rikara ff loving u is not my fault part 7 @pg 15 13/4 - Page 10

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ehmmbhluvr thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
shrt sweet simple silence yet a beginning f a strng bond..luvd d story😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
amazing as always. continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: dazzles



Are flattering me with your words... 😆


u deserve it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzles



Ofcourse love doesn't guarantee you anything... It was all a need of circumstances...

Thank u di for again the long comments


it was absolutely my pleasure Nu😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
superb update...
A roller coaster ride with surprises & strength...
well written NU👏👏

m proud of u



Om breaks down completely...
guari cant see him like this
& rushes to him to support him.. but realises as she is no one to him she stops...

Gauri making him realise how much lucky he is & d one he has lost was not his deserving...
Gauri gives Om water to drink.. she was sure he would throw it but surprise surprise Om drank it...
Gauri lives d room.. Anika watches it quietly..

Gauri went to her room.. she wanted to cry & ask god why Om was sent for her..
dear girl.. there is some hidden motive of god..
wait to see what exactly it is & wat good it will do to u & him...

Gauri wants her mother safe & by her side..
but she doesnt..
Gauri feels it is best as she herself not living at her in laws would hurt her mom more...

She remembers her start of life as Mrs Oberoi where Om dint except her...
But Shivay supporting her...

Who called her???
Omkara????
y??
calling her back home???

update soon
thnks 4 pm...

reading next update now...
sorry for late comments

& no probs dear..
i understand...
i myself make making spelling errors daily😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
awesome surprising update
was so surprised to see another update so fast when i couldnt even read d previous one..
but this update had another surprise with rikara alone...
well written Nu👏👏👏


Omg its past midnight already..
om calling Gauri outside d room as he was standing outside d gate...

Gauri shocked as Om dint want to see her face & now he wants to meet her at midnight..
wats up with him??

watchman stopping gauri & asking where is she going at this time..
Gauri at her mischievous mood...
walk with a ghost... seriously 🤣

after much efforts Gauri went there...
Gauri wanted to know what happened...
Omkara suggests for a walk...

haye they walk silently in moonlight...
so romantic.. hope they would hold each other soon...

haha gauri quiet for so long...
finally they start talking after omkara inquires why was gauri laughing...
but thats so rude.. cant she laugh whenever she wants... 😡


want to read more..
plz continue soon
thnks 4 pm...

i suggestion as weekdays r hectic for u u can give updates on weekends na...




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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 6

' I never thought you will grow like this... I read today's business article... They all are praising you' He said without looking at me... I remembered a small column news article about me... The new business women in town... I shook my heads...

'what else you thought, I will cry all over my life...' I asked

' no I never thought you will came out of that small village...'

'i am not a fool to cry over what happens in my past...'i said warping my dupatta over my shoulder... It was too cold... And this man near me is not realizing it...

'want kulfi...?' I asked excitedly...

'what?' I saw the weird expression in his face. ...

'hmmm kulfi... ' I pointed my fingers towards the kulfi vendor... Who is closing his shop... I ran towards him and buy two for us... I extended one towards him... For my outmost surprise he took it from me...

'lets go back... Its too late...' He said while having his kulfi... I smiled inwardly the way he looking at it like an alien species ...
The return walk was almost in silence... I felt the equations are changing... Ofcourse from an angry man to a soft spoken one...
We stopped on our tracks seeing my hostel gate... I looked at him.. And he at my eyes...

' why are you still wearing this sindoor?' He asked looking at my forehead...

'it was my belief... And you can't stop me from that...' I walked towards the gate...
I felt his eyes on me... I didn't turned back... Even though I want to see him once again... But no...

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I lay down on my bed looking at the moon through my window... I am still unsure about my future...I remembered the late night walk... No anger... Is there any special feel... There is a softness that able to outstand every other feelings... I smiled like an idiot... Gauri kumari sarma was an idiot... Not anymore... I turned the other side and closed my eyes for a dreamful sleep...

I opened my eyes for a not so brightful day... I drew the curtain aside and looked at the sky... It was too cloudy today... The rain is going to poured soon... I love rain... Especially the soft drizzles... Walking on the empty roads opening your arms widely to absorb the drops... I smiled at my thoughts...

' Gauri kumari Sarma you have no time to waste... Plz get up dear...'
I get down the bed... Before I headed towards the washroom... I heard a hard knock on my door... I looked at the clock...

'already I am getting late... Now who is that?'
I opened the door to see the host matron is standing outside...

'good morning.' I wished her

'very good morning gauri... This letter came yesterday... I forget to give you yesterday itself...'

I looked at the envelope confused...

'its ok mam... ' I take it from her... I waited her to go to open the piece of paper... I closed the door and with a trembling hand I opened it ...


Guys sorry not replying for your comments and thank u for waiting... I am caught up with my internals... Now busy with my sports and arts meet...

Pls drop a comment writing it from my busy schedule
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
sweet cute but a chotu update...nd u left hanging...whose letter? whats d cntnt?...pls do update soon..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Superb update Nu😃
short & sweet 😳😳
well written 👏👏


Omkara praising Gauri...
nice talk between d two..
so now atleast they r on talking terms...
being friendly & open...

Gauri now a business women...
she still wears Sindoor.. she has faith in it...
Omkara surprised...
but dint say anything...

Gauri remembers last night...
sky is cloudy.. Gauri waiting for rain.. she loves rain..
wow...

Gauri gets up for d day & goes to get ready ..

a letter comes for Gauri...
Gauri gets scared on seeing it..
wat is there in it??
a letter from Kali Thakur?? her mother?? court??? divorce papers from Omkara????

my mind is running...
plz udpate soon
so my mind can rest...😆😆

thnks 4 pm..
hope ur xams gng well??
enjoyed holi??

Edited by coolhi1988 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely but why did u end it in a cliff hanger...😭 Anyways thanks for the pm

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