30 Kisses | Collaboration OS Series [xv updated 6/1] - Page 6

Originally posted by: twerping

Sighhh! Anu, I shall begin with the old cliche...That was stunningly beautiful. What you wrote was so beautiful that it probably broke my heart a bit even as it filled me with a blissful sense of fulfilment. Your writing has wonderfully portrayed the union of two tortured souls, battered and bruised by life and destiny, who have found solace and comfort in the most unlikeliest of places. Loved your way of describing the heaven they have built for themselves. Especially enjoyed the tiny details that give us insight into the lived realities of the main characters. Also, the family dinner party description is going to stay with me for a while for its cuteness and warmth.

Loved it.

Innika, I am loving you for bringing us together for this series. 🤗

Originally posted by: richa1792

Anu, this was amazing.

The makers have totally forgotten about PriVeer and I thank you for giving me my fix.

Your story made sense because Ranveer's sister was finally okay. To be honest, I don't see them getting together as long as they have his sisyer's accident in between them. Because no matter how strong the attraction, this is one elephant that they can't ignore. It was really sweet how Nisha was now closer to Prinku than Ranveer himself. The woman for whom he had chosen a path of destruction and revenge, the same woman was now more of a sister to his wife than him. That, if nothing, shows how far both of them have come in their life. The way Prinku saved the moments through snapshots shows how some wounds never heal. The way you are brough up leaves a deep impact on your psyche. But thank you so much for finally giving her the kind of love that she deserved. She had a terrible example set before her in regards to marriage. And although she must have known that her family equation must be the exception and not the rule, living it and believing it are two different matters entirely. I just cannot imagine how happy she must be, how pleasantly surprised that this, this is how it is actually supposed to be.

This whole piece really warmed my heart. I can't wait to read more from you.

Love,
Richa.

P.S. My prompt is also a PriVeer pairing and after reading your story, let's just say that I am feeling way underconfident.

Originally posted by: A.C.

Anu, this was bloody brilliant!

Honestly, I don't know what I loved more. The details of their new life, the contentment and happiness that comes with it, the cuteness of the situation and the Oberoi princess or the warmth that this story left me with! I loved it all! However, the one fact I have to thank you for is for using the accident part in this. Because, really, I don't have any hopes with the makers even addressing this situation much less resolving it. So thank you for doing both and that too in a way that made practical logical sense without an ounce of melodrama.

Really, this OS both warmed me as well as broke my heart a little. The fact that Prinku continues to hold on to the memories of the past makes absolute sense to me. The wounds and lessons of a lifetime cannot be so easily forgotten, not even when you luckily end up with the one you are meant to be with. Some apprehensions forever stay within your heart.

Loved, loved, loved it!

Innika, if I haven't already said it, let me say it now: this was a freaking awesome idea and thank you so very much for making me a part of it!

Love,

A.C.

Originally posted by: bworm

@cck.anu...

Beautiful take on priveer.

Bahut din baad miley...show mein to yeh log hain ho eid ka chand.

Loved the storyline. ...how the past affected them...and how they moved from there to build their ashiyana

Both had a lot of baggage...and helped each other out to build their future.

❤️

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Awesome one shot...

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Aww so adorable

Originally posted by: napstermonster

BTW-- When Innika posted this, I will tell you honestly, I was actually a little hurt (okay... burningly jealous..happy? burningly jealous) that I wasn't asked to participate--- but honestly, right now, I'm really REALLY glad!! I can sit back with a coffee and enjoy these amazingly talented writers, and have the fun of anticipation and just wallowing in the work.

But AC... yeh kya kiya! What pressure, yaar! Now this is a high standard to set, sach mein!! But frankly, I know it already. I am looking forward to the others, and I know, from the roster, what gems will tumble out on this thread. So thank you, ladies, in advance. And good luck!!!