ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: NYCForever

intrigued for sure 👏but not a fan of this rohit character- kind of reminding me of daksh and everyone knows how much i hate that guy lol

Originally posted by: --Risha--

I guess we'll always hate any guy that dares to love Annika 😆

Hahhaha true but Love also means walking away when u should and I see this rohit doing exactly the opposite - interfering in her life etc

I don't think it's love, it's obsession but then I am also not from india and believe in moving on a lot more than harping behind someone 😉

Ok I have been following the story all day while at work and seriously I was on the train with tears in my eyes after chapter 6. I had to actually take off my glasses and wipe away my tears cause I could picture the whole scene in front of me. Anika and Sahil .. holding on to each other with their dear life... Trying to scramble together parts of their life that just got trampled... it's just horrid and inhumane and just nasty...

I'm going to go with a personal experience here. I have severe abandonment issues myself because I was abandoned by my father when I was only three months old. My mother tried to shield me from this for a long time but even she couldn't ebb away the bitterness that came with people's questions and stares... Over time he decided to come back and now we are a family..But to this date.. I do not trust my father. it's been more than 15 years and I still am not able to open up to him or love him. I sometimes feel that I myself am being selfish but everytime I want to take that step, I remember that pain and the fear just does not let me.

Annika has had it so much worse.. She was abandoned by her parents .. then he step-parents ( yeah it may not be their fault). But the feeling is still the same. It's like letting go of a child's hand in a dark room and asking them to make their own way to the light. The fear and helplessness pretty much chokes you until you claw your way into the light. And then when you find your way into the light, you hold on to it with your dear life.. And when someone new comes along and asks you to hold on to them and let them be your guide to the light.. you just... can't.. Becuase you know what it's like to be in the darkness alone and you DO NOT want to go back there.

I know my thoughts are really muddled up but that's how I'm feeling after reading Anika's background story. Because in some ways it's just so relatable. I know my pain is nowhere near close to hers but in some little way.. I can feel it.

After Part 6, I truly think her first priority should be self-preservation. This love and this man will kill her. Period. There are a lot of people sympathising and understanding Shivaay's anger but I don't. Yeah she didn't reveal her past to him because she felt humilliated by it. Who wants to share the story of how a man who was once her best friend proposed her for marriage but then took it back because she was an orphan? Who wants to share such a painful part of their life?She JUST started trusting Shivaay and she was still so skittish. Instead of making her feel protected and safe so she can reveal her vulnerabilities to him, he went and did the opposite. Shattered her trust on him AGAIN.

I understand.. Shivaay is flawed and is also afraid of his new feelings. But that DOES NOT give you the right to treat the other person like crap just because YOU ARE HURT. I can;t.. I'm sorry.. My blood is boiling from this Shivaay..Yes I know he didn't have a hand in the demolishment but he was also the reason they lost their house in the first place. When he made assumptions and stupid impulsive decisions and DID NOT SECURE THE ONE THING ANNIKA CALLED HER OWN...

And the fact that Annika accepted Rohit's proposal. At that point, she was a woman starved of love and support. And this guy, this best friend who she knew so well offered her the whole world on a platter. A name, a family, companionship, and support KNOWING HER BACKGROUND. Love would happen with time.. she may have thought then..

And now Part 7 happened. In all honesty, neither of the men are fit for Annika. Both lack backbones and do not know the first thing about dealing with Annika. Neither of them deserve her.

I basically want Annika to divorce Shivaay and get a restraining order from him and his mother included and start a new phase in her life with Sahil. Maybe the feminist in me is being biased towards Annika.. Maybe I'm having an off day.. but that is truly how I feel. I don't see how Annika can trust Shivaay again.. It seems downwright next to impossible for me.


I'm sorry if I offended you in any way or anyone else The last two parts just really got to me.

PART 6

Finally, Shivaay reacted, he ran to her, called her and wanted to meet her, finally!

Pinky obvisouly has lost it, I mean how could she stop that low, and if I am not wrong, then did she also not come from a middle class family? So what and why is she always boasting about NKK? 😡 Oh, she really makes me angry!

I LOVD RUDRA AND HIS OUT BURST!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS THE HIGHLIGHT!!!!!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Rudra shook with anger , his face red , as he watched the home they were joking in just an hour ago, reduced to rubble. Om saw how Rudra was lost in his fury, decided he had to do something first. That was when the tears broke out of Rudra, silent ravaging tears.

"Save us the pleasantries Bhaiya." Rudra shouted, "Today you crossed all the boundaries of decency. Today I am ashamed to call you my brother. I have heard how ruthless and cruel you can be, but today I have seen first hand! Why, Bhaiya ! Why do you have to be so cruel, when all Annika Bhabhi did was love you!? How is it possible to punish someone who loves you like this???!!"

Rudra was red faced and furious, the rage emanating from him shocked his brothers. Om stood in his way, his back facing Shivaay, as the eldest brother stood up in confused shock.

"I HATE YOU SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI!!!"
This was absolute perfection! The way you described Rudra's feelings was just perfect.
👏 👏 👏 My favorite part off all time in this SS. 😳

Finally Anika took a stand! She'll meet him in court!


PART 7

I loved the fact that you added something form Rohit's point of view. ❤️ If I didn't love Shivaay so much, I would have fallen in love with Rohit. He obviously regrets his mistake and wants to fix it.

I like that fact that Anika had someone else in he life before Shivaay. It make her seem more realistic in one sense.

Rohit clearly doesn't care of Shivaay's wealth and power and is willing to fight him for Anika as you have shown today. That was just beautiful!

Sivaay, you need to get your brain fixed first, come to terms with reality, feel guilty for punishing Anikka without a fault, and then start redeeming yourself!!!!!!!!!! 😡 because if you don't, it's going to be ROHIT ANKIA LE JAYENGE 😆 (I know horrible joke, but it is true)

And why is Shivaay actually upset with her? Is he jealous? Does he feel betrayed because she never told him of her past? Ohh, Shivaaay, you better have a good... no, valid reason for this behaviour!!!

Anyways, that was Amazing!!!!!!!!!! THREE POSTS IN A ROW !!!!!!!! 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

EAGERLY WAITING FOR SUNDAY TO COME! 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

Yeahhh...u updated...interesting confrontation...both love her in their own ways...enjoying this... different story...an insight to life for annika if she had someone to speak up for her...in her corner to say...rohit has his faults...who doesnt after all...

Oh so unfair...to leave us hanging like this until Sunday!

Fantastic updates. Looking forward to the next one.

awesome.superb update...with gripping intensity.oh Sunday plz come fast. 👏

ooohhh poor Shivay man