rikara ff loving u is not my fault part 7 @pg 15 13/4 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Loved it. Thanks for the PM



Thank u and my pleasure Ana...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ss1609

Hi anu..sumi here😉from ebp forum..i have read ur ashlok ffs..

I know dear

Good going..i read all the 4 chpts in a go just now..great plot dear.. thank u so much 👏.i waited for u to post atleast few chpts before i start reading..coz i know u end with a cliffhanger and i'll be like pulling my hairs out wondering what is going to happen next.🤣.and now again i'm doing the same😲..wondering what om wants to talk about..guess will have to wait for few more chpts to come.. oh god first time I am getting such a comment is it so intriguing? I doubt

Ps- story plot is very interesting..can u pls give us a long chpt😆 I want to be but my studies never allow me to write peacefully... But will try...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Going rocking dii...your dialogues are marvellous and my RiKara more...
i am honoured dear even I am waiting for Guari -Shivaay in the show though I think they aren't gonna share as good as a relation as in your ff...donno takkar ke hain na... I hope it will happen in the show too... After knowing all the truth may be he will help her to unite with om 😛 Why He called her?? I am waitng...wrong point to leave at... every story needs a suspense other wise what the fun...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Res
Let me watch few episodes of DBO...not watched a single till now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Res

Let me watch few episodes of DBO...not watched a single till now.




Lets watch dear shrenu is doing a great job in it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Part 5
'gauri...' I heard a whisper... I know he is reluctant to talk...
'gauri kumari sarma ' I corrected him..
'i want to see you... Can you came out of the room pls...'
'what?' I asked with a sudden shock... It was past midnight and he is asking me to came out of the room...
' I am waiting outside the gate... Plz gauri...' He disconnected the call...
What the hell? I didn't understand anything that's going on... The man who never wants to see my face, the man who think me as a characterless girl... He is the same man who married me... I drew my curtain aside ... I saw that man standing outside my hostel gate waiting for the same girl he hated...
I draped my dupatta around my neck and came out of my room...when I walked down the stairs I was unsure about the happenings... How can it possible... Gauri kumari sarma you are dreaming... He is not going to make peace with you...
'where are you going?' The middle aged security guard asked me...
'dada, I am just going for a walk... Plz let me go...'
'at this time '
Actually this is the best time for a walk... Walk with a ghost...' I said hiding my mischievous hind...
'Ghost...?'
'haaa dada he is waiting there...' I pointed my fingers towards the man standing outside...
'plz let me go...' Finally after so much efforts he opened the gate for me...
I kept my steps slowly..this was all a first for us... I want to know what's make him to call me at this hour if night...
'kya Mr omkara Singh oberoi...?' I asked straight looking into his eyes...
'lets walk...' He said and starts to walk without caring me...
Gauri , how dare he...? I shook my head and starts to walk along with him... We didn't talk anything... Maybe silence have more voice... I felt the cold wind touch my face... We walked together for a while under the moonlight without saying anything... I love this moment... Nothing is there... Calm and quite... I never thought I can shut my mouth this long... I smiled at my own thoughts...
'why are you smiling.?'
'nothing... ' I shook my head dismissing his quarry...
'everyone saying you are a good girl..' He said without looking at me...
'oh great! You are too fast to analyse the matters... Its only take 6long months the things get into your head...' I said... Ofcourse a little sarcasm in it...
'don't feel pity for me... I don't want it... I am the one who refuse to be broken,unappreciated,used or disrespected. I will handle myself in a way that no one can ever do those things to me...'
I said the little tears glistening in my eyes...


Hey guys I know this was a short update... Sorry...

I am felt so blessed to be here... I love to read your comments... Positive or negative everything will be accepted...so drop a comment plz... And tomorrow is again Monday and I need to get back to my studies.my internals are lined up for next week... Even though nothing will stop me to write the update will be irregular... Hope you all understand...

Thank u friends for accepting my story...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Nice update... excited to know why did omkara come to meet gauri!!! Waiting for next part... 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
as always superb
om gauri ke hostel tak aya wo bhi midni8 i love it
update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Nice update...👍🏼 That ghost wala part was funny...😆 Waiting for next part...And all the Best for ur internals...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
I loved this update as usual, but why do you end always in a cliff hanger. Just can't wait to read.more. plz update asap . thanks for the PM and yes Gauri's dialogue..

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