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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

This is fantastic...Shivay's explanation was so good.. Loved it...Now I am more excited for what more has to come😊 Update soon

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Rida Sadaqat

@ridz13sdqt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

This one is so beautiful.. I have goosebumps reading this..it is so beautiful.. it just instantly struck a chord.. The Shivika that you describe is every bit the Shivika that we will definitely see in the long run on our tv screens.. loved everything you wrote..the angst and the way Shivaay explained to Anika that he would want to know all the deepest darkest parts of her..cuz all of him loves all of her 😳 ❤️

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Piya

@Piya1199

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Thats a mindblowing piece of writing

In this story every hue echoed wid its neighbouring hues and this homogeneity made the already perfect 'shivika' couple bloom more perfectly.

The shades u brought out of this story is amazing

Pls keep writing

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

its soo beautiful...he explained her so well

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

such a beautiful piece of writing...just loved it to di core..the way shivaay explained her..was mindblowing...it just touched my heart..❤️

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Archana

@shalon

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Wow this is so amazing , you have a very creative way of writing ,can't wait for the next OS

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Priya Tilva

@asadzoya143

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Will read to these wonderful pieces on my free time. I Cant wait fro my exams to finish and read these incredible stories

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Ayesha, that was absolutely beautiful! Once again I am floored by the way you describe the intimate world of lovers. The theme of colour was wonderfully used to portray the way a couple builds their microcosmic paradise. That ease, that magnetic sense of awareness of the other as a being...that is something I have always cherished in your stories. Loved it!

Innika, awesome thread!

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