COULD HAVE KNOWN IT BY
CHECKING PAPERS BUT U
DIDN'T...
[Shivaay nodded negative like a
kid with teary eyes which was
expressing his shock,disbelief
altogether hearing about loan]
A: & IF NOT POSSIBLE THEN ASK
UNCLE URSELF ONLY...HE WON'T
LIE TO U FOR ME OFCOURSE...
S: [then being totally stupid
again] I SAW U SETTING HIS
BEDSHEET WHILE HE WAS
WEARING SHIRT THAT
MORNING...
A: U SAW ME THERE AS I SLEPT
IN HIS ROOM THAT NIGHT[Shiv
rolled his eyes trying to prove
him r8 but actually how much
dumb he was]BUT NOT WITH
DAKSH????
S: REALLY????THEN WITH
WHOM????DON'T TELL ME WITH
PRINKU AS SHE SAW SOME
COCKROACH IN HER ROOM...
A: WITH SOUMYA AS SHE SAW
SOME INTRUDER IN HER ROOM
THAT NIGHT & GETTING SCARED
SHE CALLED DAKSH & THEN HE
SHIFFTED TO HER ROOM & GAVE
HIM HIS & CALLED ME TO HELP
HER...INCASE U CAN'T TRUST
THIS MIDDLECLASS GIRL THEN
GO & ASK SOUMYA...
S: IF SO THEN WHY DIDN'T U
TELL ME...
A; I DON'T LIKE TO TAKE HELP A
PERSON WHO PAYS SOME1 FOR
HELPING HIM BY HER PURE
INNOCENT WOULD WIFE...
S: WHAT????WHEN I DID SO????
A: UR SANGEET DAY
ONLY...WHEN I CAME TO U ASK
FOR THE MONEY U PAID TO ME
BY TIA...
S: I GAVE IT TO U AS TIA SAID
THAT SHE INVITED FEW MORE TO
THE EVENT & uU DIDN'T HAVE
ANY IDEA SO U WOULD NEED
SOME EXTRA CASH...& IF SO
COULDN'T U ASKED ME
REASON????
A: I DID SHIVAAY BUT U ONLY
DENIED TO TELL ME...
S: CAUSE I NEVER EXPECTED THIS
KIND OF MU...BUT TRUST ME I
HADN'T SUCH INTENTION...
A: OK...FINE...THAT DAY MAY BE
IT WASN'T UR FAULT BUT 2D U
HURT ME...U SMASHED MY
HEART WHICH DEVELOPED A
FELLINGS 4 U...BUT I FORGOT
THAT I'M GIVING IT TO A
WRONG PERSON...[Shivaay was
shocked to d core hearing this
but couldn't utter a word...in
guilt...he felt some1 has stabbed
his heart thousand times with a
knife & it was bleeding]...
S: R U SERIOUS ANNIKA?????
A: IT'S NONE OF UR BUSINESS
NOW MR.SHIVAAY SINGH
OBEROI...I FELL 4 U ONCE...BUT
NOW I'M REALISING WHAT A
GREAT BLUNDER WAS MADE
ME...I FELL IN LOVE WITH A GUY
WHO DOSEN'T EVEN HESITATE
TO CALL ME A
P****TIT**E...ACTUALLY WHY
I'M SAYING ABOUT
HESITATION??????YOU SAID IT
QUITE BRIEFLY IN A PROUD WAY
AS IF U HAVE CAUGHT A B*****
THIEF RED HANDED...[now
Shivaay eyes got teared up fully
& after crossing the limit of
holding it back it bursted
breaking the sheild of the great
SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI's eyes &
he started shedding tears
silently...]
A: [now sobbing & due to the
pain, anger, agony &
helplessness she was
suprressing inside her, her voice
got choked a lil] & WHAT U
SAID????? I DON'T DESERVE TO
BE UR WIFE????U KNOW WHAT
THE REALITY IS...A J**K LIKE U
DOSEN'T DESERVE TO BE MY
HUSBAND...I KNOW I'M NOT A
WEALTHY PERSON LIKE YOU BUT
WHATEVER I HAVE I CAN
DEFINETLY HIGHER A LAWYER 2
FILE A DIVORCE...& IN CASE U
AIN'T FILLING WELL WITH IT U
CAN SEND THE PAPERS IN MY
HOUSE BY UR LAWYER I'LL SIGN
IT INSTANTLY...
[hearing this Shivaay felt like the
world of him stopped infront of
his eyes at once...He went totally
NUMB...BUT THEREFORE WITH
GREAT DIFICULTY COULD UTTER
JUST ONE THING WHITH A HUGE
SHOCK]
S: DIIIVORCEEE???
A: [turning to the open door she
said briefly mastering as much
strenth as she could in her she
replied] HAAN [& stromed out of
the room giving no chance to
speak to Shivaay]
Shivvay wanted to stop her.
wanted to plead her to stay back
at his mansion but couldn't
move a bit than where he
was...He was felling guity
regreting for his deeds towards
her...felt the pain thousand
times more than he has given
her in past by insulting her, not
trusting upon her, marring her
forecfully & more than
everything for disrespecting her
character, calling her a
P****TIT**E INDIRECTLY...
That's it 4 2d.. I know it was a
bit long but I have cleared
almost all the MU they were
having...& don't worry peeps I
won't let them break
apart...afterall they are my
FAVOURITE COUPLE #SHIVIKA
errr... & plese post a feedback
guys it'll encouraging me to
write...anything is welcome...4m
slipper to shoes.. 4m egg to
tomato... but chocolates &
Fuchka [bengali version of
golgappa] are my favourite
...sighing off today...tata...
PRI...
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wow i wish gul mata had read your story then itna rita nahin phelati

