30 Kisses | Collaboration OS Series [xv updated 6/1] - Page 4

This is so interesting ❤️

AC soo beautifully written
Kuddos to you yaar.

A.C--what a challenging, fantastic entry to an amazingly conceived series! I loved every nuance, every moment, and your Shivaay and Anika are so true to your vision of them, from your stories, its an achievement to bring a taste of them --your personal interpretation of them-- to a one shot concept like this! I loved the inclusion of colors, the way the nightmares and the dreamscapes fluctuated, the dark to his light, the light to his dark ying yang balance!

Its hard to include these kinds of binaries into work that is, after all, fan fiction, and therefor to be accessible to everyone, readers and viewers and writers alike. So, letting the writing be beautiful without going into twee and pretentious territory is difficult. And you. You nail it. Everytime. Gorgeous. Congratulations...

BTW-- When Innika posted this, I will tell you honestly, I was actually a little hurt (okay... burningly jealous..happy? burningly jealous) that I wasn't asked to participate--- but honestly, right now, I'm really REALLY glad!! I can sit back with a coffee and enjoy these amazingly talented writers, and have the fun of anticipation and just wallowing in the work.

But AC... yeh kya kiya! What pressure, yaar! Now this is a high standard to set, sach mein!! But frankly, I know it already. I am looking forward to the others, and I know, from the roster, what gems will tumble out on this thread. So thank you, ladies, in advance. And good luck!!!

Ayesha what a beautiful OS...a well blended kaleidoscope of colors, hues, shades that overlap and bleed into one another... so that even though Shivvay and Annika are at opposite ends...they are still connected and are still one. This was such a beautiful representation of emotions, absolute and abstract, I could feel their love, yet underrated and taste her hesitancy in dragging him into her nightmares. And I love how he challenges her view of him...represents that any lightness if his life is a mere reflection of her her presence in his life...and that she is his sun. So beautiful...i don't think i could ever have the words to do it justice. I am really excited for this thread...and so looking forward to the beautiful reads you lovely ladies will be putting out!!

Originally posted by: napstermonster

A.C--what a challenging, fantastic entry to an amazingly conceived series! I loved every nuance, every moment, and your Shivaay and Anika are so true to your vision of them, from your stories, its an achievement to bring a taste of them --your personal interpretation of them-- to a one shot concept like this! I loved the inclusion of colors, the way the nightmares and the dreamscapes fluctuated, the dark to his light, the light to his dark ying yang balance!

Its hard to include these kinds of binaries into work that is, after all, fan fiction, and therefor to be accessible to everyone, readers and viewers and writers alike. So, letting the writing be beautiful without going into twee and pretentious territory is difficult. And you. You nail it. Everytime. Gorgeous. Congratulations...

BTW-- When Innika posted this, I will tell you honestly, I was actually a little hurt (okay... burningly jealous..happy? burningly jealous) that I wasn't asked to participate--- but honestly, right now, I'm really REALLY glad!! I can sit back with a coffee and enjoy these amazingly talented writers, and have the fun of anticipation and just wallowing in the work.

But AC... yeh kya kiya! What pressure, yaar! Now this is a high standard to set, sach mein!! But frankly, I know it already. I am looking forward to the others, and I know, from the roster, what gems will tumble out on this thread. So thank you, ladies, in advance. And good luck!!!

So beautifully written.. The bond the relation the trust.amazing...

The love they both showed via these words are also amazing

amazing part I AC

30 shades of colors

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Navin...I too was surprised to not see your name there...but this is no excuse to not give us any new OS or stories!!😃</font>

totally agreed..Navin..please write more 😳