rikara ff loving u is not my fault part 7 @pg 15 13/4

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

thts scary... anyways lovely update.

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smrithy14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

it was good
please update next part

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annniiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

read the 3 part in one go, it was brilliantly written. loved it. continue soon

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: dazzles

Oh thank u di...
I didn't noticed it 😆

Need to say a great journey

My Pleasure dear...
wen i had turned dazzlers i dint even know abt this prmotions or this membership status... 😆

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: dazzles

Don't you know how much I love your comments...

The long long comments...
Thank u di for making it special always
And thank u for the correction... You know na I am too bad I hindi

i know dear...
My Pleasure..
Dear ur story r so good i hv to comment & read it when i m completely free so i can give detailed comments to u...

i know tabhi toh correct kia😆

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Wow wow wow wow Nu..
wonderful...

Guari entering OM ,
priyu greets her so emotionally..
loved their bonding...

Gauri starts to talk with Omkara
but omkara being silent, calm & doing his packing to leave...
Gauri starting her Gauri kumari Sharma mode...
Omg she broke alcohol bottle...
getting cold response she goes but before that she told him about his brothers..
i think this will work for Omkara...

Jhanvi meeting Gauri.. nice words by Jhanvi..👏
Love is not something you think... It didn't guarantee anything in life... You may lose everything ,even yourself

Gauri's reply nice...

She wants to hate mkara but cant..
She cant forgive him..

But now wat.. Omkara broke down..??? 😲😲

continue soon
thnks 4 d pm
& yes link was not working😆

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Prachi.....

@Prachi....20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

I gone through all the parts...ur story is awesome and nicely written... Waiting for next part...And ha pm me also...I have send you a buddy request...