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow i wish gul mata had read your story then itna rita nahin phelati[DIV]please do continue[/DIV][DIV]bye sumi[/DIV]

LOL...true...kash CV's hum logo ki stoties parte...& I'm glad that U liked it...will post d next soon...

Originally posted by: lourel24

Nice one.

glad to know that U liked it...

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

[DIV]Amazing[/DIV][DIV]Loved it[=D>][/DIV][DIV]Shivay needs to regret his words and redeem his actions[/DIV][DIV]Continue soon[/DIV][DIV]Pm me when u update[:)][/DIV]

Glad to know that U liked it...& he would regret for sure...& would send pm...

Hey guys!!!!! It's the 2nd part of my #FF...Posting both the part together at same day as a treat to all my forum friends as it was my B'Day yesterday...& plz forgive my typos or grammatical mistake...
So here it goes...
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ANNIKA...
As soon as she stepped out of
his room she felt as a dam of
tears boke and the rivers flowed
from her eyes...all HIS
harsh,cruel was pricking her
brain,stabbing her heard...she
couldn't beleave what she heard
from HIM...how can HE think
sooo low of her??????how can
even HE think that she can do
something like...she can't even
think of doing such cheap act &
he was conveinced that she
could...was HE the same person
who shouted on ACP for
pointing finger on her
charachter???????was HE the
same person who called her his
FAMILY...was HE the same who
rushed to her house just to
protect her from her FAKE
stalker???????NOOO...not
possible...HOW????same person
can react in so many ways with
her only...the person used to
protect her from all kind of
insult started defaming her
HIMSELF???????WHY?????WHY this
things happens to her only??????
WHY God snatches her LOVED
ones from her all the time?????
YEAH...OFCOURSE she LOVED
HIM...she loved him when he
used get affected by her
words...WHEN he protected her
from the harsh word of Media &
ACD...she loved him when She
called her FAMILY...when he
took part in Ganapati Visarjan
only cz of her...when he
protected her from Tia's fake
theft accusion...when Tia tried
to say that she saved him from
murder case only for
money...when HE danced with
her going totally crazy on that
pool party...when HE slept on
her shoulder& then on her lap
in pain killer affect...WERE those
persons SHIVAAY?????then who's
THIS?????
NOOO...she CAN'T...CAN'T think
anymore...she broke down
completely...there she found
herself...SOMWHERE in some
dark desserted road...but the
darkness of the road couldn't
affect her...how can she get
affected with this darkness????
when all her INNER LIGHT WENT
OFF??????yeah...this darkness
was just nothing compared to
the DARKNESS of her inner
soul...she wasn't afraid of it
NOW...she couldn't feel
anything...she was felling sooo
alone...LONELY...yes she was
sooo A...LONEEE...she had
NONE in this vast world to think
about HER...CARE for HER...to
LOVE her...make her SMILE...with
this thought a FACE infront of
her eyes...it was of SHAHIL...yes
Shahil her lil brother...yes she
HAD someone beside her...with
whom she could share her
pain...her GRIEF...her
PROBLEMS...her
HAPPINESS...EVERYTHING...everyt
hing that a person can feel...&
being a little by age who always
ACTS as HER BIG BROTHER & try
to protect her always...Yes she
found her straonth back.. .. she
has to go back to OM to bring
her SHAHIL to herself. . & tried
to stand up again...& then she
felt a pain in her feet...she
found stone stuck on her
feet...when she pulled the stone
it started bleeding...then too she
managed to stamd up on her
feet again...but just taking a few
step she fell down hitting the
footpath by her head & fell
unconsous...but what she didn't
know was she was on the streat
just beside the Oberoi Art
Gallery...
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OM...
Here in his gallery He just
finisjed his new sclupture of a
