SHIVIKA OS - You Were Checking Me Out - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohh goddness now m waiting for the revenge
Exactly game on darling
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Will u just continue its awesome os really loved it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waowww ❤️. I was blushing the whole time while reading untill...


The ending 🤣🤣

Too good girl too good ... 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: thisissmansi

Amazing... Pls continue.. I want to read more of this...I want to see how shivaay will win


Who said he will?😉 i am firmly on team Anika but then if his win means an upper hand for Anika..then thats another case.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!!! what was that!!! It was amazing Pallavi. I loved it
This cannot be a OS - you are leaving SSO and us hanging here gurl 😉
Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome
You have to continue
Blushes and hysterical laughter...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was such a fun read! It made me laugh! You did a great job with this, and I love how their lines were color-coded. Poor Shivaay though! Ouch!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous...would love to se how he serves his revenge...cold!😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whoa, the sexual tension in this one was off the charts. Loved it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was damn damn good!!!
I simply loved this. Perfect!
I loved it how u expressed their feelings towards each other. A total different and amazing take on this scene.
I would love to read a sequel of this one shot. Please. His revenge!! EEE!!!! Thinking about it makes me go crazy...
Please do continue...this was such funn!!
Awesome work!👏👏

Love Sharmi

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