rikara ff loving u is not my fault part 7 @pg 15 13/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahira_khan

Hey!! Nice ff... continue soon...


BTW...What's you name??



Thank u...

I am Anu...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveangel94

Nice story

Please write more



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

interesting

continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
I walked through the corridor. Being an owner of your own enterprise was much difficult but it give me self pride that nothing else can give... I saw anikka Bhabhi is sitting inside the boutique... Probably waiting for me to arrive... I pushed the glass door and walked straight to her... Literally ran towards her... I hugged her...
'seems like gauri kumari Sharma is too busy with her new life...' She said... I know she is trying to lighten the mood that arising the moment she see me...
'how are you Bhabhi...?' I asked while keeping my bag on the table...
'not so fine gauri...' She said and starts to looking at my new design...
'this was nice... You are doing a great job...' She said
'how is om...?' I hate to asking about him...
' His parents divorced...' She said blankly... I don't know what to ask next... I don't know if I need to know anything else about him... Who is he to me..? Of course he is the one who fight with that Thakur and he almost risked his life to save me...but other than that he is no one to me and he hates me...
'gauri...' Anika Bhabhi shook me from my thoughts...
I smiled at her...
'may I pack this for you ... ' I asked and take the floral grown ...
'no need gauri... This will nice on you...'
'just come to home once...om is going to shift from OM along with his mom...'
'roody...?' I asked... But I want to know more about om... Somewhere in my heart I felt a pain...
'he also... Everyone is devastated ... Especially shivay. He love his brothers so much... Anyway gauri I am leaving... I hope you will come... We are losing him...' She said and walked out of the room...
I felt my eyes turning moist... I saw the lonely picture he created... I saw the cunning smile of Svetlana...
I closed my eyes and a drop of tear fall down through my cheeks...
I sat down on the chair feeling nothing in my heart... Again kali Thakur is starts to haunting me ... The day I nearly get killed... The day I hang on to him for my life,for my sanity... And the day those people put me as a characterless girl... The day everyone blamed me... The day he put his warm blood in my forehead... The day he carry me in his hands... The day a new gauri born in me...
I wiped my tears and look back to my new design hoping that I can able find some peace... But now he is one who bothering me...
Why you done that Om...? It is better you to leave me there... It is far more better you to let me die... But no you saved me even to face more ... Why you still hold the hatred towards me..? I never asked me to marry me... Marriage.! Is it a marriage... It was a need of circumstances... But... Loving you is not my fault om...


Guys what is your response to this part...
I am excited to hear from you all..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome updates dear
Well written
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update soon!!!

And I need a pm too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice dear... Curious abt rikara meeting.. Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part1 is amazing dear...loving Gauri and Shivaay together...would be reading the next one soon...its really amazing...😃

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