beautifull girl & when for the
final time he checked it his eyes
popped out of his socket...not
trusting his eyes he pinched his
hand & then he was
SHOCKES...he couldn't belive
that the face of the new made
sculpture was of
HER...MISHA...the girl he met 2d
morning & THEN...as soon as the
event flashed before his eyes a
slight but bright enough smile
crept on his lips...the same lips
which touched hers when they
fell on floor...he shied on that
thought...& his cheeks went red
on thought of
HER...MISHA...cute name??????
nah?????just as her...& this
trance broke when one of his
intern called out...
Intern: ain't U coming??????
O: he looked at d watch & read
d time...it was 10:30 alrdy...
Yeah!!!!!U go...I'm cmmg...& will
lock d gallery myself...
then he looked back at the
sculpture again smiled & taking
keys(of his car&gallery) walked
out of the room...locking the
door behind he placed the keys
on his pocket & took out the car
keys & opened d door of his
black Audi "& drove out his
gallery...he was driving happily
when a female figure caught his
sight lying on footpath...he felt a
sudden pain & Annika face
flashed front of his eyes
suddenly...he couldn't get d
reason but stopped the car &
walked 2wards d figure...& the
view front of his blured in a sec
due to tears as he saw a blood
drenched Annika...he picked her
up on his arms & put her in d
passenger seat beside driver's
one & drove away 4 hospital
...on the way he called Shivaay...
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SHIVAAY...
it was almoast 30 mnts after
Annika left his room...but she
didn't came back...WHY???????
WHERE is SHE?????is she
fine...but to know about her
state he need to meet her...to
see her... he need to
APPOLOZISE her...yeah HE
would do it...when he can make
such a blunder he can appolzise
too...& HE WILL...with this
thought he rushed out of his
room ...asked every person of
OM & all the stuffes too...when
on of gaurds said she walked
away from OM...he took his car
keys & drove for Annika's
house...but for his disbelief he
found a big lock hanging on the
entrance...which meant Annika
didn't come here...THEN???????
where she can be???????that too
so late at night...he came back
to his car again...keeping his
head on the stearing wheel he
cried out again...
S: Where r u Annika??????plz
come back?????where I'll find U
now??????plz come back...WHERE
ARE YOU??????
he cried out loud pouring his
soul into it...when his phone
rang flashing Om's name...first
he thought to reject it but picked
it unwillingly...
S: Hel...
cutting him Om spoke woth a
croaked voice...
O: Co..come too C..CIITYY
Hoospitalll SHIIIVAAYY...
by this statement he got
startled...
S: Whaat happened Om???????
WHATTT?????
O: WO...wo
ANNI...ANNI...ANNIKA...
S: What happened to MY
ANNIKA OM????????????
O: She is in ICU. ...come
here...FAST...I'll explain
later...but come first mere
bhai...come first...
he disconnected crying...
S: He went numb...couldn't feel
his body...he got chocked...a
strong pain, a fear of losing
someone so close engulfed her
whole being...he couldn't bear it
any more. ..but somehow
gathering all the strenght he
could muster he drove to hsp. ...
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All for 2d. ..sorry for long one.
...& pardon me if I boared
U...but plz encourage me by
commenting...
& yeah Misha would be Om's
girl in my #FF...( 4 my CFF Misha
as she is a big fan of Kunal &
has hugeee crush on him so 4
her her name is Misha)...I'm considering Puja
Bhamra here...share ur view on
it too...
Tata...
Pri...
Next update after 20+ likes...

wow such a twist and cliff hanger

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow such a twist and cliff hanger[DIV]loved it[/DIV][DIV]how om found her and how anika found her strength back for saahil[/DIV][DIV]please do continue[/DIV][DIV]bye sumi[/DIV]

sooo glad that U loved it...

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